Movies— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: Your answer is somewhat unclear and contains grammatical errors. Try to give a direct response first, then add clear supporting details using correct grammar and vocabulary. Avoid redundancy and unclear phrases like 'dating model' and 'same wavelengths'.

Ví dụ: I watch movies about once a week because it's a relaxing activity my husband and I enjoy together. Since we met at university, watching films has been a way for us to spend quality time and share interests.

Gợi ý: Your answer is generally relevant but contains grammatical mistakes and some awkward phrasing. Use singular/plural forms correctly and avoid filler words like 'you know'. Also, link your ideas smoothly and be more specific about why these genres impress you.

Ví dụ: I usually watch all kinds of movies, but science fiction and animation leave the deepest impression on me. These genres expand my perspective and broaden my horizons by showing imaginative worlds and creative stories.

Gợi ý: Your answer is unclear and contains many hesitations and incomplete sentences. Try to give a clear, concise response with proper grammar and vocabulary. Avoid filler words and finish your thoughts fully.

Ví dụ: I prefer watching movies at the cinema because the big screen and sound system create a more immersive and relaxing experience than watching at home.

Gợi ý: Your answer shows a good idea but is affected by unclear phrasing and grammatical errors. Express your opinion clearly and support it with specific reasons. Avoid filler words and incomplete sentences.

Ví dụ: Absolutely. Watching movies in other languages is very helpful for language learning because it exposes you to new vocabulary and expressions in context, which improves your understanding and speaking skills.

× I almost watch movies once a week because it's a good soothing, you know, dating model with my husband.

✓ I almost watch movies once a week because it's a good soothing, you know, dating mode with my husband.

The word 'model' is incorrect in this context; the correct word is 'mode' which means a way or manner of doing something. This is a vocabulary choice rather than a grammar issue, but it affects clarity.

× So when since we met in the university, we decided to watch movies because we have the same same wavelengths.

✓ Since we met at university, we decided to watch movies because we have the same wavelength.

The phrase 'when since' is redundant; only one conjunction is needed. Also, 'in the university' should be 'at university' in British English. 'Same same wavelengths' is repetitive; 'same wavelength' is the correct expression. The sentence structure is corrected for clarity and grammatical accuracy.

× To be honest, I always watch all kinds of movies but which make me live deepest impression is, you know, the science fiction movie and the animation movie.

✓ To be honest, I always watch all kinds of movies but the ones which leave the deepest impression on me are, you know, science fiction movies and animated movies.

The original sentence has singular/plural mismatches: 'movie' should be plural 'movies' to match 'science fiction' and 'animation'. Also, 'make me live deepest impression' is incorrect; it should be 'leave the deepest impression on me'. The sentence is restructured for grammatical correctness and clarity.

× So I like watching all kinds of movie because it really expand my perspective and broaden my horizons.

✓ So I like watching all kinds of movies because they really expand my perspective and broaden my horizons.

'All kinds of movie' should be 'all kinds of movies' to match plural form. Also, 'it really expand' should be 'they really expand' to agree with the plural subject 'movies'. Subject-verb agreement is corrected.

× Uh, I prefer to go to the department store to see a movie in the cinema because, uh, you know, umm, it, it, it gives, give, it gave me the sense of satisfaction and, you know, relaxation.

✓ Uh, I prefer to go to the department store to see a movie in the cinema because, you know, it gives me a sense of satisfaction and relaxation.

The sentence has redundant words and incorrect verb forms ('gives, give, it gave'). The correct verb form is 'gives' to agree with singular subject 'it'. Also, 'the sense' is better as 'a sense' here. The sentence is simplified and corrected for verb agreement and article use.

× Umm, and it's quite different as.

✓ Umm, and it's quite different.

The phrase 'different as' is incorrect; 'different' does not require 'as' after it. The sentence is corrected by removing the unnecessary preposition.

× Absolutely. I think it is the most helpful to watch movies when you want to learn another language.

✓ Absolutely. I think it is most helpful to watch movies when you want to learn another language.

The phrase 'the most helpful' is used incorrectly here; 'most helpful' without 'the' is more natural in this context. This is a subtle modal/modal-like usage issue affecting the sentence's naturalness.

× In my perspective, especially in my experiences, I learn a lot of new words and expressions through watching movies because you know it is a make me you immer make it.

✓ From my perspective, especially in my experience, I learn a lot of new words and expressions through watching movies because, you know, it helps me immerse myself.

'In my perspective' should be 'From my perspective'. 'In my experiences' should be 'in my experience' (uncountable). The phrase 'it is a make me you immer make it' is unclear and incorrect; it is corrected to 'it helps me immerse myself' to convey the intended meaning. Pronoun use and phrase clarity are improved.