Part 1
Giám khảo
Are you interested in news?
Thí sinh
Yes, of course, I very interested to news because, uh, it's, uh, give me, give me information about our lives and uh, I prefer to take the news from the my phone or the freezer.
Giám khảo
How do you usually find news?
Thí sinh
If I need the news, I just take my phone or I take my laptop and I need I serve the some of something that is some information that is I need and it's very cool for me because I take the every information.
Giám khảo
Would you like to be a journalist?
Thí sinh
Unfortunately, unfortunately no, because it's not interesting for me and I I think it's very boring. It's very boring and it's the take a long time to give the information about anything and it's a very dangerous, it will be very dangerous for.
Giám khảo
Have you read the news this morning?
Thí sinh
Uh, unfortunately, no, because uh, this morning I don't have enough time to reading the some news. Uh, I suggest I decide to read the news in the evening because, uh, this time I have uh, enough time and uh, I don't have anything to do.
Giám khảo
Do you often talk with your friends about the news?
Thí sinh
Uh, sometimes I talk, uh, with my friends about the news, uh, and because, uh, it's a very, uh, helpful for me, uh, I, for me and, uh, this time, uh, we discuss about this news and, uh, we, uh, give each we.
Are you interested in news?
Điểm: 52.0Gợi ý: Javobda mavzuga to‘g‘ri kiribsiz, lekin grammatik xatolar, takror va noaniq so‘z birikmalari ("very interested to news", "give me, give me", "the freezer") muloqotni chalkashtiradi. Imkon qadar qisqaroq, to‘g‘ri grammatik shakllardan foydalaning va manbani aniq ayting. Masalan: "I’m interested in the news because it keeps me informed about current events. I usually get news on my phone." Deb boshlang. Shuningdek, artikllar (the/a) va prepozitsiyalarni to‘g‘ri ishlatishga e’tibor qarating.
Ví dụ: Yes, I’m interested in the news because it keeps me informed about current events. I usually get news on my phone rather than on TV.
How do you usually find news?
Điểm: 48.0Gợi ý: Javob aniq va tizimli bo‘lishi kerak, ammo sizda chalkash iboralar va grammatik xatolar bor ("I need I serve", "some of something"). Fikrni qisqartiring va bog‘lovchi so‘zlardan foydalaning: avvalo qurilmani ayting, keyin manbani yoki ilovani nazarda tuting. Masalan: "I usually use my phone or laptop to read news from trusted websites or apps."
Ví dụ: I usually use my phone or my laptop to read news. I follow several trusted websites and news apps to stay updated.
Would you like to be a journalist?
Điểm: 50.0Gợi ý: Javobni takroriy va hissiy ifodalardan saqlang; sabablarni aniq va lo‘nda tushuntiring. Grammatika ("it's the take a long time", "for") va so‘z takrorlanishiga e’tibor bering. Ingliz tilida sabablarni bog‘lovchi so‘zlar bilan tartiblang (Because, As, Also). Masalan: "No, I wouldn't, because I don't find it interesting; it can be stressful and sometimes dangerous."
Ví dụ: No, I wouldn’t like to be a journalist because I don’t find the work interesting. It can also be stressful and sometimes dangerous when reporting from risky places.
Have you read the news this morning?
Điểm: 60.0Gợi ý: Javob mantiqan to‘g‘ri, lekin grammatik jihatdan yaxshilash kerak ("I don't have enough time to reading" → "to read"). Takror va keraksiz so‘zlardan qoching, vaqtni aniqlang. Masalan: "No, I didn't read the news this morning because I was busy. I usually catch up in the evening when I have more time."
Ví dụ: No, I didn’t read the news this morning because I was busy. I usually catch up on the news in the evening when I have more free time.
Do you often talk with your friends about the news?
Điểm: 55.0Gợi ý: Javob qisqa va lo‘nda bo‘lishi kerak; keraksiz tovushlar (uh) va takrorlarni olib tashlang. "Discuss about" noto‘g‘ri — to‘g‘ri shakl "discuss" yoki "talk about". Hamkorlik va misol keltiring: kim bilan, qachon va nima haqida gaplashasiz. Masalan: "Sometimes my friends and I discuss major news stories, especially political or sports updates."
