Sharing— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: 回答中存在重复和语法错误，且表达不够自然。建议避免重复词汇，注意时态和动词形式的正确使用，同时使句子更简洁流畅。

Ví dụ: Yes, my parents taught me to share when I was a child. For example, my mom encouraged me to share candies and snacks with my friends.

Gợi ý: 回答中有重复和语法错误，表达不完整且不连贯。建议减少口头语，使用正确的词汇和句子结构，确保表达完整且逻辑清晰。

Ví dụ: I like to share positive things because sharing good news can encourage my friends and me.

Gợi ý: 回答语法错误较多，表达不清晰。建议使用正确的句子结构，明确表达观点，并避免词汇错误。

Ví dụ: I think things that are uncertain or involve other people's privacy are not suitable for sharing.

Gợi ý: 回答不完整且含糊，语法错误明显。建议完整表达想法，避免语法错误，并确保句子完整。

Ví dụ: Yes, just yesterday I told my close friend that I will take the IELTS exam today, and we decided to support each other.

Gợi ý: 回答较好，但有语法和用词错误，如“whether”应为“whether it is”。建议注意词汇准确性和句子流畅性。

Ví dụ: The first person I would share good news with is my close friend Jing Jing because we grew up together and always share both good and bad news to encourage each other.

Gợi ý: 回答中有语法错误和重复，表达不够清晰。建议使用正确的句子结构，避免重复，并具体说明分享的内容。

Ví dụ: I usually share casual news with my friends, such as school events or daily activities, so we can celebrate happy moments and support each other during sad times.

× my mom always ask me to sell candy or snacks with my friends.

✓ my mom always asks me to sell candy or snacks with my friends.

主语是第三人称单数（my mom），谓语动词应加-s，正确形式是asks。

× my parents always asked me to share with my with my friends.

✓ my parents always asked me to share with my friends.

句中重复了介词with，应去掉多余的with。

× I usually like like to share positive things, umm, because I think if I if I share a positive seats with my friends, we can carry the encourage each other and.

✓ I usually like to share positive things, umm, because I think if I share positive feelings with my friends, we can encourage each other.

重复了like，且positive seats用词错误，应为positive feelings；句尾不完整，去掉多余词汇使句子完整。

× I think the thing you can't be sure or it involve other people privately. It are all not suitable for selling.

✓ I think things you can't be sure of or that involve other people's privacy are not suitable for sharing.

介词使用错误，应该用be sure of；动词形式和主语不一致，it are应改为they are；selling应为sharing，语义更合适。

× Yes, uh, just yesterday I told my close friend the that I will participate IELTS exam today and we decided will go to.

✓ Yes, uh, just yesterday I told my close friend that I will participate in the IELTS exam today, and we decided to go together.

句子结构不完整，缺少介词in和冠词the，动词不定式to缺失，句尾不完整。

× we always share whether good, good or bad news of each other and we can encourage each other.

✓ we always share whether good or bad news with each other, and we can encourage each other.

重复了good，且介词用错，应该用with each other。

× I think it very casual, for example, the school or daily activities says I would like to share with my friends.

✓ I think it is very casual; for example, school or daily activities are what I would like to share with my friends.

缺少系动词is，名词复数形式错误，says应为are。

× We can we can celebrate all sad together.

✓ We can celebrate all the sad and happy moments together.

句子结构不完整，表达不清，添加具体内容使句子完整且通顺。