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Part 1

Giám khảo

Are you interested in news?

Thí sinh

No, I don't care about the news. For me I think the news is very boring. I prefer to play game and do some sports instead of instead of reading the news. But my mom very keen on reading the new they can they always learn some global news in TV.

Giám khảo

How do you usually find news?

Thí sinh

Uh, for me, I usually find a new in Tiktok. You know, the Tiktok is very popular in my country, China, and everyone use this app so I can learn the global news, China news and all kind of new in Tiktok if I want.

Giám khảo

Would you like to be a journalist?

Thí sinh

No, I would like to be a journalist. I find journalists too routine and stressful with tight deadlines and frequent interruption that don't suit me in preference for for calls long term work. I would prefer creating roles such as content design and project based work where I can develop ideas deeply and use my imagination.

Giám khảo

Have you read the news this morning?

Thí sinh

No, I'm a student, so I was morning. I need to read books. I don't have time to care about the news, so it is very pity.

Giám khảo

Do you often talk with your friends about the news?

Thí sinh

Yes, I often discard news with my friends especially major in my elections or climate report because it help me understand different perspective. For example, after recent local election, we compare opinion and thoughts which clarify several issues for me and sparked lively debate.

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Part 1

Are you interested in news?

Điểm: 58.0

Gợi ý: 回答要直接明确并避免重复,同时注意语法和句子连贯。可以先给出主题句表明态度,然后用一两句具体原因或举例支持,尽量不要超过五句。注意动词时态和单复数(例如: "my mom is very keen on reading the news"),以及去掉多余重复的短语(如 "instead of instead of")。

Ví dụ: No, I'm not very interested in the news. I find most news reports boring because they often focus on negative events. Instead, I prefer playing games or doing sports in my free time. However, my mother is quite keen on watching television news and follows world events regularly.

How do you usually find news?

Điểm: 62.0

Gợi ý: 回答应更自然、准确并使用连接词使句子流畅。注意冠词和名词形式(a news → news / TikTok 拼写),以及用更精确的词描述渠道(e.g. "short videos")。可提供一两句具体例子说明如何在 TikTok 获取新闻来源或筛选信息。

Ví dụ: I usually get news from TikTok, because short videos are very popular in my country. Many news outlets and journalists post concise updates there, so I can quickly learn about global and Chinese news. I also check the original reports from trusted sources when a story seems important.

Would you like to be a journalist?

Điểm: 55.0

Gợi ý: 回答内容自相矛盾(先说 No, 然后说 I would like to be a journalist),需要先给出明确的立场。控制句子长度,注意语法(例如:"frequent interruptions"、"do not suit me")并用连接词解释原因。最后提出替代职业时可简要说明原因。

Ví dụ: No, I wouldn't like to be a journalist. I think journalism can be very routine and stressful because of tight deadlines and frequent interruptions. I would prefer creative roles like content design or project-based work, where I can develop ideas more deeply and use my imagination.

Have you read the news this morning?

Điểm: 48.0

Gợi ý: 回答要逻辑清晰并使用正确时态。避免不完整或无意义的短语(如 "I was morning")。可先直接回答是否读了新闻,然后说明原因并加一点具体细节(例如学习任务、复习内容)。注意表达自然("it's a pity")。

Ví dụ: No, I haven't read the news this morning. I'm a student and I had to study for exams, so I spent the morning reading textbooks. It's a pity, but I hope to catch up on headlines later today.

Do you often talk with your friends about the news?

Điểm: 66.0

Gợi ý: 总体回答方向正确,但用词和语法需改进("discard news" 应为 "discuss news";"major in my elections" 不清楚)。使用连接词改善逻辑(e.g. "for example", "which" 的使用要注意时态一致)。可提供更具体例子和结果,句子控制在五句内。

Ví dụ: Yes, I often discuss news with my friends, especially about major topics like elections or climate reports. Talking with them helps me understand different perspectives. For example, after a recent local election we compared opinions and this discussion clarified several issues and sparked a lively debate.

Ngữ pháp

Present tense issue

× No, I don't care about the news. For me I think the news is very boring.

No, I don't care about the news. For me, I think the news is very boring.

句子本身时态正确,但缺少逗号分隔短语“For me”与主句,属于标点与句子节奏问题。建议在“For me”后加逗号,使句子更自然易读。

Incorrect use of verbs (Verb + -ing form)

× I prefer to play game and do some sports instead of instead of reading the news.

I prefer to play games and do some sports instead of reading the news.

“game”应使用复数形式“games”来表示一般爱好(与偏好搭配)——属于单数与复数问题;同时重复了“instead of”。建议用“play games”和删去重复词,保持句子简洁。

Incorrect use of adjectives or adverbs

× But my mom very keen on reading the new they can they always learn some global news in TV.

