News— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: 回答不够自然，表达不够清晰，句子结构混乱。建议用更自然的表达方式，避免重复，并且句子简洁明了。

Ví dụ: No, I am not very interested in news because it feels unrelated to my life. However, I do enjoy entertainment news sometimes because it's more fun.

Gợi ý: 回答中语法错误较多，表达不够连贯。建议使用连接词使句子更流畅，并且注意语法和词汇的准确性。

Ví dụ: I usually get news on my smartphone. Sometimes, I watch TikTok videos about celebrities or policies and share them with my friends.

Gợi ý: 回答中语法错误和用词不当较多，句子结构不完整。建议注意冠词和动词形式的使用，表达更准确。

Ví dụ: No, I don't want to be a journalist because it is very different from my major, and I am an introverted person. I don't think this job suits me.

Gợi ý: 表达不自然，语法错误明显。建议使用正确的时态和表达方式，句子简洁明了。

Ví dụ: No, I haven't read the news this morning because I was preparing for my oral health appointment and didn't have time.

Gợi ý: 回答中有语法错误和不完整的单词，表达不清晰。建议使用完整单词，注意语法，句子连贯。

Ví dụ: Yes, we often talk about interviews with stars or famous people, and we discuss them. I find these conversations very interesting.

× No, I think it's distant for my life and besides it's also boring for me so usually I like to do some entertainment news.

✓ No, I think it's distant from my life and besides it's also boring for me so usually I like to watch some entertainment news.

这里's distant for my life'中的介词用错了，应该用'distant from'表示'与...距离远'。另外，'do some entertainment news'表达不准确，应该用'watch some entertainment news'，因为新闻是观看的内容。

× No, I think it's distant for my life and besides it's also boring for me so usually I like to do some entertainment news.

✓ No, I think it's distant from my life and besides it's also boring for me so usually I like to watch some entertainment news.

'distant'后面应接介词'from'，表示'远离某物'，而不是'for'。

× I usually find news by my smartphone.

✓ I usually find news on my smartphone.

表示通过某种设备获取信息时，应该用介词'on'，而不是'by'。

× Sometimes I will watch Tiktok and I will send some video about the news for the star or the policy.

✓ Sometimes I watch TikTok and I send some videos about the news about stars or policies.

这里不需要用将来时态'will'，因为描述的是习惯动作，应该用一般现在时。此外，'send some video about the news for the star or the policy'表达不清，改为'send some videos about the news about stars or policies'更准确。

× No, I don't consider to be the journalist because it's very different from my major and I'm a introvert person.

✓ No, I don't consider being a journalist because it's very different from my major and I'm an introverted person.

'consider to be'用法错误，应该用'consider doing'或'consider being'。'the journalist'应改为'a journalist'，表示泛指。'a introvert person'前面冠词'a'应改为'an'，因为'introvert'以元音音素开头。

× No, I don't consider to be the journalist because it's very different from my major and I'm a introvert person.

✓ No, I don't consider being a journalist because it's very different from my major and I'm an introverted person.

动词'consider'后应接动名词形式'being'，而不是不定式'to be'。

× I think is not a job that fit for me.

✓ I think it is not a job that fits me.

句子缺少主语'it'。'fit for me'表达不自然，改为'fits me'更地道。

× I think is not a job that fit for me.

✓ I think it is not a job that fits me.

句子缺少主语'it'，导致结构不完整。

× Uh, no. This morning I prepare my oral health so I don't have time to read news.

✓ Uh, no. This morning I prepared my oral health so I didn't have time to read the news.

描述过去发生的动作，动词应使用过去式'prepared'和'didn't have'。此外，'read news'前应加定冠词'the'。

× Uh, no. This morning I prepare my oral health so I don't have time to read news.

✓ Uh, no. This morning I prepared my oral health so I didn't have time to read the news.

'news'前应加定冠词'the'，表示特指的新闻。

× Yeah, we also talk about some inter. Views like stars or a famous person.

✓ Yeah, we also talk about some interviews with stars or famous people.

'inter. Views'应为'interviews'。'talk about some interviews like stars or a famous person'表达不清，改为'talk about some interviews with stars or famous people'更准确。

× Yeah, we also talk about some inter. Views like stars or a famous person.

✓ Yeah, we also talk about some interviews with stars or famous people.

'a famous person'与'stars'搭配不协调，改为复数形式'people'更合适。

× And we also discuss about it.

✓ And we also discuss it.

动词'discuss'后不需要介词'about'，直接接宾语。