E-books— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: Be natural and concise: give a clear topic sentence, one or two specific reasons, and avoid sentence fragments. Use linking words to connect ideas (for example, because/so/therefore). Also correct tense and pronoun usage (use present tense and consistent subject).

Ví dụ: I prefer paper books because I can concentrate better when holding a physical copy. For example, paper books help me avoid online distractions, so I usually finish longer chapters more easily.

Gợi ý: Start with a direct topic sentence, then give specific examples and a linking phrase. Avoid fillers like “OK” and broken phrases; use plural/singular correctly (e.g., online articles).

Ví dụ: I usually read online to catch up on the news, especially in the morning. For instance, I check social media headlines and several online articles from news sites during my commute.

Gợi ý: Give a clear, full sentence as a topic sentence and then a brief reason with linking words. Don’t split sentences or use hesitations. Use future tense correctly (I will/read more).

Ví dụ: No, I probably won't read more online in the future; I think I will read more paper books because I get tired of screens after a long day.

Gợi ý: Answer directly and provide a reason with a specific detail. Remove fillers (uh) and sentence fragments. Explain what ‘comfortable’ means (format, layout, accessibility).

Ví dụ: I like to read manga online because it is easy to access and often formatted for scrolling on my phone. For example, I can quickly find new chapters and read them anywhere without carrying heavy volumes.

Gợi ý: Give a clear comparison with two or three specific differences, use linking words (whereas, while, for example), and avoid fillers. Provide concise supporting details to illustrate differences (eye strain, navigation, immersion).

Ví dụ: Reading online is more convenient and quick to search, whereas paper reading feels more immersive and easier on the eyes. For example, online reading can cause eye strain from backlighting, while paper books help me focus for longer periods.

× I prefer paper books because.

✓ I prefer paper books because they help me concentrate on reading.

The original sentence ends with a conjunction 'because' and is a sentence fragment (no main clause after because). This is a sentence structure error. Suggestion: complete the thought by adding a clause that explains the reason, e.g. 'because they help me concentrate on reading.' Use a clear subject and verb after because.

× It made me more concentrated on reading, so I like paper books.

✓ They help me concentrate more when I read, so I like paper books.

The phrase 'made me more concentrated' uses past tense and a participle awkwardly and does not match the general statement about a preference. This is a problem with verb form and tense. Use present simple for general facts: 'help me concentrate' or 'help me concentrate more when I read.' Avoid 'concentrated' as an adjective here; use the verb 'concentrate.'

× I usually read online about the news.

✓ I usually read news online.

The prepositional phrasing 'read online about the news' is awkward and contains a preposition misuse plus word order issues. Use present simple for habitual action and place the object before 'online' or use 'online' adverbially: 'read news online.' This improves natural word order and clarity.

× OK. Such as social media, online article.

✓ For example, I read news on social media and online articles.

The original is a fragment and lacks a main verb; it's an incomplete list. This is a sentence structure error. Combine ideas into a full sentence with subject and verb: 'I read news on social media and online articles.' Use plural 'articles' for general reference.

× No, I think I. Read more paper books in the future because I'm tired online.

✓ No, I think I will read more paper books in the future because I'm tired of reading online.

The original has an incorrect sentence break 'I. Read' producing a fragment and missing future marker. Also 'tired online' is incorrect preposition usage. Use 'will' for future intent and 'tired of reading online' to show what causes the tiredness. This fixes sentence structure and tense.

× I'd like to read manga. Online, uh, because. It is. Comfortable.

✓ I'd like to read manga online because it is comfortable.

The original contains many unnecessary breaks and fragments ('because. It is. Comfortable.') which break sentence flow. Combine into one sentence using 'because it is comfortable.' Keep 'read manga online' as a single phrase. This corrects present participle/structure issues and improves fluency.

× Yeah, it's completely different, uh, between, uh, paper reading and, uh, online reading.

✓ Yeah, reading on paper is completely different from reading online.

The original uses awkward word order 'different between...and' and filler words. Use the correct comparative structure 'different from' and parallel gerunds: 'reading on paper' and 'reading online.' This corrects sentence structure and preposition usage.

× For example, I read. Paper books.

✓ For example, I read paper books.

The original splits the clause into fragments 'I read. Paper books.' This is a sentence structure error. Combine into one coherent sentence 'I read paper books.'