Part 1
Giám khảo
Which do you prefer, e-books or paper books?
Thí sinh
Well, I prefer reading paper books because I can underline important passages and take notes which can help me remember key points.
Giám khảo
When do you usually read online?
Thí sinh
Well, I usually read online in the evening. I like to read in novels on my tablet after a busy day, usually about 30 to 60 minutes before going to bed.
Giám khảo
Will you read more online in the future?
Thí sinh
Well, I think that I will read more online in the future. As a postgraduate, I need to read more academic literature on the websites like Google Scholar to complete my papers.
Giám khảo
What do you like to read online?
Thí sinh
Well, I like to read romance novels online, and I often read them on my phone before going to bed to relax, and I think that I can learn the healthy ways of expressing love.
Giám khảo
How is reading online different from paper?
Thí sinh
Well, I think that reading online is more convenient than reading paper books because I can carry many books on a single divorce and quickly search for information.
Which do you prefer, e-books or paper books?
Điểm: 78.0Gợi ý: 回答直接且明确,但句子较长且有轻微重复(underline和take notes后再说help me remember),可用更自然的连词并补充具体例子来增强内容。注意句子数量不超过五句并且使用更多相关词汇。
Ví dụ: I prefer paper books because I can underline important passages and write notes in the margins. For example, when I study literature, marking themes and jotting down page references helps me review key ideas later.
When do you usually read online?
Điểm: 74.0Gợi ý: 回答清楚但有语法小错误("read in novels"应为"read novels")且略显啰嗦。可用一到两句更自然地交代时间、设备和原因,加入连接词使表达更连贯。
Ví dụ: I usually read online in the evening, about 30 to 60 minutes before bed on my tablet. I do this to relax after a busy day and unwind before sleep.
Will you read more online in the future?
Điểm: 82.0Gợi ý: 回答逻辑清晰并提供了原因,但可改进措辞("on the websites like Google Scholar"可更自然)並补充可能的具体数量或频率来增加细节。
Ví dụ: Yes, I expect to read more online in the future because as a postgraduate I need to access academic papers on platforms like Google Scholar and JSTOR. I now spend several hours a week reading research articles for my studies.
What do you like to read online?
Điểm: 70.0Gợi ý: 内容明确但句子冗长且信息略混乱("learn the healthy ways"需要具体例子)。建议分成两句:说明类型和阅读习惯,再说明具体从中学到的例子或原因。
Ví dụ: I enjoy reading romance novels online, usually on my phone before bed to relax. For instance, some novels show good communication and respect between partners, which gives me ideas about healthy relationships.
How is reading online different from paper?
Điểm: 60.0Gợi ý: 回答有逻辑但存在严重用词错误("single divorce"应为"single device")影响理解,也只有一个理由且没有细节或连接词。建议纠正词汇错误,增加一两个具体对比点并使用连接词。
Ví dụ: Reading online is more convenient than paper because I can carry thousands of books on a single device and quickly search for specific information. However, paper books are easier on the eyes and better for making handwritten notes.
× I like to read in novels on my tablet after a busy day, usually about 30 to 60 minutes before going to bed.
✓ I like to read novels on my tablet after a busy day, usually about 30 to 60 minutes before going to bed.
句中短语“read in novels”中介词“in”使用不当。英语中通常说“read novels”或“read a novel”,不需要介词“in”。改为“I like to read novels”更符合英语习惯。建议:记住常用搭配,例如“read books/novels/articles”而不加“in”。
× As a postgraduate, I need to read more academic literature on the websites like Google Scholar to complete my papers.
✓ As a postgraduate, I need to read more academic literature on websites like Google Scholar to complete my papers.
句中“on the websites like Google Scholar”中定冠词“the”不必要。一般说“on websites like X”表示在像X这样的多个网站上。移除“the”使表达更自然。建议:当泛指某类网站时,用“websites like...”而不加“the”。
× I can carry many books on a single divorce and quickly search for information.
✓ I can carry many books on a single device and quickly search for information.
原句使用了错误的词“divorce”(离婚),显然是拼写或用词错误,应该为“device”(设备)。这是量词/名词选择错误导致语义不通。改为“device”后意思清晰:在一个设备上携带许多书。建议:写作或说话时检查同音或相似拼写词,确保所用名词符合语境。