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Part 1

Giám khảo

Are you interested in news?

Thí sinh

Yes, I am interested in understanding social events, so I basically watch news, podcast or scroll through news applications on daily basis mostly around 3 to 4 times a week, which is adequate for me to understand what's happening.

Giám khảo

How do you usually find news?

Thí sinh

Well, let me be honest with you, I usually use umm, social applications such as Doe in to search news or I'll follow news host on that applications to follow up the recent news, umm, except from that I have a specific news podcast that I listen to.

Giám khảo

Would you like to be a journalist?

Thí sinh

No, and I don't think I'm qualified to be a journalist, which requires you to have some types of qualifications to be a journalist or apply for a journalist position. But I can analyze recent events and post it on my own account.

Giám khảo

Have you read the news this morning?

Thí sinh

No, today is a bit hectic day for me so I skipped my routine to watch news this morning. But I'm planning that after this event I would go to a coffee shop to listen to recent news.

Giám khảo

Do you often talk with your friends about the news?

Thí sinh

No, because I'm uncertain about my ability to analyze the news correctly or logically. So I am particularly afraid of sharing my opinions about a news with a friend or an acquaintance, so I do it with AI based applications.

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Part 1

Are you interested in news?

Điểm: 76.0

Gợi ý: 回答总体清晰但有冗长与语法不够准确的问题。需要更直接的主题句,控制句子数量(最多5句),使用连接词使表达更连贯,并修正语法和表达(例如“watch news, podcast or scroll through news applications on daily basis mostly around 3 to 4 times a week”应更简洁)。建议练习简短陈述兴趣、频率和原因,每部分用一句话,并用连接词衔接。

Ví dụ: Yes, I'm interested in current affairs. I usually catch up on the news about three to four times a week by listening to podcasts and scrolling through news apps. This routine helps me stay informed about social events and understand the context behind major stories.

How do you usually find news?

Điểm: 70.0

Gợi ý: 回答中有太多口头语(umm)且句子结构松散,部分表达不准确(例如“Doe in”应为具体平台名,复数/单数搭配错误)。需要用更清晰的主句加两三条支持细节,避免填充词,使用连接词(for example, also)来组织信息。

Ví dụ: I usually get my news from social media apps, where I follow a few trusted news hosts. I also search topics directly on those platforms to find updates. In addition, I listen to a regular news podcast every morning for a more in-depth summary.

Would you like to be a journalist?

Điểm: 72.0

Gợi ý: 回答直接但有啰嗦与语法不自然(重复“journalist”与“qualifications”表述)。建议先给出简短明确的立场,然后解释原因并提供补充信息,用连词(because, however)连接句子,避免不必要的重复。

Ví dụ: No, I wouldn't want to be a journalist because I don't have the formal training and experience it requires. However, I do enjoy analyzing recent events and sometimes share my own summaries and opinions on my social media account.

Have you read the news this morning?

Điểm: 78.0

Gợi ý: 回答清楚但语法和时态可改进(例如“a bit hectic day”应为“a bit of a hectic day”,以及“planning that after this event I would go”不够地道)。建议用一到两句说明当前状况和计划,使用连接词(so, but)并注意时态一致。

Ví dụ: No, I didn't catch the news this morning because it's been a hectic day. But I plan to go to a coffee shop later to listen to the latest updates.

Do you often talk with your friends about the news?

Điểm: 74.0

Gợi ý: 回答诚实但表达重复且有语法问题(如“about a news”应为“about the news”或“a news story”)。建议先给出简短答案,再具体说明原因并举例,避免重复使用相同连接词,改用because/so/therefore等以增强逻辑性。

Ví dụ: No, I don't often discuss news with friends because I'm not confident in my analysis. Therefore, I usually use AI-based apps to check my opinions before sharing them.

Ngữ pháp

Present tense issue

× Yes, I am interested in understanding social events, so I basically watch news, podcast or scroll through news applications on daily basis mostly around 3 to 4 times a week, which is adequate for me to understand what's happening.

