Movies— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: Your answer is generally clear but could be more natural and concise. Avoid redundancy like 'I often watch movies' followed by 'I like horror thriller movies the most' without linking them smoothly. Also, clarify 'Climax Sport' as it is unclear whether it's a movie or genre. Use linking words to connect ideas and provide more specific details.

Ví dụ: I often watch movies, especially horror thrillers because they create a lot of suspense. For example, my favorite movie is "Climax Sport," which has an intense and thrilling plot.

Gợi ý: Your answer is relevant and includes supporting details, but there are minor grammatical errors and some awkward phrasing. Use plural forms correctly ('movies' instead of 'movie') and improve sentence flow by using linking words. Also, specify the movie title clearly and provide more vivid descriptions.

Ví dụ: I usually watch horror thriller films because they are suspenseful and keep me on the edge of my seat. For instance, one of my favorite movies is "A Diary," which has an intense storyline and an unexpected twist at the end.

Gợi ý: Your answer has several grammatical errors and unnatural expressions. For example, 'don't oftenly used to visit cinema' is incorrect. Also, 'rise out on the volume' and 'I don't get an headache' need correction. Try to use simple, clear sentences and correct vocabulary. Use linking words to explain reasons coherently.

Ví dụ: I don't often go to the cinema. Usually, I prefer watching movies or series at home because I can adjust the volume as I like, which helps me avoid headaches.

Gợi ý: Your answer shows good ideas but lacks clarity and has incomplete sentences. Avoid vague phrases like 'I can also have idea about.' Use complete sentences and link your ideas logically. Also, correct grammar such as 'other language' to 'other languages' and improve word choice for naturalness.

Ví dụ: Absolutely, watching movies in other languages is helpful for learning. For example, I watch English movies with subtitles and practice shadowing to improve my language skills.

× I like horror thriller movies the most because there will be more suspense.

✓ I like horror thriller movies the most because there is more suspense.

The phrase 'there will be more suspense' incorrectly uses future tense 'will be' when referring to a general characteristic of horror thriller movies. The correct form is 'there is more suspense' to indicate a present general truth.

× One of my favorite movie is a Diary because of its intense storyline and unexpected twist at the end.

✓ One of my favorite movies is Diary because of its intense storyline and unexpected twist at the end.

The phrase 'One of my favorite movie' is incorrect because 'one of' should be followed by a plural noun. Also, the article 'a' before 'Diary' is unnecessary if 'Diary' is a title. Therefore, 'movies' is plural and 'Diary' is used without 'a'.

× I don't oftenly used to visit cinema.

✓ I don't often visit the cinema.

The word 'oftenly' is not a correct adverb form; the correct adverb is 'often'. Also, 'used to' is incorrectly combined with 'don't'. The correct expression is 'I don't often visit'. Additionally, 'cinema' should be preceded by 'the'.

× Typically I love to watch series or movies from my home so I can rise out on the volume as per my wish.

✓ Typically, I love to watch series or movies from my home so I can turn up the volume as I wish.

The phrase 'rise out on the volume' is incorrect; the correct expression is 'turn up the volume'. Also, 'as per my wish' is better expressed as 'as I wish'. A comma after 'Typically' improves clarity.

× Therefore I don't get an headache.

✓ Therefore, I don't get a headache.

The article 'an' is incorrectly used before 'headache' which starts with a consonant sound. The correct article is 'a'. Also, a comma after 'Therefore' improves sentence flow.

× Absolutely, it is helpful to learn other language by watching movies.

✓ Absolutely, it is helpful to learn other languages by watching movies.

The phrase 'other language' should be plural 'other languages' because it refers to languages in general. Also, 'by watching movies' is correct preposition usage here.

× Therefore there will be subtitles also.

✓ Therefore, there are subtitles as well.

The phrase 'there will be subtitles' incorrectly uses future tense when referring to a general fact. The correct form is 'there are subtitles'. Also, 'as well' is more natural than 'also' at the end of the sentence.

× I especially need to get knowledge about English, therefore I typically practice my shadowing technique.

✓ I especially need to gain knowledge of English; therefore, I typically practice my shadowing technique.

The phrase 'get knowledge about English' is better expressed as 'gain knowledge of English'. Also, a semicolon or period should separate the two independent clauses, and commas after 'therefore' improve clarity.

× I can also have idea about.

✓ I can also get ideas about it.

The original sentence is incomplete and lacks an object. Adding 'get ideas about it' completes the thought and corrects the sentence structure.