Part 1
Giám khảo
Are you interested in news?
Thí sinh
No, I'm not very interested in news, mainly because I think some journalists tend to be misunderstanding to the public. Also, a large amount of news doesn't correspond to the reality, which makes it hard for me to trust what I hear.
Giám khảo
How do you usually find news?
Thí sinh
Well, I often use social media platforms like Sina or Weibo because they provide real time updates and a wide variety of topics. Also, sometimes I find news through conversations with my friends or colleagues.
Giám khảo
Would you like to be a journalist?
Thí sinh
No, I wouldn't like to be a journalist. Although I think it's a fascinating job, it seems quite challenging because it requires a lot of traveling, which I find exhausting. Besides, the pressure to meet tight deadlines would be difficult for me to handle.
Giám khảo
Have you read the news this morning?
Thí sinh
No, I haven't read any news in the morning. Actually, I avoid reading the news mainly because I find it really boring and sometimes confusing. Moreover, there is so much fake information online that I prefer to get my updates from reliable sources.
Giám khảo
Do you often talk with your friends about the news?
Thí sinh
Well, it really depends on the type of news. If the news is interesting or funny, we enjoy talking about it because it can boost our mood. However, if the news is too serious or upsetting, such as disasters, we avoid talking about it.
Are you interested in news?
Điểm: 75.0Gợi ý: 回答中存在语法错误,如“misunderstanding to the public”应为“misleading the public”,建议注意动词形式和搭配。同时,回答较长且有些重复,建议简洁表达观点。
Ví dụ: No, I'm not very interested in news because some journalists often mislead the public. Also, much news doesn't reflect reality, so I find it hard to trust what I hear.
How do you usually find news?
Điểm: 85.0Gợi ý: 回答结构清晰,内容具体,但可以使用更多连接词使表达更流畅,如“Moreover”或“Besides”。
Ví dụ: I usually find news on social media platforms like Sina or Weibo because they provide real-time updates and a wide variety of topics. Moreover, I sometimes learn news through conversations with my friends or colleagues.
Would you like to be a journalist?
Điểm: 90.0Gợi ý: 回答内容丰富且结构合理,但可以尝试使用更多高级词汇替换简单词汇,如“exhausting”可以用“draining”。
Ví dụ: No, I wouldn't like to be a journalist. Although it's a fascinating profession, it seems quite challenging because it requires extensive traveling, which I find draining. Besides, the pressure to meet tight deadlines would be hard for me to handle.
Have you read the news this morning?
Điểm: 88.0Gợi ý: 回答表达清晰,逻辑连贯,但“really boring”可以用更正式的词汇替换,如“tedious”。
Ví dụ: No, I haven't read any news this morning. Actually, I avoid it because I find it quite tedious and sometimes confusing. Moreover, due to the abundance of fake information online, I prefer to get updates from reliable sources.
Do you often talk with your friends about the news?
Điểm: 90.0Gợi ý: 回答内容具体且结构合理,可以尝试使用更多连接词如“however”来增强句子间的逻辑关系。
Ví dụ: Well, it really depends on the type of news. If the news is interesting or funny, we enjoy talking about it because it can boost our mood. However, if the news is too serious or upsetting, such as disasters, we tend to avoid discussing it.
× some journalists tend to be misunderstanding to the public
✓ some journalists tend to misunderstand the public
这里误用了介词'to',动词'misunderstand'后面直接跟宾语,不需要介词。应改为'misunderstand the public'。
× a large amount of news doesn't correspond to the reality
✓ a large amount of news doesn't correspond to reality
'reality'前不需要定冠词'the',因为这里指的是一般意义上的现实。
× they provide real time updates
✓ they provide real-time updates
'real time'作为复合形容词修饰'updates'时,应使用连字符连接,变成'real-time'。
× I find it exhausting
✓ I find it exhausting
此句无语法错误,无需修改。
× I haven't read any news in the morning
✓ I haven't read any news this morning
表示特定时间点的早晨,应该用'this morning'而不是'in the morning'。
× I prefer to get my updates from reliable sources
✓ I prefer to get my updates from reliable sources
此句无语法错误,无需修改。
× we enjoy talking about it because it can boost our mood
✓ we enjoy talking about it because it can boost our mood
此句无语法错误,无需修改。
× we avoid talking about it
✓ we avoid talking about it
此句无语法错误,无需修改。