Yes, I am interested in understanding social events, so I basically watch news and podcasts or scroll through news applications on a daily basis, mostly around 3 to 4 times a week, which is adequate for me to understand what's happening.

问题类型:现在时/一般现在时和名词形式及搭配使用(归类为“Present tense issue”)。错误包括可数名词单复数和搭配不当:'podcast' 应为复数 'podcasts'(表示习惯性行为的一部分),'watch news, podcast or scroll' 的并列应使用连词 'and',并且习惯性频率搭配是 'on a daily basis'。建议:把可数名词复数化,调整并列连词,并在习惯性频率前加冠词 'a'。

Incorrect use of prepositions

× Well, let me be honest with you, I usually use umm, social applications such as Doe in to search news or I'll follow news host on that applications to follow up the recent news, umm, except from that I have a specific news podcast that I listen to.

Well, let me be honest with you. I usually use social applications such as Doe in to search for news, or I'll follow news hosts on those applications to follow up on recent news. Besides that, I have a specific news podcast that I listen to.

问题类型:介词使用错误(Incorrect use of prepositions)。错误包括 'search news' 应为 'search for news','follow up the recent news' 应为 'follow up on recent news',以及 'on that applications' 中介词与指示代词不匹配,应为 'on those applications'。建议:使用正确的介词搭配(search for, follow up on),并确保指示代词与名词数一致(those applications)。

Third person singular issue

× No, and I don't think I'm qualified to be a journalist, which requires you to have some types of qualifications to be a journalist or apply for a journalist position.

No, I don't think I'm qualified to be a journalist, which requires you to have certain qualifications to become a journalist or to apply for a journalist position.

问题类型:第三人称单数/搭配问题(Third person singular issue)。句子中 'requires you to have some types of qualifications' 表达冗余且搭配不自然,应为 'requires certain qualifications',并修正动词不定式短语 'to become a journalist'。建议:用更自然的搭配 'certain qualifications' 并删去多余词。

Past tense issue

× No, today is a bit hectic day for me so I skipped my routine to watch news this morning.

No, today is a bit of a hectic day for me, so I skipped my routine of watching the news this morning.

问题类型:过去时使用错误(Past tense issue)。原句中时态混用且名词短语搭配不当:应为 'a bit of a hectic day',并且 'skipped my routine to watch news' 更自然的表达是 'skipped my routine of watching the news'。建议:修正名词短语,使用 'of' 引出习惯性动作的名词短语。

Future tense issue

× But I'm planning that after this event I would go to a coffee shop to listen to recent news.

But I'm planning that after this event I will go to a coffee shop to listen to recent news.

问题类型:将来时使用(Future tense issue)。在表计划的情况下,用 'will' 或 'I'm planning to' 更自然;'would' 在此处不恰当,因为它通常用于虚拟或间接语气。建议:使用 'will' 表示将来计划,或重写为 'I'm planning to go'。

Incorrect use of prepositions

× No, because I'm uncertain about my ability to analyze the news correctly or logically.

No, because I'm uncertain about my ability to analyze the news correctly or logically.

问题类型:介词使用错误(Incorrect use of prepositions)。此句语法本身正确,无需改动。说明:句子中介词 'about' 用法正确,因此不作修改。

Incorrect use of articles

× So I am particularly afraid of sharing my opinions about a news with a friend or an acquaintance, so I do it with AI based applications.

So I am particularly afraid of sharing my opinions about the news with a friend or an acquaintance, so I do it with AI-based applications.

问题类型:冠词错误(Article errors / Incorrect use of articles)。'a news' 不正确,news 为不可数名词,应使用 'the news' 或不加冠词;另外 'AI based' 应加连字符为 'AI-based','applications' 复数更自然。建议:把 'a news' 改为 'the news',并正确连接复合形容词和复数形式。

Từ vựng trọng tâm

AfraidFrightened; Reluctant
InterestedAttentive; Concerned; Partisan
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