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Part 1

Giám khảo

Are you interested in news?

Thí sinh

Yes, I am interested in news, different type of news and interested news.

Giám khảo

How do you usually find news?

Thí sinh

In early morning I wake up and the starting from newspaper to with the help of newspaper surrounding areas of news and countries news and all world.

Giám khảo

Would you like to be a journalist?

Thí sinh

Yes, I like journalist because in newspaper journalist is a main character. They who are who are writing good news, good article, a very great ideas and many different type of news. News according to sports, politicians, Bollywood, Hollywood etcetera.

Giám khảo

Have you read the news this morning?

Thí sinh

Yes, I read early morning in newspaper I'm going to my coaching and their newspaper is Times of India and I am I am read the newspaper the most man heading impressed me that in India phone is totally banned. Yeah, away forward.

Giám khảo

Do you often talk with your friends about the news?

Thí sinh

Yes, one news with I shared my friends with the news is AI is totally good for women's then we are discussing about benefits of AI and dis benefit of AI like it good for human beings at or not that's.

Đánh giá

Tổng

Tổng: 6.0Trôi chảy và mạch lạc: 6.0Phát âm: 6.0Ngữ pháp: 5.5Từ vựng: 6.0

Part 1

Are you interested in news?

Điểm: 55.0

Gợi ý: Make your answer more natural and concise. Start with a clear topic sentence, then add one specific detail and avoid repetition. Use linking words if you add more information.

Ví dụ: Yes, I am interested in the news. I especially follow international and technology news because I like learning about global events and new gadgets.

How do you usually find news?

Điểm: 50.0

Gợi ý: Organize your answer with a clear topic sentence, then add a specific detail about sources and timing. Use linking words for coherence and correct basic grammar (tenses, articles, and word order). Keep it to 2–3 sentences.

Ví dụ: I usually find news in the morning by reading a newspaper. I start with the local section and then read world news online to catch up on international events.

Would you like to be a journalist?

Điểm: 48.0

Gợi ý: Answer directly and clearly, then give one or two reasons with specific details. Avoid repetition and long, unclear phrases. Use correct nouns and plural forms and link ideas with connectors (for example, because, and, for instance).

Ví dụ: Yes, I would like to be a journalist because I enjoy writing and investigating stories. For example, I could cover politics or entertainment and help readers understand important issues.

Have you read the news this morning?

Điểm: 42.0

Gợi ý: Be concise and coherent: state whether you read the news, when and where, and summarize one clear story you remember. Use one or two sentences and correct tense and phrasing.

Ví dụ: Yes, I read the Times of India this morning while I was getting ready for coaching. One headline that impressed me reported a new government policy about phone restrictions in certain areas.

Do you often talk with your friends about the news?

Điểm: 50.0

Gợi ý: Start with a direct answer, then give a specific example of a topic you discussed and mention both sides briefly using linking words (for example, however, but). Avoid unclear phrasing and grammatical mistakes.

Ví dụ: Yes, we often discuss news. For instance, recently I shared an article about AI and its impact on women, and we talked about both the benefits (such as convenience) and possible drawbacks (like job displacement).

Ngữ pháp

Singular and plural issue

× Yes, I am interested in news, different type of news and interested news.

Yes, I am interested in the news, different types of news, and interesting news.

The noun 'news' is uncountable but 'type' requires plural 'types' when referring to more than one. 'Interested news' is incorrect; the adjective 'interesting' should describe news. Also add the definite article 'the' before 'news' for specificity.

Present tense issue

× In early morning I wake up and the starting from newspaper to with the help of newspaper surrounding areas of news and countries news and all world.

In the early morning I wake up and start with the newspaper to read local, national, and world news.

Sentence structure and verb forms are incorrect. Use 'In the early morning' (article and time expression), 'start' (base form after 'and'), and 'read' to indicate action. 'Surrounding areas of news and countries news and all world' is awkward; replace with 'local, national, and world news' for clarity.

Modal verb usage

× Yes, I like journalist because in newspaper journalist is a main character.

Yes, I would like to be a journalist because journalists are important in newspapers.

The original mixes preferences and role description. Use 'would like to be' to express desire. 'Journalist is a main character' is unnatural; use plural 'journalists are important' and 'in newspapers' (plural) for general statement.

Incorrect use of pronouns

× They who are who are writing good news, good article, a very great ideas and many different type of news.

They are the ones who write good news and good articles, have great ideas, and cover many different types of news.

Pronoun and relative clause structure is incorrect. Use 'They are the ones who write...' or 'They write...' Remove repeated 'who are'. Use plural 'articles' and 'types', and match verbs: 'write' and 'have'.

Incorrect use of prepositions

× News according to sports, politicians, Bollywood, Hollywood etcetera.

News about sports, politics, Bollywood, Hollywood, etcetera.

Use 'about' rather than 'according to' when listing topics. Use 'politics' (noun) instead of 'politicians' when referring to the category of news.

Past tense issue

× Yes, I read early morning in newspaper I'm going to my coaching and their newspaper is Times of India and I am I am read the newspaper the most man heading impressed me that in India phone is totally banned.

Yes, I read the newspaper early this morning before going to my coaching; the paper was The Times of India. The headline that impressed me most said that phones are totally banned in India.

Tense and word order errors: use past simple 'read' (pronounced 'red') for past action and 'read the newspaper early this morning'. 'I'm going to my coaching' should be 'before going to my coaching'. Use 'the Times of India' for the newspaper name. 'The most man heading impressed me' should be 'the headline that impressed me most'. 'Phone is totally banned' must be plural 'phones are totally banned' and match passive construction.

Sentence structure errors

× Yeah, away forward.

Yes, that's the main takeaway.

Original fragment 'away forward' is unclear and ungrammatical. Replace with a concise, meaningful phrase like 'that's the main takeaway' to convey the idea.

Incorrect use of pronouns

× Yes, one news with I shared my friends with the news is AI is totally good for women's then we are discussing about benefits of AI and dis benefit of AI like it good for human beings at or not that's.

Yes, I shared one news item with my friends: that AI is very beneficial for women. Then we discussed the benefits and disadvantages of AI, and whether it is good for human beings or not.

Many pronoun and article issues: 'one news' should be 'one news item'. 'I shared my friends with the news' should be 'I shared with my friends'. 'AI is totally good for women's' should be 'AI is very beneficial for women' (no possessive). Use past tense 'discussed' for completed action. 'Dis benefit' should be 'disadvantages'. End with 'whether it is good for human beings or not' for clarity.

Từ vựng trọng tâm

DifferentDissimilar; Distinct; Unusual
EarlyAdvance; Primitive; Prompt
GoodFine; Virtuous; Well-behaved; Right; Capable
GreatConsiderable; Large; Prominent; Magnificent; Enthusiastic
InterestedAttentive; Concerned; Partisan
ManyNumerous; A great/good deal of
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