Sharing— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: 回答不够连贯，语法错误较多，且未能完整表达观点。建议练习使用完整句子，避免语法错误，并且回答时要更清晰地表达自己的观点。

Ví dụ: My parents did not explicitly teach me to share, but I learned it by observing their behavior. I also picked up the habit of sharing from my school and friends.

Gợi ý: 表达不够自然，词汇使用不准确，且句子结构混乱。建议使用更准确的词汇，避免重复，并且用连接词使句子更流畅。

Ví dụ: I like to share snacks with my friends because it helps build relationships. Everyone enjoys eating, so sharing food is a great way to connect with both new and close friends.

Gợi ý: 回答内容基本正确，但表达不完整且有语法错误。建议练习完整表达观点，使用正确的语法和词汇。

Ví dụ: I think personal items like passports and identification cards are not suitable for sharing because they contain sensitive information that could be stolen.

Gợi ý: 回答中断多，语法错误，表达不清晰。建议减少口头语，使用完整句子，并且更具体地描述分享的内容。

Ví dụ: Yes, recently I shared interesting videos and talked about new movies with my friends. It made our time together very enjoyable.

Gợi ý: 表达混乱，语法错误多，且信息不明确。建议练习清晰表达关系和原因，使用正确的时态和人称。

Ví dụ: I would like to share good news with my best friend because we are very close. She always listens to me, and I feel comfortable sharing my feelings with her.

Gợi ý: 回答不够连贯，语法和词汇使用不准确。建议练习用完整句子表达情感和原因，避免口头语。

Ví dụ: I usually share good news with my friends, but sometimes I also share bad news when I feel sad. My best friend always listens and supports me during those times.

× My parent didn't explicitly to share with other people, but I learned it from observing them.

✓ My parents didn't explicitly teach me to share with other people, but I learned it from observing them.

这里的“parent”应为复数形式“parents”，因为后文提到“them”，表示复数。

× My parent didn't explicitly to share with other people, but I learned it from observing them.

✓ My parents didn't explicitly teach me to share with other people, but I learned it from observing them.

动词“teach”后面需要接宾语和不定式结构，不能直接用“to share”，应改为“teach me to share”。

× I picked up these hobbies from school or friends rather than at home.

✓ I picked up these habits from school or friends rather than at home.

“hobbies”通常指兴趣爱好，语境中应为“习惯”，用“habits”更合适。

× My parents are more. Umm.

✓ My parents are more open about it. Umm.

原句不完整，缺少谓语和补充说明，需补充完整句子。

× I like to share some snack with my friend because I think it's a very very unavailable, seems to build relationships and everyone likes to eat something.

✓ I like to share some snacks with my friends because I think it's very valuable, it seems to build relationships and everyone likes to eat something.

“snack”应为复数“snacks”，表示一些零食；“friend”应为复数“friends”，表示多个朋友。

× I like to share some snack with my friend because I think it's a very very unavailable, seems to build relationships and everyone likes to eat something.

✓ I like to share some snacks with my friends because I think it's very valuable, it seems to build relationships and everyone likes to eat something.

“unavailable”意思是“不可用的”，用词错误，应改为“valuable”（有价值的）。

× So I think it is a very wonderful things to share with the new friend or with the best friend.

✓ So I think it is a very wonderful thing to share with a new friend or with a best friend.

“things”应为单数“thing”，因为前面用的是“a very wonderful”，表示单数。

× I think the personal item is not available to sharing with others such as the passport and identification.

✓ I think personal items are not suitable for sharing with others such as passports and identification cards.

“item”应为复数“items”，因为后面举了多个例子；“passport”和“identification”也应为复数形式。

× I think the personal item is not available to sharing with others such as the passport and identification.

✓ I think personal items are not suitable for sharing with others such as passports and identification cards.

“available to sharing”用法错误，应改为“suitable for sharing”。

× Yes, I I just sharing with my friends such as the umm, the recently movies we talk about and the watch the interesting video I share with them to, umm, make it a very, uh, happy time.

✓ Yes, I just shared with my friends, such as the recent movies we talked about and the interesting videos I shared with them to make it a very happy time.

此处描述过去发生的事情，动词应使用过去时态，如“shared”、“talked”。

× Yes, I I just sharing with my friends such as the umm, the recently movies we talk about and the watch the interesting video I share with them to, umm, make it a very, uh, happy time.

✓ Yes, I just shared with my friends, such as the recent movies we talked about and the interesting videos I shared with them to make it a very happy time.

“recently”是副词，修饰动词，修饰名词应使用形容词“recent”。

× Yes, I I just sharing with my friends such as the umm, the recently movies we talk about and the watch the interesting video I share with them to, umm, make it a very, uh, happy time.

✓ Yes, I just shared with my friends, such as the recent movies we talked about and the interesting videos I shared with them to make it a very happy time.

“video”应为复数“videos”，因为前文提到多个内容。

× She always talk about me his things and I will tell him my umm emotion and to comfort him.

✓ She always talks about her things and I will tell her my emotions and comfort her.

“talk”应为第三人称单数形式“talks”；代词使用错误，应使用“her”而非“him”；“emotion”应为复数“emotions”。

× She always talk about me his things and I will tell him my umm emotion and to comfort him.

✓ She always talks about her things and I will tell her my emotions and comfort her.

代词使用错误，主语是女性，应使用“her”而非“him”；“me his things”语序和用词错误，应为“her things”。

× Umm I like to share the good news with my friend but sometime I just share some bad news because I'm just very sad too about that or her dad's.

✓ Umm I like to share good news with my friends but sometimes I just share some bad news because I'm very sad about that or her dad's situation.

“friend”应为复数“friends”；“sometime”应为副词“sometimes”；“dad's”后应补充名词，如“situation”。

× Umm I like to share the good news with my friend but sometime I just share some bad news because I'm just very sad too about that or her dad's.

✓ Umm I like to share good news with my friends but sometimes I just share some bad news because I'm very sad about that or her dad's situation.

“sad about”后面应接具体事物，需补充“situation”使句子完整。

× So my best friend will conference and support me to umm.

✓ So my best friend will comfort and support me.

“conference”用词错误，应为“comfort”；句子结构不完整，需补充完整表达。