E-books— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: Try to avoid incomplete sentences and redundancy. Make your answer more concise and clear by finishing your thoughts fully and using linking words to connect ideas logically.

Ví dụ: I enjoy both e-books and paper books. E-books are convenient and offer a wide variety, while paper books are more satisfying because I like the smell of the pages.

Gợi ý: Your answer is incomplete and lacks detail. Provide a full sentence and add specific information about when you read online to make your response clearer and more natural.

Ví dụ: I usually read online whenever I have free time during the day, such as in the evenings or on weekends.

Gợi ý: Avoid filler words like 'uh' and incomplete sentences. Use linking words to connect your ideas and be more specific about why you will read more online in the future.

Ví dụ: Yes, definitely. Reading online is very convenient because I can carry hundreds of books anywhere. Moreover, it helps me stay updated with news and emails.

Gợi ý: Complete your sentences and use linking words to organise your ideas clearly. Be more specific about the types of work-related materials you read online.

Ví dụ: I like to read various things online, such as international news to stay informed about global issues. I also enjoy books, novels, and stories. Additionally, I access work-related documents online, which are only available digitally.

Gợi ý: Avoid sentence fragments and improve coherence by linking your ideas. Be more specific about how paper reading is soothing and why it helps understanding better.

Ví dụ: Reading online differs from paper in several ways. For instance, online reading can be distracting due to multimedia content and hyperlinks. In contrast, reading on paper is more soothing and helps me concentrate better, which improves my understanding.

× Also they have wide range of variety.

✓ Also they have a wide range of variety.

The phrase 'wide range' requires the indefinite article 'a' before it because 'range' is a singular countable noun. Omitting 'a' leads to incorrect grammar.

× However, paper books are more satisfying and compared to ebooks because I like the smell of each pages and.

✓ However, paper books are more satisfying compared to ebooks because I like the smell of each page.

The sentence structure is incorrect and incomplete. 'More satisfying and compared to ebooks' is awkward; it should be 'more satisfying compared to ebooks'. Also, 'each pages' is incorrect because 'each' is singular and should be followed by a singular noun 'page'. The sentence ends abruptly with 'and' which is incomplete.

× Whenever I get free time during my.

✓ Whenever I get free time during my day.

The sentence is incomplete and lacks an object after 'my'. Adding 'day' completes the phrase and makes the sentence grammatically correct.

× Yes, definitely because it's very convenient way, uh, we can carry hundreds of books anytime anywhere And it's really amazed me a lot and I get updated with news and mails anytime, so definitely will be.

✓ Yes, definitely because it's a very convenient way; we can carry hundreds of books anytime, anywhere. It really amazes me a lot and I get updated with news and emails anytime, so I definitely will.

The modal verb 'will' needs a subject 'I' before it. Also, 'amazed' should be 'amazes' to agree with the present tense subject 'it'. 'Mails' is better as 'emails' in this context. The sentence was run-on and needed punctuation for clarity.

× There are various things such as I read international news to get update from global issues.

✓ There are various things such as international news that I read to get updates on global issues.

The sentence structure is awkward. 'I read international news' should be rephrased to fit after 'such as'. Also, 'get update' should be 'get updates' and 'from global issues' should be 'on global issues' to use the correct preposition.

× Now also I have work related things which I can see online only and it's.

✓ Now, I also have work-related things which I can see only online.

The sentence is incomplete and awkward. 'It's' at the end is incomplete. 'Work related' should be hyphenated as 'work-related'. The placement of 'only' is better before 'online' for clarity.

× First of all, reading online sometime may distract reader because of their multimedia content and hyperlinks.

✓ First of all, reading online sometimes may distract readers because of their multimedia content and hyperlinks.

The adverb 'sometime' should be 'sometimes' to indicate frequency. 'Reader' should be plural 'readers' to agree with 'their' which is plural.

× Also, we find reading on paper is more soothing, they provide good information and we can understand.

✓ Also, we find reading on paper is more soothing; it provides good information and we can understand it better.

The pronoun 'they' incorrectly refers to 'reading on paper' which is singular and should be 'it'. The sentence was incomplete and needed clarification with 'understand it better'.