Ví dụ: Sometimes my friends and I talk about important news, especially about politics or sports. We usually share opinions and discuss how events affect us.
× Yes, of course, I very interested to news because, uh, it's, uh, give me, give me information about our lives and uh, I prefer to take the news from the my phone or the freezer.
✓ Yes, of course, I am very interested in the news because it gives me information about our lives, and I prefer to get the news from my phone or the TV.
The student omitted the auxiliary verb 'am' required for present simple continuous/state (be + adjective) and used incorrect prepositions and verbs: 'interested to' should be 'interested in' (preposition error), 'it's give' should be 'it gives' (subject-verb agreement and present tense), 'take the news from the my phone or the freezer' is incorrect: use 'get the news from my phone or the TV'. Suggestions: use 'I am interested in', use correct subject-verb agreement (it gives), and choose appropriate prepositions ('in' for interested, 'from' for source) and vocabulary ('get' or 'receive' and 'TV' instead of 'freezer').
× If I need the news, I just take my phone or I take my laptop and I need I serve the some of something that is some information that is I need and it's very cool for me because I take the every information.
✓ If I need news, I just take my phone or my laptop and search for the information I need, and it's very convenient for me because I can get all the information.
Multiple issues: unnecessary articles ('the news' -> 'news' or 'the news' depending context), awkward verb choices and word order. 'I need I serve the some of something' is ungrammatical; use 'search for the information I need' (verb + object). 'It's very cool for me' is informal; use 'convenient'. 'I take the every information' should be 'I can get all the information' (verb choice and quantifier). Suggestions: use clear verbs like 'search for', maintain proper word order (subject + verb + object), and use appropriate quantifiers ('all the information').
× Unfortunately, unfortunately no, because it's not interesting for me and I I think it's very boring. It's very boring and it's the take a long time to give the information about anything and it's a very dangerous, it will be very dangerous for.
✓ Unfortunately, no, because it is not interesting to me and I think it is very boring. It takes a long time to report information about events, and it can be very dangerous.
Problems include unnecessary repetition and incorrect modal/auxiliary use: 'it's the take a long time' should be 'it takes a long time' (present tense verb). 'it's a very dangerous, it will be very dangerous for' is redundant and ungrammatical; use 'it can be very dangerous.' Use 'interesting to me' not 'for me' in this context. Suggestions: avoid repetition, use correct verb forms ('takes'), and choose appropriate modal verbs ('can' for possibility).
× Uh, unfortunately, no, because uh, this morning I don't have enough time to reading the some news. Uh, I suggest I decide to read the news in the evening because, uh, this time I have uh, enough time and uh, I don't have anything to do.
✓ Unfortunately, no, because this morning I didn't have enough time to read the news. I decided to read the news in the evening because I will have enough time then and nothing to do.
Tense consistency error: referring to 'this morning' requires past tense: 'didn't have' and the infinitive 'to read' (not 'to reading'). 'I suggest I decide' is incorrect; use 'I decided' or 'I plan/decided to read in the evening'. Also adjust future reference: 'I will have enough time then.' Suggestions: match past events with past tense, use correct infinitive forms after 'to', and use clear verbs for decisions/plans ('decided', 'planned').
× Uh, sometimes I talk, uh, with my friends about the news, uh, and because, uh, it's a very, uh, helpful for me, uh, I, for me and, uh, this time, uh, we discuss about this news and, uh, we, uh, give each we.
✓ Sometimes I talk with my friends about the news because it is very helpful for me. At that time we discuss the news and we share our opinions with each other.
Preposition errors: 'discuss about' is incorrect; 'discuss' is transitive and does not need 'about' (use 'discuss the news' or 'talk about the news'). 'Give each we' is ungrammatical; use 'share our opinions with each other.' Also 'helpful for me' is acceptable but 'helpful to me' or 'helpful for me' both possible; 'helpful to me' is slightly more natural. Suggestions: use 'discuss the news' without 'about', and 'share our opinions with each other' for reciprocal actions; ensure correct object after verbs like 'discuss'.