Sharing— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: 回答中存在语法错误和表达不自然的问题，且内容不够连贯。建议简化句子结构，避免重复和多余的词汇，使表达更自然流畅。

Ví dụ: Yes, my parents taught me to share when I was a child because sharing helps children make friends and build good relationships.

Gợi ý: 回答中有语法错误和表达不清晰的问题，且部分内容重复。建议使用更准确的词汇，避免语法错误，并用连接词使句子更连贯。

Ví dụ: I like to share things that I enjoy, such as food or happy moments with my friends. Also, during studies, I often share my notes with classmates who need them.

Gợi ý: 回答表达不够清晰，语法和用词错误较多。建议简化句子，明确表达观点，并使用恰当的连接词。

Ví dụ: I think personal matters are not suitable for sharing with everyone. They should only be shared with close friends or family members, especially when you feel sad or need support.

Gợi ý: 回答中语法错误较多，表达不够自然。建议使用正确的时态和句型，清晰表达想法，并避免重复。

Ví dụ: Recently, I have learned to play table tennis. Sharing this hobby helps me make new friends who have similar interests.

Gợi ý: 回答中存在语法错误和表达不流畅的问题。建议简化句子结构，避免口语填充词，使表达更自然。

Ví dụ: The first person I would share good news with is my mom because she is my biggest supporter and always praises me when I do well.

Gợi ý: 回答表达不清晰，语法和用词错误较多。建议简化句子，明确表达内容，并使用连接词使句子连贯。

Ví dụ: I share both happy moments and difficult challenges with my friends to strengthen our relationship. For example, when I feel depressed, I talk to my close friends for support.

× Yes, I have been told by my parents, uh, how to share when I was a child because sharing is a very important skill for children to make friends.

✓ Yes, I was told by my parents how to share when I was a child because sharing is a very important skill for children to make friends.

这里应该使用一般过去时，因为动作发生在过去的特定时间（我小时候）。'have been told'是现在完成时，表示动作与现在有联系，不符合语境。

× Oh well, I would like to share things to others that I like.

✓ Oh well, I would like to share things with others that I like.

动词share后应接介词with表示“与……分享”，而不是to。

× War I think is very important for them.

✓ What I think is very important for them.

原句中'War'应为'What'，这是拼写错误，导致句子无法理解。

× For example in daily lives I will choose to share food or happy moments with my friends, or if during studies I will share my note taking or something they need.

✓ For example, in daily life I will choose to share food or happy moments with my friends, or during studies I will share my notes or something they need.

'in daily lives'应为'in daily life'，life是不可数名词，且notes更符合语境，note taking应改为notes。

× Well, I think personal related things are not suitable for sharing because they can be shared to uh selected people like your close friends or families.

✓ Well, I think personal related things are not suitable for sharing because they can be shared with selected people like your close friends or family.

动词share后应接介词with而非to；family作为集合名词通常不加复数。

× For example, if you feel depressed or umm you, you will turn to choose a close friends seek for.

✓ For example, if you feel depressed, you will turn to a close friend to seek help.

原句结构混乱，'choose a close friends seek for'不符合英语表达，应调整为'turn to a close friend to seek help'。

× I want to share a new skill that I gain recently is the is playing in table tennis.

✓ I want to share a new skill that I gained recently, which is playing table tennis.

'gain'应为过去式'gained'，'the is playing in table tennis'结构错误，改为'which is playing table tennis'更通顺。

× Because sharing this hobby I can make new friends who have the same habits and to track.

✓ Because by sharing this hobby, I can make new friends who have the same interests and habits.

'sharing this hobby'前应加介词by表示方式；'to track'无意义，应改为'interests and habits'。

× It's my mom who I would like to share good news with.

✓ It's my mom with whom I would like to share good news.

正式英语中，介词应放在关系代词前，避免句尾介词。

× Firstly umm because umm she always the biggest supporter of for me.

✓ Firstly, because she is always the biggest supporter of mine.

缺少动词'is'，'supporter of for me'介词重复，应改为'supporter of mine'。

× If I do something well she won't hesitate so praise me loudly.

✓ If I do something well, she won't hesitate to praise me loudly.

'so praise'应为不定式'to praise'，表示目的。

× Well, I will share happiness and difficulty challenges to my friends that I have to know each other and strengthen our relationship.

✓ Well, I will share happiness and difficult challenges with my friends so that we get to know each other and strengthen our relationship.

动词share后应接介词with；'difficulty challenges'应为'difficult challenges'；'that I have to know each other'结构错误，应改为'so that we get to know each other'。

× For example, if I find some if I feel depressed, I would choose to seek for my close friends the wise.

✓ For example, if I feel depressed, I would choose to seek advice from my close friends.

'seek for'应为'seek'，且后面应接名词或短语，'the wise'不合适，应改为'advice from my close friends'。