Sharing— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: 回答较为自然且内容丰富，但句子较长且略显冗余。建议简化句子结构，避免重复表达，同时增加连接词使表达更流畅。

Ví dụ: Yes, my parents taught me to share when I was a child because it is an important value in my culture. For example, my father once told me a traditional story about Kong Rong, who chose the smallest pears to share with his brothers.

Gợi ý: 回答中存在语法和表达不够准确的问题，且句子不够连贯。建议使用更准确的表达，避免口语填充词，并用连接词使句子更连贯。

Ví dụ: I usually share snacks or food with my friends because I buy them in bulk online to get discounts. However, I can't finish them all before they expire, so sharing helps me avoid waste.

Gợi ý: 回答中断且表达不完整，影响理解。建议完整表达观点，避免口语填充词，并用连接词使内容连贯。

Ví dụ: I believe personal belongings like my car, suit, or shoes are not suitable for sharing because they might get damaged. If that happens, it could create an awkward situation since I can't easily ask my friends to compensate.

Gợi ý: 回答表达不清且语法错误较多，信息混乱。建议理清思路，简洁明了地表达，并避免不完整或含糊的句子。

Ví dụ: I recently passed the Chinese bar exam, so I shared my online courses, textbooks, and notes with my friends who are preparing for their master's degrees.

Gợi ý: 回答中存在语法错误和表达不完整，影响理解。建议使用完整句子，注意时态和语法，增加连接词使表达更流畅。

Ví dụ: I would share good news with my best friend Mike because we are very close. We bonded over Pokémon during our first year at university, and he always supported me during tough times.

Gợi ý: 回答内容较好，但表达不够连贯且有语法错误。建议使用更准确的句子结构，避免口语化表达，并用连接词增强逻辑性。

Ví dụ: It depends on how close I am to the person. With close friends, I feel comfortable sharing both good and bad news because they understand and support me. However, with acquaintances, I tend to be more cautious about what I share.

× I remember that one day my father told me a traditional Chinese story about a boy named Kong Rong who chose the smallest pair and like his older brother.

✓ I remember that one day my father told me a traditional Chinese story about a boy named Kong Rong who chose the smallest pear and liked his older brother.

这里的错误是动词形式错误，'like' 应该用过去式 'liked'，因为句子描述的是过去发生的事情。'pair' 应为 'pear'，因为故事中是指水果梨。建议注意动词时态和单词拼写。

× Well, I often share snacks or the kind of food with my friends because when I shop online I really get a really good discount if I buy several packages at once.

✓ Well, I often share snacks or kinds of food with my friends because when I shop online I really get a really good discount if I buy several packages at once.

这里 'the kind of food' 用法不当，应该用复数形式 'kinds of food' 来表示多种食物。建议注意量词和名词的搭配。

× But umm I can't finish it on time.

✓ But umm I can't finish them on time.

前文提到的是多个包裹的食物，'it' 应改为复数代词 'them'，以保持代词与先行词一致。建议注意代词的数的一致性。

× So sharing them helps me use them before they expired and also.

✓ So sharing them helps me use them before they expire.

这里 'expired' 应用现在时 'expire'，因为是指在它们过期之前使用。'and also' 句尾不完整，应去掉。建议注意时态和句子完整性。

× Well, uh, even if I lend them to close friends, there's always a chance they may be damaged.

✓ Well, uh, even if I lend them to close friends, there's always a chance they may get damaged.

'be damaged' 虽然语法正确，但更自然的表达是 'get damaged'，表示可能会被损坏。建议使用更自然的表达方式。

× And if this happens it can turn to a pretty awkward situation because I can't ask a friend to.

✓ And if this happens, it can turn into a pretty awkward situation because I can't ask a friend to fix it.

句子结构不完整，缺少谓语和宾语，'turn to' 应改为 'turn into'，并补充完整句意。建议注意句子完整性和固定搭配。

× I just finished the Chinese bar exam last month and I purchased it fortunately, so I have a lot of things I don't need any more, just like my online courses, my textbooks, notes, and even my little ******* cards they have shared with me with my friends while some of them are focusing on their master.

✓ I just finished the Chinese bar exam last month and fortunately, I passed it, so I have a lot of things I don't need anymore, like my online courses, my textbooks, notes, and even my little flashcards which I have shared with my friends while some of them are focusing on their master's degree.

原句中 'purchased it fortunately' 用词错误，应为 'fortunately, I passed it'。'little ******* cards' 不明确，推测为 'flashcards'。'with me with my friends' 重复，应改为 'which I have shared with my friends'。'master' 应为 'master's degree'。建议注意词汇选择和句子连贯性。

× It really close.

✓ He is really close to me.

句子缺少主语和谓语，'It' 应改为 'He'，并补充 'is' 和介词短语 'to me'。建议注意主谓一致和句子完整性。

× His Pokémon whenever I was stressed out or going through tough times, and he always knew how to cheer me up so when I got something good.

✓ He played with his Pokémon whenever I was stressed out or going through tough times, and he always knew how to cheer me up, so when I got something good,

句子缺少谓语动词，'His Pokémon' 应改为 'He played with his Pokémon'。句尾不完整，应补充完整。建议注意句子完整性和主谓一致。

× There is some ordinary friends. I can be more careful.

✓ There are some ordinary friends with whom I can be more careful.

'There is' 用于单数，'friends' 是复数，应改为 'There are'。句子结构不完整，建议合并并使用关系代词。建议注意主谓一致和句子结构。