Movies— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: Your answer is somewhat unclear and a bit lengthy. Try to be more direct and concise. Also, avoid confusing phrases like "it will be over in half of the time as it shows." Instead, clearly state your preference and reason. Use linking words to improve coherence.

Ví dụ: I don't often watch movies in the theater because I find them time-consuming. However, I enjoy watching movies at home since I can pause or skip parts, making it more convenient.

Gợi ý: Your answer lacks clarity and has grammatical errors. Try to directly answer the question and provide specific reasons. Use linking words like 'because' or 'as' to connect ideas. Also, avoid vague phrases like 'which is not really good according to.'

Ví dụ: I usually watch TV series, especially sitcoms and romantic comedies, because I find them more fun and relatable than movies, which often focus on drama and thrillers.

Gợi ý: Your answer is repetitive and contains grammatical mistakes. Try to make your point clearly and avoid redundancy. Use linking words like 'because' to explain your preference. Keep your sentences concise and well-structured.

Ví dụ: I prefer watching movies at home because it saves time and I can skip scenes I don't like, making the experience more enjoyable.

Gợi ý: Your answer is generally clear but can be improved by using more formal language and avoiding repetition. Use linking words like 'however' to contrast ideas and make your answer more coherent.

Ví dụ: Yes, watching movies in other languages is useful if you understand the language. However, if you don't, it might not be beneficial since you won't grasp the content fully.

× Honestly I do not really enjoy watching movies in the theater, but at home I would like to watch movies as it will be over in half of the time as it shows.

✓ Honestly I do not really enjoy watching movies in the theater, but at home I would like to watch movies as they are over in half the time as they show.

The original sentence incorrectly uses 'it' to refer to 'movies', which is plural. The pronoun should be 'they' to agree with the plural noun 'movies'. Also, 'as it shows' is incorrect; it should be 'as they show' to match the plural subject. This is a subject-pronoun agreement issue related to plural forms.

× Sitcoms and romcoms are more fun an relatable I fell but movies are just drama and thriller which is not really good according to.

✓ Sitcoms and romcoms are more fun and relatable, I feel, but movies are just drama and thriller which are not really good, in my opinion.

The sentence contains spelling errors ('an' instead of 'and', 'fell' instead of 'feel') and lacks proper conjunctions and punctuation. Also, 'which is not really good according to' is incomplete and unclear; it should be 'which are not really good, in my opinion' to clarify the meaning. Correct use of conjunctions and adjectives/adverbs is necessary for clarity.

× Sitcoms and romcoms are more fun an relatable I fell but movies are just drama and thriller which is not really good according to.

✓ Sitcoms and romcoms are more fun and relatable, I feel, but movies are just drama and thriller which are not really good, in my opinion.

The phrase 'which is not really good' incorrectly uses singular verb 'is' to refer to plural 'drama and thriller'. The verb should be plural 'are' to agree with the plural subject. This is a singular and plural agreement issue.

× I prefer watching movies at home as in as at home watching movie is less time consuming which I would prefer more as I could skip some parts which I do not want to watch an would take less time to watch.

✓ I prefer watching movies at home as watching movies at home is less time consuming, which I prefer more as I can skip some parts that I do not want to watch and it takes less time to watch.

The original sentence incorrectly uses 'movie' (singular) instead of 'movies' (plural) when referring generally. Also, 'an' should be 'and'. Correct plural usage is important for subject-verb agreement and clarity.

× Oh yes, it will be useful to watch movies in another language is if I would know that language.

✓ Oh yes, it will be useful to watch movies in another language if I know that language.

The phrase 'if I would know that language' is incorrect; modal verbs like 'would' are not used in conditional clauses expressing real possibility. The correct form is 'if I know that language'. This is a modal verb usage error.

× If I don't know that language then it will not be useful as I will not understand a single word of that movie.

✓ If I don't know that language, then it will not be useful as I will not understand a single word of that movie.

This sentence is grammatically correct but missing a comma after the conditional clause for clarity. No modal verb error here; the sentence is acceptable as is.

× So it is more useful if the language is compatible with that person.

✓ So it is more useful if the language is familiar to that person.

The word 'compatible' is not appropriate here; 'familiar' or 'known' better expresses the intended meaning that the person understands the language. This is an incorrect use of adjectives.