Sharing— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: Câu trả lời cần sử dụng thì động từ chính xác và tránh lặp từ không cần thiết. Bạn nên nói rõ ràng hơn và dùng câu ngắn gọn, tự nhiên hơn. Ví dụ, dùng thì quá khứ đơn cho hành động trong quá khứ và tránh lặp từ như "so" và "I" nhiều lần.

Ví dụ: Yes, my parents taught me to share when I was a child. As the middle child, my sister often shared her food with me, and I did the same with my younger brother.

Gợi ý: Câu trả lời nên rõ ràng và mạch lạc hơn, tránh lặp từ và dùng từ phù hợp hơn như "try new foods" thay vì "try some new food which which is just a little". Nên dùng liên từ để kết nối ý và tránh câu dài không rõ nghĩa.

Ví dụ: I often share food with my family and friends because I like to try new dishes at school. Sharing allows us to taste different foods that I enjoy.

Gợi ý: Bạn nên tránh lặp lại ý và dùng câu ngắn gọn, rõ ràng hơn. Ngoài ra, nên dùng từ vựng chính xác như "personal items" thay vì "individual things" và giải thích lý do cụ thể hơn.

Ví dụ: I believe personal items like toothbrushes and clothes should not be shared because they are unhygienic.

Gợi ý: Câu trả lời nên rõ ràng hơn, tránh lặp từ và dùng thì đúng. Nên dùng câu ngắn gọn, mạch lạc và giải thích lý do cụ thể hơn để câu trả lời tự nhiên và hiệu quả.

Ví dụ: Recently, I have been sharing makeup products with my sister because she buys them and I can't afford many since I'm still a student.

Gợi ý: Bạn nên tránh lặp lại từ và dùng câu ngắn gọn hơn. Nên dùng từ vựng phù hợp và giải thích rõ lý do để câu trả lời tự nhiên và hiệu quả hơn.

Ví dụ: If I have good news or tasty snacks, I usually share them with my mom first because it makes her happy.

Gợi ý: Câu trả lời cần rõ ràng và mạch lạc hơn, tránh lỗi ngữ pháp và dùng từ chính xác. Nên sắp xếp ý theo trình tự logic và dùng liên từ để kết nối các ý.

Ví dụ: I usually share study strategies with my friends, such as useful websites for learning English. Sometimes, we also talk about delicious food or makeup products.

× Yes, of course my parents teach me how to share when I were a child in many ways.

✓ Yes, of course my parents taught me how to share when I was a child in many ways.

The sentence refers to a past event, so the verbs should be in the past tense. 'Teach' should be 'taught' and 'were' should be 'was' because the subject 'I' takes 'was' in past tense.

× So because I'm a middle child and so I, I had received a lot of shares by my sister.

✓ So because I'm a middle child, I received a lot of shares from my sister.

'Shares' is incorrectly used; 'share' as a noun here is uncountable or should be replaced with 'things shared'. Also, 'had received' is past perfect but simple past 'received' fits better here. 'By' should be 'from' to indicate the source.

× She she shared a good food for me and also I have to do that the same with my little brother.

✓ She shared good food with me and I also have to do the same with my little brother.

'A good food' is incorrect because 'food' is uncountable and does not take 'a'. The preposition 'for' should be 'with' to indicate sharing. 'Do that the same' should be 'do the same'.

× So I often share food with my family from my friends because I just wanna eat around one school or I just wanna try some new food which which is just a little.

✓ So I often share food with my family and my friends because I just want to eat around school or try some new food which is just a little.

'From my friends' is incorrect; it should be 'and my friends' to indicate sharing with both. 'Wanna' is informal; 'want to' is better. 'Around one school' is unclear; 'around school' is more natural. Repetition of 'which' is an error.

× So I usually share the dish with my friends or my family to try and many food that I like.

✓ So I usually share dishes with my friends or my family to try many foods that I like.

'The dish' should be plural 'dishes' because sharing multiple items is implied. 'Many food' is incorrect; 'food' is uncountable, so 'many foods' or 'many types of food' is correct.

× I think we should not share a individual things that is not suitable for sharing.

✓ I think we should not share individual things that are not suitable for sharing.

'A individual things' is incorrect because 'a' is singular and 'things' is plural. Also, 'is' should be 'are' to agree with plural 'things'.

× I think I don't want to share my toothbrush, uh, or my clothes with anyone else because it's not clean for it's not clean, yeah.

✓ I think I don't want to share my toothbrush or my clothes with anyone else because they are not clean.

'It's not clean for it's not clean' is redundant and unclear. 'Clothes' is plural, so pronoun should be 'they' and verb 'are'.

× Yes, of course, I usually share my makeup of makeup things with my sister.

✓ Yes, of course, I usually share my makeup things with my sister.

'Of makeup things' is redundant; 'makeup things' suffices. 'Usually share' is present tense and acceptable here as a habitual action.

× Exactly exactly is that she bought it and she share with me.

✓ Exactly, she bought it and she shares it with me.

'Share' should be 'shares' to agree with third person singular subject 'she'. Also, 'Exactly exactly is that' is awkward; simplified to 'Exactly'.

× So umm I think it's kind of good because I'm a girly and I'm still a student so I not have a lot of money to bought it so I usually share it with my sister.

✓ So, umm, I think it's kind of good because I'm girly and I'm still a student so I don't have a lot of money to buy it, so I usually share it with my sister.

'I not have' should be 'I don't have' for present tense negative. 'To bought' is incorrect; 'to buy' is the correct infinitive form.

× So if I have good news and a good things or good food like my snack, I usually want to share it with my mom first because I want to share a good thing with my mother because she's so happy when I share something with her.

✓ So if I have good news, good things, or good food like my snack, I usually want to share them with my mom first because she is so happy when I share something with her.

'A good things' is incorrect; 'things' is plural and should not have 'a'. 'It' should be 'them' to refer to plural items.

× So I usually share a news all the strategy in a study, just like a website that used to learn English or you should learn Mart with my friends or you should.

✓ So I usually share news about study strategies, like websites used to learn English or you should learn Mart with my friends.

'A news' is incorrect; 'news' is uncountable and does not take 'a'. 'All the strategy' should be 'study strategies' to be plural and clear.

× Or sometime we share about a delicious food or the makeup products.

✓ Sometimes we share about delicious food or makeup products.

'Sometime' should be 'Sometimes'. 'A delicious food' is incorrect; 'food' is uncountable and does not take 'a'. 'The makeup products' should be 'makeup products' without 'the' unless specific products are meant.