News— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: 回答中存在语法错误和表达不够自然的问题，例如“It is news that help us”应为“News helps us”。建议注意主谓一致，避免重复表达，并使句子更简洁流畅。

Ví dụ: Yes, I am quite interested in news because it helps me stay updated on global events. For example, international and environmental news make me feel connected to the world around me.

Gợi ý: 回答中存在语法错误，如“save me much time”应为“save me a lot of time”。建议注意时态和冠词的使用，同时可以使用更多连接词使表达更连贯。

Ví dụ: I usually find news online through popular apps like BBC or CNN because they are efficient and save me a lot of time. Moreover, these platforms often include vivid pictures and videos, which make the news more engaging.

Gợi ý: 回答中有拼写错误（Germanize应为journalism），语法错误（I don't good at应为I'm not good at），表达不够自然。建议注意单词拼写和语法，避免重复表达。

Ví dụ: To be honest, I wouldn't like to be a journalist because my major is not related to journalism. Also, I'm not good at writing or reporting stories. Although I enjoy watching the news, I don't think I can cover news myself.

Gợi ý: 回答中语法和表达稍显生硬，如“can't relax myself to focus on news”建议改为“can't relax enough to focus on the news”。建议使用更自然的表达方式，并注意冠词使用。

Ví dụ: No, I didn't read the news this morning because I had to take an important exam today. I felt really anxious and couldn't relax enough to focus on the news. Preparing for the exam was definitely my top priority.

Gợi ý: 回答中存在语法错误（discussing current news help应为helps），句子未完整结束，且“conversion”应为“conversation”。建议注意单复数一致，拼写准确，并确保句子完整。

Ví dụ: Of course, I often talk about the news with my friends because it's a great way to share different ideas and opinions. For example, discussing current news helps us broaden our horizons and develop a more critical and objective mindset. These conversations encourage me to think more rationally.

× It is news that help us keep updated about what is happening all around the world.

✓ It is news that helps us keep updated about what is happening all around the world.

主语是单数名词news，谓语动词help应使用第三人称单数形式helps。

× Moreover, such as international and environmental news will help us feel connected to what is going around the world.

✓ Moreover, international and environmental news will help us feel connected to what is going on around the world.

句中such as用法不当，应直接列举新闻类型；动词短语应为'going on'表示正在发生。

× I usually find News Online or popular news apps such as BBC or CNN because it's very efficient and save me much time.

✓ I usually find news online or popular news apps such as BBC or CNN because they're very efficient and save me much time.

news是不可数名词，online不需大写；主语是复数news apps，谓语动词应用复数形式are。

× I wouldn't like to be a journalist.

✓ I wouldn't like to be a journalist.

此句语法正确，无需修改。

× It's mainly because my major isn't related to Germanize.

✓ It's mainly because my major isn't related to journalism.

Germanize是动词，语境中应使用名词journalism表示新闻学专业。

× Although I can appreciate and watch news, I don't good at covering news myself.

✓ Although I can appreciate and watch news, I'm not good at covering news myself.

缺少系动词am，形容词good前应有be动词。

× No, I didn't read news this morning because I have to take part in an important exam today.

✓ No, I didn't read the news this morning because I had to take part in an important exam today.

前半句是过去时，后半句应保持时态一致，使用过去时had to。

× No, I didn't read news this morning because I have to take part in an important exam today.

✓ No, I didn't read the news this morning because I had to take part in an important exam today.

news前应加定冠词the，表示特指当天的新闻。

× I feel really anxious and nervous so that I can't relax myself to focus on news.

✓ I feel really anxious and nervous so I can't relax myself to focus on the news.

so that用法不当，应改为so；news前加定冠词the。

× At least preparing for exam is definitely my top priority.

✓ At least preparing for the exam is definitely my top priority.

exam前应加定冠词the，表示特指考试。

× Of course, I often talk about news with my friends because it's a great way to share different ideas and opinions.

✓ Of course, I often talk about the news with my friends because it's a great way to share different ideas and opinions.

news前应加定冠词the，表示特指新闻。

× For example, discussing current news help us broaden our horizons and develop a more critical and objective mindset.

✓ For example, discussing current news helps us broaden our horizons and develop a more critical and objective mindset.

主语discussing是第三人称单数，谓语动词help应改为helps。

× This kind of conversion encourages me to think more rationally and.

✓ This kind of conversation encourages me to think more rationally.

句子不完整，and后无内容；conversion应为conversation，意为“对话”。