News— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: Your answer has some pronunciation and grammar errors, and the phrase 'Not marry me' is unclear and unnatural. Try to start with a clear topic sentence directly answering the question, and avoid filler words like 'umm'. Use simple and correct sentences to express your opinion clearly.

Ví dụ: No, I'm not very interested in news. I prefer reading novels because they are more enjoyable for me.

Gợi ý: Your answer is somewhat unclear and has grammatical mistakes. Try to organize your answer with a clear topic sentence and supporting details. Use linking words to connect ideas and avoid repetition. Also, be careful with sentence structure and word order.

Ví dụ: I usually check the news once a week because I think it's important to know what's happening in my country.

Gợi ý: Your answer is understandable but has grammar and vocabulary issues. Avoid phrases like 'writing something' and 'open mind' which are unclear here. Use more precise vocabulary and complete sentences to explain your opinion clearly.

Ví dụ: I wouldn't like to be a journalist because I don't enjoy writing articles, and I think it would be difficult for me.

Gợi ý: Your answer is a bit repetitive and has some grammar mistakes. Try to avoid repeating words and use linking words to make your answer more coherent. Also, use correct verb tenses and sentence structures.

Ví dụ: No, I haven't read the news this morning. I usually read the news once a week at night when I have free time.

Gợi ý: Your answer is quite clear but can be improved by using better linking words and more natural expressions. Try to use phrases like 'we usually talk about' and avoid awkward phrases like 'there is no time about discussion of news'.

Ví dụ: Not really. My friends and I are more interested in fashion, so when we meet, we usually talk about our daily lives rather than the news.

× Not marry me.

✓ Not really.

The phrase 'Not marry me' is incorrect and does not convey the intended meaning. The student likely meant to say 'Not really' to express disinterest. Using the correct pronoun or phrase is essential for clear communication.

× I usually read umm novels instead of articles or news.

✓ I usually read novels instead of articles or news.

The use of 'umm' is a filler and should be omitted in formal speech. Also, 'news' is uncountable and does not require an article here. The sentence is clearer without 'umm'.

× I think once a week I check news.

✓ I think I check the news once a week.

The phrase 'check news' is missing the definite article 'the' before 'news' because 'news' is a specific thing here. Also, the adverbial phrase 'once a week' is better placed at the end for natural English word order.

× Since I'm a I'm live in a country, I think I should know my country, the news regularly.

✓ Since I live in a country, I think I should know the news about my country regularly.

The original sentence has redundant and incorrect pronouns ('I'm a I'm live'). The correction removes redundancy and clarifies the sentence. Also, 'the news' is used with the definite article to specify news about the country.

× if I become a journalist probably I will find it hard to write journals.

✓ If I become a journalist, I will probably find it hard to write journals.

The adverb 'probably' should be placed before the main verb 'find' for correct modal verb usage and natural sentence flow. Also, a comma after the conditional clause improves readability.

× Open mind.

✓ I have an open mind.

The phrase 'Open mind' is incomplete as a sentence. Adding 'I have' makes it a complete sentence and clarifies the meaning.

× this morning I never read read something.

✓ This morning I did not read anything.

The phrase 'never read read something' is incorrect and redundant. Using 'did not read anything' is the correct past tense negative form. Also, 'anything' is more appropriate in negative sentences than 'something'.

× so there is no time about discussion of news.

✓ so there is no time to discuss the news.

The phrase 'no time about discussion' is incorrect. The correct expression is 'no time to discuss'. Also, 'the news' requires the definite article here.