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Part 1

Giám khảo

Are you interested in news?

Thí sinh

Yeah, I interested in news because I, uh, often stayed with uh, on TV and it uh, for the most part, I get my new online and which is super convenient.

Giám khảo

How do you usually find news?

Thí sinh

Yes, umm, for the most part I get my News Online, which is super convenient when I, uh, don't stay home. Since I always have my phone with me, I can stay up on what's going on around the world in just a matter of seconds.

Giám khảo

Would you like to be a journalist?

Thí sinh

Yes, I would like to be a journalist because it's all for the community. The opportunity to explore various topics and see important information with the top of public. Enjoy writing and investigating story.

Giám khảo

Have you read the news this morning?

Thí sinh

No, not really in the mornings as I usually have a cup of coffee and surfing Internet because in the morning I need refills my head.

Giám khảo

Do you often talk with your friends about the news?

Thí sinh

Yes, I often talk with my friends about the news nowadays. We constantly bombarded with fake news and click bad headlight designers to grab our attention and we talked about fake news and we always try to frustrate.

Đánh giá

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Tổng: 6.0Trôi chảy và mạch lạc: 6.0Phát âm: 6.0Ngữ pháp: 5.5Từ vựng: 6.0

Part 1

Are you interested in news?

Điểm: 60.0

Gợi ý: Câu trả lời của bạn thiếu sự tự nhiên và có nhiều lỗi ngữ pháp, ví dụ như thiếu động từ 'am' trong 'I interested'. Bạn nên sử dụng câu trả lời ngắn gọn, rõ ràng và tránh lặp từ không cần thiết. Hãy chú ý đến cấu trúc câu và sử dụng từ vựng phù hợp.

Ví dụ: Yes, I am interested in news because I often watch it on TV, but mostly I get my news online since it is very convenient.

How do you usually find news?

Điểm: 75.0

Gợi ý: Bạn đã trả lời khá rõ ràng và có sử dụng liên từ để nối ý, tuy nhiên câu trả lời hơi dài và có nhiều từ thừa như 'umm', 'uh'. Bạn nên luyện tập nói tự nhiên hơn và tránh lặp từ không cần thiết.

Ví dụ: I usually find news online because it's very convenient. Since I always have my phone, I can quickly check what's happening around the world anytime.

Would you like to be a journalist?

Điểm: 55.0

Gợi ý: Câu trả lời của bạn thiếu sự mạch lạc và có nhiều lỗi ngữ pháp, ví dụ như 'see important information with the top of public' không rõ nghĩa. Bạn nên trả lời rõ ràng, có cấu trúc câu đầy đủ và sử dụng từ vựng chính xác hơn.

Ví dụ: Yes, I would like to be a journalist because it allows me to serve the community. I enjoy exploring different topics, writing stories, and investigating important issues for the public.

Have you read the news this morning?

Điểm: 50.0

Gợi ý: Câu trả lời của bạn có lỗi ngữ pháp và cách diễn đạt chưa tự nhiên, ví dụ 'refills my head' không đúng. Bạn nên sử dụng câu đơn giản, rõ ràng và tránh lỗi ngữ pháp.

Ví dụ: No, I haven't read the news this morning. Usually, I have a cup of coffee and browse the internet to wake up my mind.

Do you often talk with your friends about the news?

Điểm: 45.0

Gợi ý: Câu trả lời của bạn có nhiều lỗi ngữ pháp và từ vựng không chính xác, ví dụ 'click bad headlight designers' không rõ nghĩa. Bạn nên sử dụng từ vựng phù hợp và câu trả lời mạch lạc hơn.

Ví dụ: Yes, I often discuss the news with my friends. We are frequently exposed to fake news and misleading headlines, so we talk about how to identify and avoid them.

Ngữ pháp

Present tense issue

× Yeah, I interested in news because I, uh, often stayed with uh, on TV and it uh, for the most part, I get my new online and which is super convenient.

Yeah, I am interested in news because I, uh, often stay on TV and, for the most part, I get my news online which is super convenient.

The sentence incorrectly uses 'interested' without the auxiliary verb 'am' to form the present continuous tense. Also, 'stayed with uh, on TV' is awkward and incorrect; it should be 'stay on TV' to indicate habitual action. 'Get my new online' should be 'get my news online' for correct noun usage and article. The verb tense should be present to match the habitual action.

Present tense issue

× Yes, umm, for the most part I get my News Online, which is super convenient when I, uh, don't stay home.

Yes, umm, for the most part I get my news online, which is super convenient when I, uh, am not at home.

The phrase 'don't stay home' is awkward; the correct expression is 'am not at home' to indicate the present state. Also, 'News Online' should be lowercase 'news online' as it is not a proper noun.

Incorrect use of pronouns

× Since I always have my phone with me, I can stay up on what's going on around the world in just a matter of seconds.

Since I always have my phone with me, I can stay updated on what's going on around the world in just a matter of seconds.

The phrase 'stay up on' is incorrect; the correct expression is 'stay updated on' to convey keeping informed. This is a vocabulary and phrase usage issue rather than strict grammar.

Incorrect use of pronouns

× Yes, I would like to be a journalist because it's all for the community.

Yes, I would like to be a journalist because it's all about the community.

The phrase 'all for the community' is incorrect; the correct phrase is 'all about the community' to express dedication or focus. This is a prepositional phrase error.

Incorrect use of pronouns

× The opportunity to explore various topics and see important information with the top of public.

The opportunity to explore various topics and share important information with the public.

The phrase 'see important information with the top of public' is incorrect and unclear. It should be 'share important information with the public' to convey the intended meaning. This is a vocabulary and preposition misuse.

Sentence structure errors

× Enjoy writing and investigating story.

I enjoy writing and investigating stories.

The original sentence lacks a subject and uses 'story' in singular form without an article. Adding 'I' as the subject and pluralizing 'story' to 'stories' corrects the sentence structure and agreement.

Present tense issue

× No, not really in the mornings as I usually have a cup of coffee and surfing Internet because in the morning I need refills my head.

No, not really in the mornings as I usually have a cup of coffee and surf the Internet because in the morning I need to refresh my mind.

'Surfing Internet' should be 'surf the Internet' to use the base verb after 'and'. 'Refills my head' is incorrect; the correct phrase is 'refresh my mind'. Also, 'Internet' requires the definite article 'the'. These are verb form, article, and vocabulary errors.

Present tense issue

× Yes, I often talk with my friends about the news nowadays.

Yes, I often talk with my friends about the news nowadays.

This sentence is grammatically correct; no correction needed.

Sentence structure errors

× We constantly bombarded with fake news and click bad headlight designers to grab our attention and we talked about fake news and we always try to frustrate.

We are constantly bombarded with fake news and clickbait headlines designed to grab our attention. We talk about fake news and always try to avoid being misled.

The original sentence has multiple errors: missing auxiliary verb 'are' for passive voice, incorrect phrase 'click bad headlight designers' which should be 'clickbait headlines designed', inconsistent verb tenses ('talked' should be 'talk', 'try to frustrate' is unclear and should be 'try to avoid being misled'). The correction improves sentence structure, verb tense consistency, and vocabulary.

Từ vựng trọng tâm

BadSubstandard; Harmful; Unpleasant; Inauspicious; Severe
ImportantSignificant; Main; Powerful
InterestedAttentive; Concerned; Partisan
NewRecently developed; Novel; Different; Additional; Reinvigorated
VariousDiverse
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