Sharing— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: 回答较自然且内容相关，但可以更简洁，避免重复表达“sharing”的概念，同时增加连接词使句子更流畅。

Ví dụ: Yes, my mom taught me that sharing is an important virtue in Chinese culture. She often encouraged me to share snacks with my friends, which helped me experience the joy of generosity.

Gợi ý: 回答表达了观点，但句子结构略显重复，建议使用连接词并丰富细节，使表达更连贯自然。

Ví dụ: I like to share both happy and sad moments with my friends because sharing happiness can spread joy, and sharing difficulties helps us support each other.

Gợi ý: 回答内容不够恰当且有不合适的玩笑，建议避免敏感话题，回答时应更正式且具体。

Ví dụ: I think personal secrets or very private feelings are not suitable for sharing, especially if they might hurt others or cause misunderstandings.

Gợi ý: 回答表达了情感，但用词不够准确，“pleasure”与“anxious and depressed”矛盾，建议用更合适的词汇并简洁表达。

Ví dụ: Recently, I shared my feelings of anxiety before the IELTS exam with my best friend because I always feel nervous before important tests.

Gợi ý: 回答信息丰富但句子过长且结构混乱，建议分句并使用连接词，使表达更清晰。

Ví dụ: I would share good news with my best friend because we have known each other since childhood. Although we attended different colleges, our friendship remains strong, and she understands my feelings well.

Gợi ý: 回答内容较口语化且涉及隐私八卦，建议选择更积极健康的话题，并避免使用不正式的表达。

Ví dụ: I usually share interesting news about celebrities with my friends because we enjoy discussing their latest movies and public appearances.

× I want my friends to feel the joy as the same as me.

✓ I want my friends to feel the joy the same as me.

这里的表达中，'as the same as'是不正确的用法，应该去掉定冠词'the'，正确表达是'as same as'或更常见的'same as'。定冠词'the'在这里使用错误。

× who is dating with another guy?

✓ who is dating another guy?

动词'date'后面不需要介词'with'，直接跟宾语即可。'dating with'是错误搭配，应去掉'with'。