News— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: 답변이 자연스럽지 않고 문법 오류가 있습니다. 'interest' 대신 'interested'를 사용하고, 'recently'와 'recent'의 혼용을 피해야 합니다. 또한, 문장을 간결하게 하여 중복을 줄이고, 명확한 주제 문장과 구체적인 이유를 포함하는 것이 좋습니다.

Ví dụ: I wasn't interested in the news before, but recently I enjoy watching it because it helps me understand current events better.

Gợi ý: 답변이 다소 중복되고 문장이 길어 자연스럽지 않습니다. 'YouTube application' 대신 'YouTube app'을 사용하고, 연결어를 적절히 사용하여 문장을 더 명확하게 구성하세요.

Ví dụ: I usually watch news on the YouTube app because I don't have a TV at home, and many channels live stream news there.

Gợi ý: 문법과 표현이 부자연스럽고 중복이 많습니다. 'not matched well with me' 대신 'doesn't suit me'를 사용하고, 문장을 간결하게 하며, 구체적인 이유를 명확히 제시하세요.

Ví dụ: No, I don't want to be a journalist because the job seems difficult and doesn't suit my interests. My major is different, so I prefer to just watch journalist podcasts.

Gợi ý: 답변이 중복되고 문법 오류가 많아 이해하기 어렵습니다. 시간을 정해 뉴스를 보는 습관에 대해 명확히 말하고, 문장을 간결하고 자연스럽게 만드세요.

Ví dụ: I don't usually read the news in the morning. Instead, I often open the YouTube app at different times to find reliable news sources.

Gợi ý: 문장이 다소 어색하고 중복이 있습니다. 'discuss about' 대신 'discuss'를 사용하고, 문장을 더 자연스럽고 명확하게 구성하세요.

Ví dụ: Yes, we have dinner together almost every day and often discuss important news from the internet, including government policies and student-related laws.

× In the past I don't interest about the news but recently I definitely like to see the news because the news contain diverse recently situation.

✓ In the past I wasn't interested in the news but recently I definitely like to watch the news because the news contains diverse recent situations.

The modal verb 'don't' is incorrectly used with 'interest' which should be 'wasn't interested' to express past state. Also, 'interest about' is incorrect; the correct preposition is 'interested in'. 'Contain' should be 'contains' to agree with singular 'news'. 'Recently situation' should be 'recent situations' to be plural and correct adjective form.

× In the past I don't interest about the news but recently I definitely like to see the news because the news contain diverse recently situation.

✓ In the past I wasn't interested in the news but recently I definitely like to watch the news because the news contains diverse recent situations.

The noun 'situation' should be plural 'situations' to match 'diverse' which implies multiple items.

× In the past I don't interest about the news but recently I definitely like to see the news because the news contain diverse recently situation.

✓ In the past I wasn't interested in the news but recently I definitely like to watch the news because the news contains diverse recent situations.

'News' is treated as singular here, so the verb should be 'contains' not 'contain'.

× In the past I don't interest about the news but recently I definitely like to see the news because the news contain diverse recently situation.

✓ In the past I wasn't interested in the news but recently I definitely like to watch the news because the news contains diverse recent situations.

'Interest' is not used with 'about'; the correct phrase is 'interested in'.

× So I usually find the news on the YouTube application because I don't have TV in my house and they always live broadcast on the YouTube apps.

✓ So I usually find the news on the YouTube application because I don't have a TV in my house and they always live broadcast on the YouTube app.

'Don't have TV' should be 'don't have a TV' to include the article. 'YouTube apps' should be singular 'YouTube app' as it refers to one application.

× So I usually find the news on the YouTube application because I don't have TV in my house and they always live broadcast on the YouTube apps.

✓ So I usually find the news on the YouTube application because I don't have a TV in my house and they always live broadcast on the YouTube app.

'Live broadcast' is a noun phrase; the verb form should be 'they always broadcast live' or 'there is always a live broadcast'. Also, 'on the YouTube apps' should be 'on the YouTube app'.

× No, I don't want to be a journalist because it looks like a little bit hard and not matched well with me.

✓ No, I don't want to be a journalist because it seems a little bit hard and doesn't suit me well.

'It looks like a little bit hard' is awkward; 'seems a little bit hard' is better. 'Not matched well with me' is incorrect; the correct phrase is 'doesn't suit me well'.

× Also my major is other things, so I don't I don't want to be a journalist.

✓ Also, my major is in other fields, so I don't want to be a journalist.

'Other things' is vague; 'other fields' or 'other areas' is more appropriate. The repeated 'I don't' is redundant.

× I just want to look the broadcast some journalist podcast or broadcast.

✓ I just want to watch some journalist podcasts or broadcasts.

'Look the broadcast' is incorrect; the correct verb is 'watch'. Also, 'some journalist podcast or broadcast' should be pluralized and structured as 'some journalist podcasts or broadcasts'.

× I actually don't read news on the morning.

✓ I actually don't read news in the morning.

'On the morning' is incorrect preposition; the correct phrase is 'in the morning'.

× I just frequently just, I don't decide some time to watch the news, but I frequently like just turn on the YouTube apps and just finding some good sources of news.

✓ I don't usually decide a specific time to watch the news, but I often just turn on the YouTube app and find some good sources of news.

'Some time' is vague; 'a specific time' is clearer. 'Frequently like just turn on' is awkward; 'often just turn on' is better. 'YouTube apps' should be singular 'YouTube app'. 'Just finding' should be 'find' to maintain parallel structure.

× Yes. So we almost every day eat dinners with my friends and we always discuss about the important news on the Internet.

✓ Yes. So we eat dinner with my friends almost every day and we always discuss important news on the Internet.

'Almost every day' should be placed correctly in the sentence. 'Eat dinners' is incorrect; 'eat dinner' is uncountable here. 'Discuss about' is incorrect; 'discuss' does not require 'about'.

× Also we discuss about the government or the laws of like students for students.

✓ Also, we discuss the government or laws related to students.

'Discuss about' is incorrect; 'discuss' should be used without 'about'. 'Laws of like students for students' is unclear and awkward; 'laws related to students' is clearer.

× So yeah, always we discuss about that.

✓ So yeah, we always discuss that.

'Always' should be placed before the verb 'discuss'. Also, 'discuss about' is incorrect; 'discuss' does not take 'about'.