SharingPart 1 Báo cáo

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Part 1

Giám khảo

Did your parents encourage you to share?

Thí sinh

When I was a kid, my parents encouraged me to share my toes with my little brother. I also learned to share food with others. Sharing is a good way to express caring about others.

Giám khảo

What do you usually share with friends?

Thí sinh

I used to share the class notes with my friends. I also share the latest news on social media with my friends. We enjoy sharing food together as well.

Giám khảo

Is there anything you prefer not to share?

Thí sinh

Yes, my private life. I don't like to share it with everyone. My personal life is just something I'm the only one concerned about, so I don't like people asking questions about my personal life.

Giám khảo

Do you think more people will share cars?

Thí sinh

It's uncommon here in Bahrain that people share cars. People mostly don't like to share their cars together because while driving on the roads, there are cameras that can capture the violations. It can capture the car number.

Đánh giá

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Part 1

Did your parents encourage you to share?

Điểm: 60.0

Gợi ý: Try to avoid unnatural or incorrect phrases like 'share my toes'. Instead, use clear and relevant examples of sharing. Also, keep your answer concise and directly related to the question.

Ví dụ: When I was a child, my parents encouraged me to share my toys and food with my little brother. Sharing helped me learn to care about others and build good relationships.

What do you usually share with friends?

Điểm: 85.0

Gợi ý: Good answer with relevant examples. To improve, use linking words to connect ideas smoothly and avoid repetition of 'share' in consecutive sentences.

Ví dụ: I usually share class notes with my friends, and I also share the latest news on social media. Moreover, we enjoy sharing food together, which strengthens our friendship.

Is there anything you prefer not to share?

Điểm: 75.0

Gợi ý: Your answer is clear but a bit repetitive. Try to combine sentences and use linking words to make your response more natural and fluent.

Ví dụ: Yes, I prefer not to share my private life because it's personal, and I don't feel comfortable when people ask too many questions about it.

Do you think more people will share cars?

Điểm: 70.0

Gợi ý: Your answer is relevant but could be more concise and coherent. Use linking words to connect ideas and explain reasons more clearly.

Ví dụ: In Bahrain, car sharing is uncommon because people worry about traffic cameras capturing violations linked to their car numbers, which makes them hesitant to share cars.

Ngữ pháp

Singular and plural issue

× my parents encouraged me to share my toes with my little brother

my parents encouraged me to share my toys with my little brother

The word 'toes' is incorrect in this context; it should be 'toys' because sharing toes is illogical, while sharing toys is a common activity among siblings.

Singular and plural issue

× People mostly don't like to share their cars together

People mostly don't like to share their cars

The phrase 'share their cars together' is redundant because 'share' already implies 'together'; removing 'together' improves clarity and correctness.

Từ vựng trọng tâm

GoodFine; Virtuous; Well-behaved; Right; Capable
LatestMost recent; Newest
LittleShort; Young; Brief; Minor
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