But my mom is very keen on reading the news; she can always learn some global news on TV.

原句缺少系动词“is”,且“new”应为名词“news”;代词和句子连接混乱(“they can they”错误),应改为“she can”;介词“on TV”更常用而非“in TV”。这些错误涉及系动词省略、名词形式和代词使用,建议补全系动词、改正名词与代词并使用正确介词。

Present tense issue

× Uh, for me, I usually find a new in Tiktok.

Uh, for me, I usually find news on TikTok.

“a new”错误使用不定冠词且“new”应为名词“news”;平台名称应为“TikTok”并且常用介词是“on”。属于冠词/名词形式和介词使用问题,建议去掉冠词并改正拼写与介词。

Incorrect use of articles

× You know, the Tiktok is very popular in my country, China, and everyone use this app so I can learn the global news, China news and all kind of new in Tiktok if I want.

You know, TikTok is very popular in my country, China, and everyone uses this app, so I can learn global news, China news and all kinds of news on TikTok if I want.

不当使用定冠词“the TikTok”——一般应用名称前不加“the”。“everyone use”应为第三人称单数“uses”。“all kind of new”应为复数“all kinds of news”。介词“in TikTok”应为“on TikTok”。建议去掉定冠词,修正主谓一致、名词复数形式和介词。

Modal verb usage

× No, I would like to be a journalist.

No, I wouldn't like to be a journalist.

在上下文中考官问“Would you like to be a journalist?”学生原句“No, I would like to be a journalist.”与前文不符(表达矛盾)。若意为“不想”,应使用否定形式“wouldn't”。该问题属于情态动词使用(否定形式)。建议根据意图使用正确情态动词否定形式。

Sentence structure errors

× I find journalists too routine and stressful with tight deadlines and frequent interruption that don't suit me in preference for for calls long term work.

I find journalism too routine and stressful, with tight deadlines and frequent interruptions that don't suit me; I prefer long-term work.

原句结构混乱,名词与动名词混用(journalists vs journalism),“interruption”应为复数“interruptions”,并且“preference for for calls long term work”是语序和措辞错误。建议把“journalism”作为总体概念,复数化“interruptions”,将偏好部分改为“I prefer long-term work”。属于句子结构与名词形式错误。

Incorrect use of verbs (Verb + -ing form)

× I would prefer creating roles such as content design and project based work where I can develop ideas deeply and use my imagination.

I would prefer creating roles such as content design and project-based work where I can develop ideas deeply and use my imagination.

“project based”需连字符“project-based”作复合形容词修饰名词;整体时态与表达可接受。建议使用连字符以符合书写规范。

Past tense issue

× No, I'm a student, so I was morning.

No, I'm a student, so I was busy this morning.

原句“was morning”无意义,缺少描述词应为“was busy this morning”,属于过去时表达错误。建议补充形容词并加时间短语以明确意义。

Incorrect use of verbs (Verb + -ing form)

× I need to read books. I don't have time to care about the news, so it is very pity.

I need to read books. I don't have time to pay attention to the news, so it's a pity.

短语“care about the news”可用但不自然,建议用“pay attention to the news”。“it is very pity”语法错误,应为“it's a pity”或“it's very pity”不正确,去掉“very”或改为“it's a shame”。属于固定短语与表述错误,建议使用更自然表达。

Incorrect use of verbs (Verb + -ing form)

× Yes, I often discard news with my friends especially major in my elections or climate report because it help me understand different perspective.

Yes, I often discuss news with my friends, especially major issues like my elections or climate reports, because it helps me understand different perspectives.

“discard”错误,应为“discuss”。“major in my elections”不通,应为“major issues like recent elections”。“climate report”复数更自然。主句“it help”需第三人称单数“helps”。“different perspective”应为复数“perspectives”。这些错误涉及词汇选择、名词形式和主谓一致,建议使用正确动词与复数形式并保持主谓一致。

Past tense issue

× For example, after recent local election, we compare opinion and thoughts which clarify several issues for me and sparked lively debate.

For example, after the recent local election, we compared opinions and thoughts, which clarified several issues for me and sparked a lively debate.

在描述过去发生的事件时,应使用过去时:compare → compared,clarify → clarified。名词“opinion”应为复数“opinions”。缺少定冠词“the recent local election”。“sparked lively debate”需加不定冠词“a lively debate”。属于过去时使用、冠词与名词复数问题,建议把动词改为过去式并修正冠词与名词形式。

Từ vựng trọng tâm

BoringTedious
DifferentDissimilar; Distinct; Unusual
LongLengthy; Soon; Yearn for
NewRecently developed; Novel; Different; Additional; Reinvigorated
PopularWell-liked; Nonspecialist; Widespread; Mass
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