Sharing— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: 回答は質問に直接答えていますが、文法の誤り（"we we argued"）や冗長な表現があります。より自然で効果的な答えにするために、文法を正し、簡潔に表現しましょう。

Ví dụ: Yes, when I was a child, my parents encouraged me to share sweets with my older sister to avoid arguments.

Gợi ý: 答えが少し冗長で、繰り返しが見られます（"share"の多用）。また、文法的な誤りもあります。より明確で自然な表現を心がけ、接続詞を使って論理的に繋げましょう。

Ví dụ: I usually share Chinese food with my friends because the portions are large, so sharing allows us to try different dishes together.

Gợi ý: 文法の誤り（"we're same shape"）や不自然な表現があります。より正確な文法と具体的な説明を加え、接続詞を使って論理的に述べましょう。

Ví dụ: I find it difficult to share clothes with my older sister because we have different body shapes, so most clothes don't fit both of us.

Gợi ý: 回答は質問に答えていますが、文法の誤り（"I I hire"）や不自然な表現があります。具体例をより明確にし、接続詞を使って論理的に説明しましょう。

Ví dụ: Yes, I believe more people will share cars in the future because maintenance costs are high. For example, I sometimes rent a car instead of owning one to save money.

× Yes, when I was a kid they used to encourage me to share something sweet with my older sister because sometimes we we argued.

✓ Yes, when I was a kid they used to encourage me to share something sweet with my older sister because sometimes we argued.

The sentence contains a repeated word 'we' which is a typographical error rather than a grammar issue. Removing the duplicate 'we' corrects the sentence. This is important to maintain clarity and avoid confusion.

× I usually share Chinese food with my friend because it's too big to eat alone, so we can share and we can taste various food to share with.

✓ I usually share Chinese food with my friends because it's too big to eat alone, so we can share and taste various foods.

The word 'friend' should be plural 'friends' to match the plural context implied by 'we'. Also, 'various food' should be 'various foods' because 'various' implies multiple types, which requires a plural noun. This correction ensures subject-verb agreement and proper pluralization.

× To me it's a little hard to share some clothes with my older sister because we're same shape so we can't share.

✓ To me it's a little hard to share some clothes with my older sister because we're the same shape so we can't share.

The phrase 'we're same shape' is missing the definite article 'the' before 'same shape'. The correct phrase is 'we're the same shape'. This is an article error that affects the naturalness and correctness of the sentence.

× Yes, I think most people will share cars because maintenance fee is very expensive.

✓ Yes, I think most people will share cars because the maintenance fee is very expensive.

The phrase 'maintenance fee' requires the definite article 'the' because it refers to a specific known fee. Adding 'the' clarifies the meaning and is grammatically correct.

× For example I I hire some rental car by myself.

✓ For example, I hire a rental car by myself.

The phrase 'some rental car' is incorrect because 'car' is a countable singular noun and should be preceded by 'a' instead of 'some'. Also, the repeated 'I' is a typographical error and should be corrected. This correction ensures proper article usage and removes duplication.