E-books— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: Be more concise and direct: start with a clear topic sentence stating your preference, then give one or two specific, relevant reasons using linking words. Avoid vague phrases like 'numerous aspects' and unnecessary repetition.

Ví dụ: I prefer e-books to paper books because they are more convenient and environmentally friendly. For example, I can carry hundreds of books on my tablet and read anywhere, and using e-books reduces paper waste, which helps the environment.

Gợi ý: Give a clear and natural topic sentence and avoid repeating the same idea. Add a specific detail about what type of reading you do or how long you read, and use linking words to explain purpose.

Ví dụ: I usually read online in the evenings after work to relax. For instance, I spend about 30–45 minutes reading short articles or a chapter of a novel to unwind before bed.

Gợi ý: Answer directly about future likelihood using a clear modal (will/won't) and give a specific reason with linking words. Keep sentences simple and avoid awkward phrasing like 'a bit fascinated' or 'personally delighted.'

Ví dụ: Yes, I will probably read more online in the future because digital devices are becoming more convenient. For example, as audiobooks and e-readers improve, I expect to use them more for commuting and study.

Gợi ý: Provide a clear topic sentence naming the main types of material you read, then give one or two specific examples or reasons. Avoid filler phrases like 'and all apart from that' and maintain coherence with linking words.

Ví dụ: I mainly read textbooks and novels online. For example, I read chapters from my course textbooks for study and fiction novels like contemporary mysteries for leisure.

Gợi ý: Start with a clear comparison sentence (e.g., 'Reading online differs from reading on paper in several ways'), then give two specific contrasts using linking words (e.g., 'whereas', 'however'). Complete your thoughts—avoid leaving sentences unfinished.

Ví dụ: Reading online differs from paper reading in that online reading is more convenient and portable, whereas paper books often help me concentrate better. For instance, I get distracted by links and notifications online, but I focus more deeply when I read a physical book.

× Actually pretty much both but mostly I guess enjoy reading on ebooks as it offers numerous aspects which I find really interesting.

✓ Actually I enjoy both, but I mostly prefer reading e-books because they offer many features that I find interesting.

The original sentence has incorrect conjunction use and awkward sentence structure ('pretty much both but mostly I guess enjoy' is confusing). 'but' must join two clauses clearly. Also 'ebooks' should be hyphenated or written 'e-books' and verb agreement: 'it offers' should be 'they offer' to agree with plural 'e-books'. Rephrase to a clear comparative structure: 'I enjoy both, but I mostly prefer...' and change 'numerous aspects' to 'many features' for natural English.

× For instance it's very eco friendly and also I can read everywhere and at any time.

✓ For instance, they are very eco-friendly, and I can read them everywhere and at any time.

The original mixes singular and plural references and omits a comma after 'For instance'. 'E-books' (plural) requires the plural verb 'are' and pronoun 'them'. 'Eco friendly' should be hyphenated as 'eco-friendly'. Add 'them' after 'read' to specify the object.

× I usually read online in the evening time when I get a bit free time to reduce my stress and tranquil my body.

✓ I usually read online in the evening when I have a bit of free time to reduce my stress and relax my body.

Use present simple 'have' not 'get' for habitual actions; 'evening time' is more natural as 'evening'; 'a bit free time' should be 'a bit of free time'. 'Tranquil my body' is incorrect collocation — use 'relax my body' or 'calm myself'.

× It would be great fun if I can do so because I was a bit fascinated about reading online, so if I can do in the future I will be personally delighted.

✓ It would be great if I could do so, because I have become fascinated with reading online, so if I can do it in the future I will be very delighted.

Conditional sentence requires past subjunctive 'could' after 'would be'. 'Was a bit fascinated about' is awkward; use present perfect 'have become fascinated with' to show ongoing interest. Add 'it' after 'do' and replace 'personally delighted' with 'very delighted' for natural phrasing.

× I enjoy reading online several topics including my textbooks and also some stories and all apart from that along with I also like some novels.

✓ I enjoy reading several kinds of material online, including my textbooks, some short stories, and novels.

Original has incorrect word order and excess fillers ('and all apart from that along with'). Use 'reading several kinds of material' and list items with commas. 'Some stories' is vague; 'short stories' fits better. Remove redundant 'also' and streamline the sentence.

× There are several way is different we do online to paper because I think reading in paper it boasts your concentrates and also build your patience.

✓ There are several ways in which reading online differs from reading on paper, because I think reading on paper improves concentration and builds patience.

The original sentence has multiple structure errors: 'several way is different we do online to paper' is ungrammatical. Use 'ways in which' and 'differs from'. 'Reading in paper' should be 'reading on paper'. 'Boasts your concentrates' is incorrect; use 'improves concentration'. Also change 'build your patience' to 'builds patience' for subject-verb agreement.

× On the other hand reading online.

✓ On the other hand, reading online is more convenient and faster.

This sentence fragment lacks a verb and object. Complete the thought by adding a verb and complements (e.g., 'is more convenient and faster'). Add a comma after 'On the other hand'.