Sharing— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: Câu trả lời của bạn có nhiều lỗi ngữ pháp và từ vựng không chính xác, làm cho ý nghĩa không rõ ràng. Bạn nên sử dụng từ vựng phù hợp và câu cú rõ ràng hơn để truyền đạt ý tưởng một cách tự nhiên và hiệu quả.

Ví dụ: Yes, my parents always taught me the importance of sharing when I was a child. They encouraged me to share toys and snacks with my friends because it helps build good relationships. From them, I learned to be generous and thoughtful towards others.

Gợi ý: Bạn nên sử dụng từ vựng chính xác và câu cú mạch lạc hơn. Ngoài ra, hãy tránh lỗi ngữ pháp và diễn đạt rõ ràng ý tưởng để câu trả lời tự nhiên và hiệu quả hơn.

Ví dụ: I enjoy sharing study materials with my classmates, especially during group projects. For example, when I started a business project, I often shared my documents with my team because I believe that working together and exchanging ideas can improve our work and help us achieve better results.

Gợi ý: Câu trả lời của bạn khá rõ ràng nhưng có một số lỗi ngữ pháp và từ vựng chưa chính xác. Bạn nên chú ý sử dụng thì đúng và từ vựng phù hợp để câu trả lời tự nhiên hơn.

Ví dụ: Sharing is important in our culture, but some things should not be shared, such as personal information and passwords. For example, your home address or financial details should be kept private to protect your security. It's especially important not to share your passwords with others.

Gợi ý: Bạn nên sử dụng cấu trúc câu rõ ràng hơn và tránh lỗi ngữ pháp để câu trả lời mạch lạc. Ngoài ra, hãy dùng từ vựng phù hợp để diễn đạt ý tưởng một cách tự nhiên.

Ví dụ: Honestly, recently I haven't shared much with others because I haven't joined any projects or new ideas. Instead, I share simple stories with my friends, which I think is the best way to maintain our relationships.

Gợi ý: Câu trả lời có nhiều lỗi ngữ pháp và từ vựng không chính xác, làm cho ý nghĩa khó hiểu. Bạn nên luyện tập cách sử dụng thì và đại từ đúng, cũng như từ vựng phù hợp để câu trả lời tự nhiên hơn.

Ví dụ: The first person I would like to share good news with is my best friend whom I have known since high school. We have stayed close for many years and even worked together in business. I always feel comfortable sharing important moments with her because she is very supportive and understanding.

Gợi ý: Bạn cần hoàn thiện câu trả lời với cấu trúc rõ ràng và tránh lỗi ngữ pháp. Hãy sử dụng từ vựng phù hợp và diễn đạt ý tưởng một cách mạch lạc để câu trả lời tự nhiên và hiệu quả hơn.

Ví dụ: I usually share personal and important news with my close friends, such as when I bought a new car or achieved something significant in my life. However, recently we haven't had much time to meet in person at coffee shops or other places, so we mostly keep in touch online.

× Yes, my parent always taught me the importance of salary when I was a little girl.

✓ Yes, my parents always taught me the importance of sharing when I was a little girl.

The word 'parent' should be plural 'parents' because it refers to both mother and father. Also, 'salary' is incorrect in this context; the intended word is likely 'sharing'. This corrects the singular/plural mismatch and word choice.

× They always encourage me to cemetery a snake with my friends because it help build good relationship tend to their children.

✓ They always encouraged me to share a snack with my friends because it helps build good relationships among children.

The verb 'encourage' should be in past tense 'encouraged' to match 'always' in past context. 'Cemetery a snake' is incorrect; it should be 'share a snack'. 'Help' should be 'helps' to agree with singular subject 'it'. 'Relationship' should be plural 'relationships'. 'Tend to their children' is unclear and replaced with 'among children' for clarity.

× I learn to be generous and thoughtful to others.

✓ I learned to be generous and thoughtful to others.

The verb 'learn' should be in past tense 'learned' to match the past context of the sentence.

× I really enjoy sharing story material and it's not with my last mates, especially when we were on road projects.

✓ I really enjoy sharing stories and materials with my classmates, especially when we were working on road projects.

'Story material' should be plural 'stories and materials'. 'It's not with my last mates' is incorrect and replaced with 'with my classmates'. 'Last mates' is not a correct phrase.

× For example, when I started Tycoon, I often share my documents with my team because I believe that by working together and interest ideas which could improve our school work and achieve.

✓ For example, when I started Tycoon, I often shared my documents with my team because I believed that by working together and sharing ideas, we could improve our school work and achieve success.

'Share' should be past tense 'shared' to match past context. 'Believe' should be past tense 'believed'. 'Interest ideas' is incorrect; it should be 'sharing ideas'. The sentence is completed for clarity.

× Sharing is an important part of our culture, but some things are not suitable for sharing, such as personal information and passwords.

✓ Sharing is an important part of our culture, but some things are not suitable for sharing, such as personal information and passwords.

No grammatical error detected in this sentence.

× For example, your home address or financial detail should be keep private to protect your security.

✓ For example, your home address or financial details should be kept private to protect your security.

'Keep' should be in past participle form 'kept' after 'should be'. 'Detail' should be plural 'details'.

× Especially don't share your hope at rest for people.

✓ Especially, don't share your hopes or secrets with other people.

The phrase 'hope at rest for people' is unclear and incorrect. It is corrected to 'hopes or secrets with other people' for clarity and correct pronoun use.

× Honestly, recently I have.

✓ Honestly, recently I have shared.

The sentence is incomplete; 'have' should be followed by a past participle verb 'shared' to form present perfect tense.

× I haven't shared most with other because I don't really join in any projects or ideas.

✓ I haven't shared much with others because I haven't really joined any projects or ideas.

'Most' should be 'much' to indicate quantity. 'Other' should be plural 'others'. 'Join' should be past participle 'joined' to match present perfect tense.

× Instead I share simple story with my friends and I think this is the best way for keep my relationship.

✓ Instead, I share simple stories with my friends and I think this is the best way to keep my relationships.

'Story' should be plural 'stories'. 'For keep' is incorrect; it should be 'to keep'. 'Relationship' should be plural 'relationships'.

× The first person I would like to share with you is my best friend who I have never seen high school.

✓ The first person I would like to share with is my best friend who I have known since high school.

'Share with you' is incorrect; it should be 'share with'. 'Have never seen high school' is incorrect; it should be 'have known since high school'.

× We have stay low flight for many kids and even work together in business.

✓ We have stayed close friends for many years and even worked together in business.

'Have stay' should be 'have stayed'. 'Low flight for many kids' is unclear and corrected to 'close friends for many years'. 'Work' should be past tense 'worked'.

× I always feel comfortable very important moments with her because he is very supportive and understanding for me.

✓ I always feel comfortable sharing very important moments with her because she is very supportive and understanding of me.

'Feel comfortable very important moments' is incorrect; it should be 'feel comfortable sharing very important moments'. 'He' should be 'she' to match 'her'. 'Understanding for me' should be 'understanding of me'.

× I usually share personal and important news with my love friends such as a new car which I have just bought or various achievements in my life.

✓ I usually share personal and important news with my close friends, such as a new car which I have just bought or various achievements in my life.

'Love friends' is incorrect; it should be 'close friends'.

× However, we are not in recently more time to meet directly in coffee shop or any places so we have just.

✓ However, recently we have not had much time to meet directly in coffee shops or any other places, so we have not.

'We are not in recently more time' is incorrect; it should be 'recently we have not had much time'. 'Coffee shop' should be plural 'coffee shops'. The sentence is completed for clarity.