Sharing— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: 回答较为自然且内容相关，但存在语法错误和表达不够流畅的问题。建议注意时态一致性和句子结构，避免语法错误，同时丰富细节使表达更具体。

Ví dụ: Yes, my parents taught me to share when I was a child because they believed it helps build strong relationships. For instance, I often brought delicious snacks to school and shared them with my classmates, which made me feel closer to them and helped me make good friends.

Gợi ý: 回答中存在语法错误和句子未完成的问题，表达不够完整。建议注意句子完整性，避免重复用词，并使用连接词使表达更连贯。

Ví dụ: I like to share delicious food and interesting books with others because it helps me connect with them. For example, when I bring interesting books, I can start engaging conversations and learn different perspectives, which I really enjoy because it broadens my horizons.

Gợi ý: 回答内容明确，但存在语法错误和表达不够自然的问题。建议注意主谓一致和冠词使用，同时使表达更自然流畅。

Ví dụ: I think some personal items are not suitable for sharing because they can carry germs and cause health problems. For example, towels and toothbrushes are very personal, so sharing them with others is unhealthy.

Gợi ý: 回答中存在语法错误和表达不完整的问题，且有口语填充词。建议避免使用口语填充词，注意时态和句子完整性，使表达更清晰。

Ví dụ: Yes, one week ago I shared a nice book with my friend Jim. The book talks about photography skills and fashion design ideas. I really like it and thought he would enjoy it too. After he finished reading, we could discuss and share our perspectives.

Gợi ý: 回答表达基本清楚，但存在语法错误和用词不当。建议注意代词使用和动词形式，避免重复表达，使句子更流畅。

Ví dụ: The first person I would like to share good news with is my best friend Pony because we have a very close relationship and always support each other. For example, whenever something positive happens in my life, I think of him and talk with him to enjoy the moment.

Gợi ý: 回答中存在语法错误和表达重复，且用词不够准确。建议注意时态一致性，避免重复表达，并使用更准确的词汇。

Ví dụ: I like to share positive news with my friends. For example, if I achieve something or get new and interesting things, I share them because I want to spread positive energy and make my friends happy.

× I always brought some delicious snacks to school and share them with my classmates, which helped me to feel closer with them and make good.

✓ I always brought some delicious snacks to school and shared them with my classmates, which helped me to feel closer to them and make good friends.

这里的动词时态不一致，前面用了过去时brought，后面应该用过去时shared，而不是现在时share。同时，短语应为feel closer to someone，make good friends更完整。

× which helped me to feel closer with them and make good.

✓ which helped me to feel closer to them and make good friends.

英语中表达“与某人关系更亲近”应使用介词to，而不是with。

× when I bring some interesting books, I will spark a interesting conversation and learn some different perspective from others.

✓ when I bring some interesting books, I will spark an interesting conversation and learn some different perspectives from others.

冠词a应改为an，因为interesting以元音音素开头；perspective应为复数形式perspectives，表示多种观点。

× I really enjoy it. It can broaden my.

✓ I really enjoy it. It can broaden my horizons.

句子不完整，broaden后应有宾语，如horizons，表示“开阔视野”。

× I think some personal items is really not suitable for sharing because it brings some germs and causes health problems.

✓ I think some personal items are really not suitable for sharing because they bring some germs and cause health problems.

items为复数，谓语动词应使用复数形式are，代词it应改为they，动词bring和cause也应使用复数形式。

× so share them to others is unhealthy.

✓ so sharing them with others is unhealthy.

动词share后应使用动名词形式sharing，介词应为with而非to。

× This book talk about some photographer skills and fashion design ideas.

✓ This book talks about some photography skills and fashion design ideas.

主语book为第三人称单数，谓语动词应加s变为talks；photographer skills应为photography skills，表示“摄影技巧”。

× So after he finished reading we can talk about uh and share some perspective.

✓ So after he finished reading, we can talk about it and share some perspectives.

缺少宾语，talk about后应有宾语it；perspective应为复数形式perspectives。

× The first person I would like to share good news is my best friend Pony, because we have a very close relationship and always support each other.

✓ The first person I would like to share good news with is my best friend Pony, because we have a very close relationship and always support each other.

动词share后应加介词with，表示“与某人分享”。

× I will think of him and talking with them to enjoy the movement.

✓ I will think of him and talk with him to enjoy the moment.

动词时态应一致，talking改为talk；代词them应改为him，与前文保持一致；movement应为moment，表示“时刻”。

× if I got some achievement or get a new things and interesting things, I will share them with my friend because I like to spread some positive energies and make them happy.

✓ if I get some achievements or new and interesting things, I will share them with my friends because I like to spread some positive energy and make them happy.

条件句中应使用一般现在时get而非过去时got；achievement应为复数achievements；things前不需冠词new and interesting things；friend应为复数friends；energy不可数，去复数形式energies。