News— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: ปรับให้ประโยคเริ่มต้นชัดเจน ตรงคำถาม ตัดคำซ้ำ/คำพูดติดอ่าง และใช้คำศัพท์ถูกต้อง (เช่น "news" ไม่ใช่ "new") เพิ่มรายละเอียดเฉพาะเจาะจงสั้น ๆ พร้อมลิงก์เวิร์ด เช่น "for example" หรือ "because" เพื่อเชื่อมความคิด

Ví dụ: No, I'm not very interested in news, but I do find some headlines impressive because they can grab my attention. For example, when I'm unsure about a topic, I read short articles to broaden my knowledge about subjects I like.

Gợi ý: ตอบตรงคำถามโดยบอกวิธีการหาข่าว (เช่น เว็บไซต์ แอพ โซเชียลมีเดีย) แล้วอธิบายสาเหตุสั้นๆ ว่าทำไมบางข่าวเข้าใจยาก หลีกเลี่ยงคำฟุ่มเฟือยและคำอ้ำอึ้ง ใช้ลิงก์เวิร์ดเชื่อมเหตุผล เช่น "because"

Ví dụ: I usually find news through news apps and social media because they update quickly. However, some articles are hard to understand because they use specialized vocabulary and complex grammar.

Gợi ý: ตอบสั้นและชัดเจน พร้อมเหตุผลที่เป็นรูปธรรม เช่น ไม่ชอบสัมภาษณ์คนหรืองานกดดัน หลีกเลี่ยงการทวนคำและคำพูดติดอ่าง ใช้ลิงก์เวิร์ดเช่น "because" เพื่ออธิบาย

Ví dụ: Definitely not. I wouldn't enjoy being a journalist because I dislike interviewing people and handling the pressure of tight deadlines.

Gợi ý: ตอบตรงและกระชับ บอกเหตุผลเฉพาะเจาะจงว่าทำไมไม่อ่านเช้า และบอกเวลาที่ชอบอ่าน พร้อมใช้คำเชื่อม เช่น "because" และลดคำซ้ำ

Ví dụ: No, I didn't read the news this morning because I find it stressful. I prefer to read news later when I have time to search websites and read detailed articles.

Gợi ý: ตอบชัดว่าความถี่ในการคุย และให้ตัวอย่างข่าวที่คุย เช่น ข่าวเศรษฐกิจหรือท้องถิ่น แก้ไวยากรณ์ให้ถูกต้อง ใช้ลิงก์เวิร์ดเช่น "if" และ "because" เพื่อเชื่อมเหตุผล

Ví dụ: I only discuss news with my friends if it affects our daily lives, for example changes to public transport or local policies, because those stories are directly relevant to us.

× No, but to some extent I think new is really impressive and it could capture your attentions.

✓ No, but to some extent I think news is really impressive and it could capture your attention.

'new' is an adjective; the noun intended is 'news'. Use 'news' (uncountable) rather than 'new'. 'Attentions' is incorrect because 'attention' is an uncountable noun in this context. Also use 'news' singular form; overall: 'news is' and 'your attention'. Suggestion: replace 'new' with 'news' and 'attentions' with 'attention'.

× For example, when you don't know what to do, you could just read new word.

✓ For example, when you don't know what to do, you could just read a news article or a new word.

The phrase 'new word' doesn't fit the intended meaning; if referring to news, use 'a news article' or 'news'. If literally a vocabulary item, 'a new word' needs the article 'a'. Suggestion: decide whether you mean 'news article' or 'a new word' and use the correct article and noun.

× Broaden your knowledge by reading articles that is involved any topic that you're interested in.

✓ Broaden your knowledge by reading articles that involve any topic you are interested in.

Subject-verb agreement and relative clause: 'articles' (plural) requires 'that involve' not 'that is involved'. 'Involved' is passive and misplaced; use active 'involve'. Also 'that you're interested in' is more concise as 'you are interested in'. Suggestion: match plural subject with plural verb and use active voice.

× I find it really hard to understand as it consists of a family word or umm, complicated grammar, therefore therefore making it hard to understand for umm, for uh, people in general to read.

✓ I find it really hard to understand because it contains unfamiliar words or complicated grammar, which makes it hard for people in general to read.

Use 'because' to link reason. 'Consists of' is incorrect; use 'contains'. 'A family word' is wrong; likely 'unfamiliar words'. Avoid repeating 'therefore' and restructure the sentence: use relative clause 'which makes it hard for people in general to read.' Suggestion: replace 'consists of' with 'contains', 'family word' with 'unfamiliar words', remove redundancies.

× MMM def definitely, definitely not. I don't want to get myself involved in the fields of like like news word asking people or umm like interviewing people.

✓ Definitely not. I don't want to get myself involved in fields like journalism, asking people questions, or interviewing people.

'def' and repeated 'definitely' are informal/redundant. 'news word' is incorrect; use 'journalism' or 'news reporting'. 'Asking people' needs an object: 'asking people questions'. Suggestion: use precise nouns like 'journalism' and list activities clearly.

× I think that I'm not a big fan and I'm not into it.

✓ I think that I'm not a big fan; I'm not into it.

Grammatically okay but improve fluency by linking clauses with a semicolon or conjunction. No major grammar error; keep as is for meaning. Suggestion: combine for smoother flow.

× No, I think it is too stressful to read news in the morning, but I rather to read news when I want to know something in detail so so that I could search through like like page pages to pages by my own, my own.

✓ No, I think it is too stressful to read the news in the morning, but I prefer to read news when I want to know something in detail so that I can search through pages on my own.

Use 'prefer' instead of 'rather to' and present tense 'can' instead of 'could' for habitual ability. Add definite article 'the news'. 'By my own' is incorrect; use 'on my own'. Remove repetitions and 'page pages to pages'. Suggestion: use 'prefer', 'can', 'the news', and 'on my own' for correct idiom.

× If it's affecting our life or our our everyday life, I would discuss this with one of my friends or someone who are interested in the matters of the knees, I think.

✓ If it's affecting our life or our everyday life, I would discuss it with one of my friends or someone who is interested in the matter, I think.

Pronoun 'this' can be 'it' for clarity. 'Someone who are' should be 'someone who is' (subject-verb agreement). 'Matters of the knees' is incorrect phrase; likely 'the matter' or 'the issue'. Remove repeated 'our'. Suggestion: use 'is' after 'someone who' and correct the noun phrase to 'the matter' or 'the issue'.