Science— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: คำตอบควรใช้ประโยคที่เป็นธรรมชาติมากขึ้น และหลีกเลี่ยงความซ้ำซ้อน เช่น การใช้คำว่า "help me through improve knowledge" ที่ไม่ถูกต้อง ควรใช้โครงสร้างประโยคที่ชัดเจนและถูกต้องมากขึ้น

Ví dụ: Yes, I really enjoy studying science at school, especially chemistry, because I love conducting experiments and observing chemical reactions. This helps me improve my knowledge and gives me a great sense of satisfaction.

Gợi ý: ควรใช้คำเชื่อมที่เหมาะสมและคำศัพท์ที่ถูกต้อง เช่น "lightning" ควรเป็น "lighting" หรืออธิบายให้ชัดเจนมากขึ้น และหลีกเลี่ยงการใช้คำซ้ำ เช่น "currently" และ "right now"

Ví dụ: Yes, I use my science knowledge daily because I study science almost every day as a student. Moreover, many everyday activities, such as using lighting, involve scientific principles.

Gợi ý: ควรปรับปรุงโครงสร้างประโยคให้ถูกต้องและชัดเจน เช่น "something outside the world" ควรเป็น "things beyond our world" และใช้คำศัพท์ที่เหมาะสม เช่น "open my mind" และ "learn new things"

Ví dụ: Yes, I would like to learn more about astronomy because I love studying things beyond our world. It helps open my mind and allows me to learn new things about galaxies.

Gợi ý: คำตอบไม่ชัดเจนและมีข้อผิดพลาดทางไวยากรณ์ ควรตอบตรงประเด็นและใช้ตัวอย่างที่เหมาะสม เช่น อธิบายว่าทำไมวิทยาศาสตร์จึงสำคัญในชีวิตประจำวัน

Ví dụ: In my opinion, it is important for everyone to study science because it explains many facts about our daily lives. For example, cooking food and using technology both involve scientific knowledge.

Gợi ý: ควรใช้โครงสร้างประโยคที่ถูกต้องและคำศัพท์ที่เหมาะสม เช่น "like watching scientific programs related to astronomy" และใช้คำเชื่อมเพื่อความลื่นไหล

Ví dụ: Yes, I enjoy watching scientific programs related to astronomy because I find stars and planets mysterious and interesting.

× I love to do experiments and observe the chemical reaction with help me through improve knowledge and make me more satisfied.

✓ I love doing experiments and observing the chemical reactions which help me improve my knowledge and make me more satisfied.

The verbs 'love' and 'observe' should be followed by gerunds ('doing', 'observing') when expressing enjoyment of activities. Also, 'chemical reaction' should be plural 'chemical reactions' to match the context. The phrase 'with help me through improve knowledge' is incorrect; it should be 'which help me improve my knowledge' to correctly link the clause and use proper verb forms.

× some common activity in our daily life might use some science knowledge, for example lightning.

✓ some common activities in our daily life might use some science knowledge, for example, lightning.

The noun 'activity' should be plural 'activities' to agree with 'some'. Also, a comma is needed after 'for example' to separate the phrase properly. 'Lightning' is an example of a natural phenomenon, so the sentence is acceptable with these corrections.

× I would like to learn more about astronomy because I love to study something outside the world because it's helped me through open mind and learning new thing about our galaxies.

✓ I would like to learn more about astronomy because I love studying things outside the world as it has helped me open my mind and learn new things about our galaxies.

After 'love', the gerund form 'studying' is preferred over 'to study' when expressing enjoyment. 'Something' should be plural 'things' to match the context. 'It's helped me through open mind' is incorrect; it should be 'it has helped me open my mind'. Also, 'learning new thing' should be 'learn new things' to maintain parallel structure and correct plural form.

× From my perspective, everyone choose study about science because science is the fact of the thing in our life.

✓ From my perspective, everyone chooses to study science because science is a fact of things in our life.

The verb 'choose' must agree with the singular subject 'everyone', so it should be 'chooses'. The phrase 'choose study about science' is incorrect; it should be 'chooses to study science'. Also, 'the fact of the thing' is awkward and unclear; 'a fact of things' is more appropriate.

× For example dancing a club, forget food, uh using a science knowledge.

✓ For example, dancing at a club, forgetting food, and using scientific knowledge.

Prepositions are missing: 'dancing a club' should be 'dancing at a club'. 'Forget food' should be 'forgetting food' to maintain parallel gerund forms. 'Using a science knowledge' is incorrect; 'using scientific knowledge' is correct because 'knowledge' is uncountable and 'scientific' is the proper adjective.

× Yes, I like to watching scientific program like something late to astronomy.

✓ Yes, I like watching scientific programs, especially those related to astronomy.

After 'like', the gerund form 'watching' is preferred over 'to watching'. 'Scientific program' should be plural 'scientific programs' to match the context. 'Something late to astronomy' is unclear and incorrect; 'especially those related to astronomy' is a clearer expression.

× I like to study about stars and planet with is the mysterious and interesting.

✓ I like to study stars and planets, which are mysterious and interesting.

The phrase 'study about' is incorrect; 'study' does not require 'about'. 'Planet' should be plural 'planets' to match 'stars'. 'With is the mysterious and interesting' is incorrect; it should be 'which are mysterious and interesting' to correctly use the relative pronoun and verb agreement.