Part 1
Giám khảo
Which do you prefer, e-books or paper books?
Thí sinh
I prefer reading paper books because they are easy on my eyes, especially after long hours of screen time.
Giám khảo
When do you usually read online?
Thí sinh
I usually read online in the evening since I'm very busy with studying during the day, so evening is my free time to enjoy reading.
Giám khảo
Will you read more online in the future?
Thí sinh
Yes, because the technology develops very rapidly. I think more people will choose to read online in the future since it's very convenient.
Giám khảo
What do you like to read online?
Thí sinh
I usually read art novels or fashion magazines because they keep me updated on the latest trends.
Giám khảo
How is reading online different from paper?
Thí sinh
In my opinion, reading online is more convenient and portable than paper books because you can access content anytime and anywhere if you are free.
Which do you prefer, e-books or paper books?
Điểm: 85.0Gợi ý: 你的回答表达清晰且自然,但可以增加一些具体细节来丰富内容,比如说明纸质书对眼睛的具体好处。
Ví dụ: I prefer reading paper books because they are easier on my eyes, especially after long hours of screen time, which can cause eye strain and headaches.
When do you usually read online?
Điểm: 90.0Gợi ý: 回答结构合理,内容具体。可以使用连接词使句子更流畅,例如使用“because”或“so”。
Ví dụ: I usually read online in the evening because I am very busy studying during the day, so the evening is my free time to enjoy reading.
Will you read more online in the future?
Điểm: 80.0Gợi ý: 回答内容较简单,建议增加更多具体理由和预测,使用更丰富的词汇。
Ví dụ: Yes, I believe I will read more online in the future because technology is advancing rapidly, making digital reading more accessible and convenient for everyone.
What do you like to read online?
Điểm: 85.0Gợi ý: 回答简洁明了,但“art novels”表达不够准确,建议使用更合适的词汇,并增加细节。
Ví dụ: I usually read art-related novels and fashion magazines online because they help me stay informed about the latest trends and creative ideas.
How is reading online different from paper?
Điểm: 90.0Gợi ý: 回答内容具体且结构清晰,可以增加连接词使表达更连贯。
Ví dụ: In my opinion, reading online is more convenient and portable than paper books because you can access content anytime and anywhere, which suits a busy lifestyle.
× Yes, because the technology develops very rapidly.
✓ Yes, because technology develops very rapidly.
这里的'the technology'使用了定冠词'the',但在泛指技术发展时,通常不加定冠词,直接用'technology'。因此应去掉'the'。
× Yes, because the technology develops very rapidly.
✓ Yes, because technology develops very rapidly.
在表达一般概念时,通常不使用定冠词'the','technology'作为不可数名词,表示技术整体,不需要定冠词。
× In my opinion, reading online is more convenient and portable than paper books because you can access content anytime and anywhere if you are free.
✓ In my opinion, reading online is more convenient and portable than paper books because you can access content anytime and anywhere when you are free.
这里的'if you are free'表达条件,语境更适合用时间状语从句'when you are free',表示在你有空的时候。