Sharing— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: 回答较自然且内容完整，但有轻微语法错误和表达不够简洁。建议注意句子结构，避免冗余，使表达更流畅。

Ví dụ: Yes, my parents taught me to share when I was a child. For example, they encouraged me to share my toys with younger children to set a good example. This helped me develop a caring and generous attitude.

Gợi ý: 回答中存在语法错误和重复词汇，表达不够清晰。建议简化句子结构，避免口语填充词，使用连贯的连接词。

Ví dụ: I like to share my favorite food and hobbies with others because it makes me happy to see them enjoy what I love. For example, I often invite my friends to try new dishes or dance together, which helps us feel closer.

Gợi ý: 回答内容具体且结构清晰，但开头使用了口语填充词“Umm”，建议减少使用以提升正式度。

Ví dụ: I think personal secrets are not suitable for sharing because they should be kept private. For example, private information about someone's family or feelings should remain confidential to respect their privacy and avoid misunderstandings.

Gợi ý: 回答中存在重复和断句不连贯的问题，表达不够清晰。建议注意句子连贯性，避免重复，使用完整句子表达观点。

Ví dụ: Recently, I watched one of my favorite movies while browsing TikTok. It was very interesting, so I shared it with my friends and family because I thought they would enjoy it and be deeply impressed by the story. Sharing this experience makes me happy and helps us connect.

Gợi ý: 回答中语法错误较多，句子不完整且表达混乱。建议加强句子结构练习，确保表达完整且逻辑清晰。

Ví dụ: The first person I would like to share good news with is definitely my parents because we live together and they are very close to me. Whenever I have exciting news, I tell them immediately because they always support me unconditionally.

Gợi ý: 回答内容与问题不符，且语法错误多，表达不清晰。建议准确理解问题，回答相关内容，并注意语法和句子完整性。

Ví dụ: I usually share important moments with my friends, such as when I get a high score in class or win an award in a race. Sharing these achievements helps us celebrate together.

× I like to share my favorite food and hobby with other because it help me to feel UMM enjoyable is to seeing others appreciate and enjoy what I love.

✓ I like to share my favorite food and hobby with others because it helps me to feel enjoyment in seeing others appreciate and enjoy what I love.

句中 'other' 应为复数形式 'others'，因为表示“其他人”；动词 'help' 应与主语 'it' 保持第三人称单数一致，改为 'helps'；'enjoyable is to seeing' 结构不正确，应改为 'enjoyment in seeing'，使表达更自然。

× I like to share my favorite food and hobby with other because it help me to feel UMM enjoyable is to seeing others appreciate and enjoy what I love.

✓ I like to share my favorite food and hobby with others because it helps me to feel enjoyment in seeing others appreciate and enjoy what I love.

'other' 应改为复数形式 'others'，因为这里指的是“其他人”，需要用复数形式。

× I like to share my favorite food and hobby with other because it help me to feel UMM enjoyable is to seeing others appreciate and enjoy what I love.

✓ I like to share my favorite food and hobby with others because it helps me to feel enjoyment in seeing others appreciate and enjoy what I love.

主语 'it' 是第三人称单数，动词 'help' 应该加 's' 变为 'helps'，以保持主谓一致。

× And for example, I often invite my friends to try new dishes with me or dance together because I believe sharing this UMM experience help me help help us feel closer.

✓ For example, I often invite my friends to try new dishes with me or dance together because I believe sharing this experience helps us feel closer.

动词 'help' 应与主语 'sharing this experience' 保持第三人称单数一致，改为 'helps'；句中多余的 'help' 应删除。

× And for example, I often invite my friends to try new dishes with me or dance together because I believe sharing this UMM experience help me help help us feel closer.

✓ For example, I often invite my friends to try new dishes with me or dance together because I believe sharing this experience helps us feel closer.

句中 'friends' 是复数，保持一致无误，但 'help' 应改为 'helps'，这里已在第三人称单数问题中说明。

× So recently I watched one of my favorite movie favorite movie while browsing TikTok.

✓ So recently I watched one of my favorite movies while browsing TikTok.

'movie' 应为复数形式 'movies'，因为 'one of my favorite movies' 表示“我最喜欢的电影之一”。

× It was really interesting and I wanted to share it with my friends and family because I believe they would enjoy it and be deep.

✓ It was really interesting and I wanted to share it with my friends and family because I believe they would enjoy it and be deeply impressed by the story.

句中 'be deep' 用法不正确，应改为 'be deeply impressed'，表达“深受感动”更准确。

× Deeply impressed by the story.

✓ I was deeply impressed by the story.

该句缺少主语和谓语，属于句子结构错误，应补充完整。

× Visit, allow us to connect and discuss something we all like.

✓ This allows us to connect and discuss something we all like.

句子缺少主语和谓语，且 'Visit' 用法不当，应改为 'This allows us...' 使句子完整通顺。

× So the first question I would like to share good news with is definitely my parent because we live together now and they are the closest people to me.

✓ So the first person I would like to share good news with is definitely my parents because we live together now and they are the closest people to me.

'parent' 应为复数 'parents'，因为后文用 'they' 指代，表示“父母”。

× Whenever I receive exciting news, I will immediately tell them and because since they always support me unconditionally.

✓ Whenever I receive exciting news, I immediately tell them because they always support me unconditionally.

句中 'and because since' 连接词重复且不合适，应简化为 'because'，使句子通顺。

× For example, last time I was having a high school in AP and she they really.

✓ For example, last time I was taking an AP class in high school and they really supported me.

原句结构混乱，缺少谓语和完整表达，应补充完整并调整语序。

× Umm I usually share important moment in my life with my parents umm such as when I earn a high score in the class and also when I was attending some races and get a award.

✓ Umm I usually share important moments in my life with my parents, such as when I earn a high score in class and also when I attend some races and get an award.

'moment' 应为复数 'moments'；'a award' 应为 'an award'，冠词使用错误。

× Umm I usually share important moment in my life with my parents umm such as when I earn a high score in the class and also when I was attending some races and get a award.

✓ Umm I usually share important moments in my life with my parents, such as when I earn a high score in class and also when I attend some races and get an award.

'a award' 应改为 'an award'，因为 'award' 以元音音素开头，冠词应使用 'an'。

× So it's really appreciate for me to like tell telling my parents because they are the closest per person to me.

✓ So I really appreciate telling my parents because they are the closest people to me.

'it's really appreciate for me to like tell telling' 结构错误，应改为 'I really appreciate telling'；'per person' 应为 'people'。