Movies— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: 回答は自然ですが、"Unix"は映画配信サービスとして不適切な語彙であり、"time consuming"の使い方も少し不自然です。より正確な語彙を使い、文を簡潔にまとめることを意識しましょう。

Ví dụ: I watch movies at least once a month, usually using streaming services like Netflix on my smartphone. I rarely go to the cinema because it takes a lot of time.

Gợi ý: "musical music"や"Harriet's 1960 to 1970s"などの表現が不明瞭で、文法的な誤りもあります。具体的で正確な表現を使い、文法を改善しましょう。

Ví dụ: I usually watch sci-fi movies and musicals from the 1960s and 1970s because I enjoy the unique atmosphere and cultural significance of that era.

Gợi ý: 話し言葉のフィラー（"uh", "umm"）が多く、冗長な表現もあります。より流暢で簡潔な回答を心がけ、フィラーを減らしましょう。

Ví dụ: I prefer watching movies at home because it's more convenient and relaxing. I can watch whatever I want, whenever I want, and pause the movie whenever necessary.

Gợi ý: 文法の誤りが多く、意味が伝わりにくいです。"swimming services"は誤りで、"streaming services"が正しいです。文法と語彙を正確に使いましょう。

Ví dụ: Yes, I think watching movies in other languages is useful because it helps improve pronunciation and understanding of grammar. I usually watch English movies with subtitles on streaming services.

× In many cases I use streaming services by smartphone such as Netflix, Unix and other platforms.

✓ In many cases I use streaming services on my smartphone such as Netflix, Unix and other platforms.

The preposition 'by' is incorrectly used here. When referring to using a device, the correct preposition is 'on'. Therefore, 'by smartphone' should be corrected to 'on my smartphone'.

× I don't go to a cinema so much because it's a very time consuming.

✓ I don't go to the cinema very often because it's very time-consuming.

The phrase 'so much' is informal and awkward here; 'very often' is more appropriate. Also, 'a cinema' should be 'the cinema' when referring to the general activity. 'Time consuming' should be hyphenated as 'time-consuming' when used as an adjective.

× I always watch sci-fi and musical music which was made in Harriet's 1960 to 1970s.

✓ I always watch sci-fi and musical movies which were made in the 1960s to 1970s.

'Musical music' is redundant; 'musical movies' or 'musicals' is better. 'Harriet's' is unclear and likely incorrect. The phrase '1960 to 1970s' should be '1960s to 1970s'. Also, 'was' should be 'were' to agree with plural 'movies'.

× I liked the atmosphere of this era, which the move was very important for the culture.

✓ I liked the atmosphere of this era, in which the movies were very important for the culture.

The relative clause is incorrect. 'Which the move was' is ungrammatical; it should be 'in which the movies were'. Also, 'move' should be 'movies' and plural verb 'were' is needed.

× Uh, I can watch whatever you want and uh, whenever I want, umm, it's very uh, relaxing and uh, comfortable time for me.

✓ Uh, I can watch whatever I want and, uh, whenever I want. Umm, it's a very relaxing and comfortable time for me.

The pronoun 'you' is incorrect here; it should be 'I' to match the subject. Also, the sentence is better split for clarity. 'Relaxing and comfortable time' needs the article 'a'.

× I'm watching movies by English makes people understand how to pronounce and construct the structure of the grammar really well, so I always watched by swimming services with English subtitles.

✓ Watching movies in English helps people understand how to pronounce words and construct grammatical structures really well, so I always watch using streaming services with English subtitles.

The preposition 'by' is incorrectly used; 'in English' is correct. 'I'm watching' should be 'Watching' to form a general statement. 'Watched' should be 'watch' to maintain present tense. 'Swimming services' is a typo and should be 'streaming services'. Also, 'construct the structure of the grammar' is awkward; 'construct grammatical structures' is better.