Movies— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: Your answer is somewhat unclear and contains irrelevant information, such as the stereotype about women liking rum, which does not relate to the question. Try to keep your response focused and concise, directly answering the question with clear supporting details. Avoid redundancy and ensure your sentences are natural and coherent.

Ví dụ: I don't watch movies very often because of my busy schedule. However, when I have free time, I like to download and watch the latest detective movies, as I enjoy their intriguing plots.

Gợi ý: Your answer has some hesitation and unclear references, such as 'I like to watch her.' Try to speak more fluently and use clear pronouns. Also, use linking words to connect your ideas logically and provide specific reasons for your preferences.

Ví dụ: I usually watch detective movies, particularly those from Hollywood and other foreign countries, because they have intricate plots that keep me guessing. Sometimes, my husband chooses the movie, and I enjoy watching his selections as well.

Gợi ý: Your answer is incomplete and contains some grammatical errors. Try to complete your thoughts fully and use correct sentence structures. Also, avoid repetition and use linking words to make your answer coherent and natural.

Ví dụ: I prefer going to the cinema when I have free time because it's a fun way to relax and spend time with friends and family. However, when I'm busy, I usually watch movies at home for convenience.

Gợi ý: Your answer has many hesitations and some awkward phrasing. Try to speak more confidently and use clear, natural expressions. Also, organise your ideas logically using linking words and provide specific benefits of watching foreign language movies.

Ví dụ: Yes, watching movies in other languages is very useful because it helps us learn about different cultures and customs. Additionally, it improves our language skills by exposing us to new vocabulary and pronunciation.

× I don't have much time to watch movies.

✓ I don't have much time to watch movies.

The sentence is grammatically correct; 'much time' is correctly used with uncountable noun 'time'. No correction needed.

× I prefer to download the latest movie initial screen and watch it.

✓ I prefer to download the latest movie's initial screen and watch it.

The phrase 'movie initial screen' is unclear and missing a possessive form. Adding the possessive 'movie's' clarifies that the initial screen belongs to the movie.

× there is a stereotype about women liking rum.

✓ there is a stereotype about women liking rum.

The sentence is grammatically correct. However, the meaning might be unclear or contextually odd, but grammatically no error.

× especially when they originate from, uh, foreign countries and based on Hollywood because they have an intricate plot and we cannot predict the end of these movies.

✓ especially when they originate from, uh, foreign countries and are based in Hollywood because they have intricate plots and we cannot predict the end of these movies.

The phrase 'based on Hollywood' is incorrect; the correct preposition is 'based in Hollywood'. Also, 'an intricate plot' should be plural 'intricate plots' to agree with plural 'movies'.

× And my husband sometimes, uh, uh, choose a movie and I have to follow his lead because he's good at it and I like to watch her.

✓ And my husband sometimes, uh, uh, chooses a movie and I have to follow his lead because he's good at it and I like to watch it.

The verb 'choose' should be 'chooses' to agree with the singular subject 'my husband'. Also, 'watch her' is incorrect; the pronoun should be 'it' referring to the movie.

× I prefer to hang out with my friends and families and go to cinema because it's like a leisure activity for us and we can enjoy when we bond each other and go to cinemas.

✓ I prefer to hang out with my friends and family and go to the cinema because it's like a leisure activity for us and we can enjoy bonding with each other and going to the cinema.

'Families' should be singular 'family' when referring to one's own family. 'Go to cinema' requires the definite article 'the'. 'Bond each other' is incorrect; the correct phrase is 'bond with each other'. Also, 'go to cinemas' should be 'go to the cinema' for general activity.

× But when I don't have time, especially on.

✓ But when I don't have time, especially on busy days, I prefer to watch movies at home.

The sentence is incomplete and lacks an object or complement after 'especially on'. Adding a phrase like 'busy days' completes the sentence and clarifies the meaning.

× Definitely, I believe that it's, uh, useful because we can, uh, get to know and familiar with different cultures and customs when they, when we watch their movies.

✓ Definitely, I believe that it's, uh, useful because we can, uh, get to know and become familiar with different cultures and customs when we watch their movies.

The phrase 'get to know and familiar with' is incorrect; it should be 'get to know and become familiar with' to use the verb form properly.

× And the other thing that I like to mention is increase and raise and improve our language skills and, umm, uh, we can get a lot of experience when we watch, uh, uh, different movie.

✓ And the other thing that I like to mention is increasing and improving our language skills and, umm, uh, we can gain a lot of experience when we watch, uh, uh, different movies.

The verbs 'increase and raise and improve' are incorrectly used in base form; they should be gerunds 'increasing and improving' to function as nouns. Also, 'get a lot of experience' is better as 'gain a lot of experience'. 'Different movie' should be plural 'different movies'.