Sharing— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: 你的回答表达了观点并给出了例子，但句子结构有些混乱，时态不一致，且部分表达不够自然。建议注意时态一致性，简化句子结构，并使用更自然的表达方式。

Ví dụ: Yes, my parents taught me to share when I was a child. They emphasized that sharing helps build friendships and makes everyone feel happy. For example, I used to share my bike with neighborhood friends, which made our time together enjoyable and strengthened our bonds.

Gợi ý: 回答中有犹豫词汇“Umm well”，影响流畅度。建议去除填充词，句子更简洁明确，同时注意语法，如“the food I'm eating”应改为“the food I am eating”。

Ví dụ: I don't mind sharing most of my belongings, like my car or clothes. However, I usually avoid sharing the food I am eating because of hygiene concerns.

Gợi ý: 回答中有多处填充词“uh”、“umm”，影响表达流畅。建议减少口头语，句子更连贯，且注意表达准确，如“really specific details that happen with others”可改为“personal information about others”。

Ví dụ: I think personal information, like private details about others or credit card numbers, should not be shared. Also, I prefer not to share gossip because it can harm relationships.

Gợi ý: 回答中有重复和填充词，且句子结构不够清晰。建议简化表达，去除多余词汇，使用正确的语法，如“need to be prepared”。

Ví dụ: Yes, recently I have shared my experience preparing for the IELTS exam. I worked hard and learned what is necessary to succeed, so I feel confident sharing this information with others.

Gợi ý: 回答中时态和表达不够准确，如“something good happen”应为“something good happens”，且句子结构可更自然。建议注意时态一致，简化句子。

Ví dụ: I have a friend who is older than me. Whenever something good happens, she is the first person I think of. I usually text her immediately because she is experienced and knows how to handle different situations.

Gợi ý: 回答中有填充词，且表达稍显复杂。建议去除填充词，简化句子，使表达更自然流畅。

Ví dụ: I usually share good news with my friends because it creates a positive atmosphere. However, I prefer to deal with bad news on my own.

× Yes, of course they do not only teach me to share, but also taught me the importance of sharing.

✓ Yes, of course they not only taught me to share, but also taught me the importance of sharing.

The sentence mixes present tense 'do not only teach' with past tense 'taught'. Since the question refers to childhood, past tense should be used consistently. Also, 'not only' should precede the verb for correct emphasis.

× Sharing can make others loved and make us feel happy.

✓ Sharing can make others feel loved and make us feel happy.

The phrase 'make others loved' is incorrect because 'make' should be followed by the base verb form 'feel' plus adjective 'loved' to express the effect on others.

× if I'm the only child who has bike in the neighborhood

✓ if I'm the only child who has a bike in the neighborhood

The noun 'bike' is countable and singular here, so it requires the indefinite article 'a' before it.

× sharing it with my friends and playing with them is what makes it awesome

✓ sharing it with my friends and playing with them are what make it awesome

The compound subject 'sharing it with my friends and playing with them' is plural, so the verb should be plural 'are' and 'make' to agree with the plural subject.

× Yes, of course they do not only teach me to share, but also taught me the importance of sharing.

✓ Yes, of course they not only taught me to share, but also taught me the importance of sharing.

The modal auxiliary 'do' is incorrectly used with past tense 'taught'. The correct form is to use past tense 'taught' consistently without 'do'.

× But the food I'm eating because I'm a bit concerned about personal hygiene.

✓ But the food I'm eating I don't share because I'm a bit concerned about personal hygiene.

The original sentence is incomplete and lacks a modal verb or auxiliary to express refusal or inability to share. Adding 'I don't share' clarifies the meaning.

× I would definitely say something really personal such as really specific details that happen with others and also, uh, your, uh, credit card number, right?

✓ I would definitely say something really personal such as very specific details that happen to others and also, uh, your, uh, credit card number, right?

The phrase 'details that happen with others' is incorrect; the correct preposition is 'to others'. Also, 'really specific' is better expressed as 'very specific' for clarity.

× She got quite more experienced compared to mine and she knows how to handle things better.

✓ She is quite more experienced compared to me and she knows how to handle things better.

'Got' is informal and incorrect here; 'is' should be used. Also, 'compared to mine' is incorrect; the correct pronoun is 'me'.

× If there's something good happen, the first person that comes to my mind would be her.

✓ If there's something good happening, the first person that comes to my mind would be her.

The verb 'happen' should be in the present participle form 'happening' after 'something good' to indicate an ongoing or potential event.