Science— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: Make your answer more grammatically correct and concise. Start with a clear topic sentence, then give one or two specific reasons using linking words (e.g., "because", "however"). Correct vocabulary (physics, chemistry) and reduce hesitations. Aim for 2–3 sentences and avoid filler sounds like "umm".

Ví dụ: I enjoy studying some sciences more than others. For example, I like biology because I find studying living organisms and how the body works fascinating, but I’m less interested in physics and chemistry because they involve complicated calculations.

Gợi ý: Give a direct, complete response and explain briefly how you use science in your job. Fix grammar and awkward phrasing; use linking words like "because" or "so" to show consequence. Keep it to 2–3 sentences and be specific about tasks.

Ví dụ: Yes. I use scientific knowledge every day because I work in health science, where I apply medical principles and data to help patients. For instance, I analyze test results and follow clinical protocols in my daily work.

Gợi ý: Clarify the subject you mean (perhaps "neuroscience" rather than "new law science") and give one or two clear reasons. Use correct terminology and reduce hesitations. Start with a topic sentence naming the field, then support with a specific detail about what you want to learn.

Ví dụ: I would like to study neuroscience because I’m curious about how the brain controls decision-making and problem-solving. For example, I want to learn how neurons communicate and how this affects behavior.

Gợi ý: Make your point clearer and correct factual language. Begin with a direct opinion, then give two specific reasons using linking words (e.g., "because", "for example"). Avoid vague phrases like "logistics knowledge" and replace with "basic scientific knowledge".

Ví dụ: Yes, I think basic scientific knowledge is important because it helps people understand the world and make informed decisions. For example, knowing basic health science can guide daily choices about diet and hygiene.

Gợi ý: Speak in the present and past clearly: mention past viewing and current opinion. Provide one specific example of how such shows helped you and use smoother linking phrases (e.g., "they helped me because"). Avoid fillers and improve grammar.

Ví dụ: Yes. I watched science shows when I was a child, and they encouraged my interest in science because they explained concepts in a simple and visual way. For instance, a kids’ program about animals made me curious about biology.

× Umm, as depend on the kind of science.

✓ Umm, it depends on the kind of science.

The original uses 'as depend on' which is ungrammatical. The correct structure is 'it depends on' using the dummy subject 'it' plus the verb 'depend' in third person singular form 'depends' followed by the preposition 'on'. Use 'it depends on' to indicate conditional dependence.

× If uh the calculate signs I'm not enjoying much, such as the physics and chemical,

✓ If it's the calculation subjects, I don't enjoy them much, such as physics and chemistry,

Multiple issues: subject-verb agreement and word choice. 'I'm not enjoying much' is incorrect for a general preference; use simple present 'I don't enjoy'. 'the calculate signs' is incorrect noun phrase; use 'calculation subjects' or 'subjects that involve calculation'. Third person singular 'it's' introduces subject; refer back with plural 'them' for 'subjects'. Also use correct nouns 'physics and chemistry'.

× but if it's like the biological science I enjoy it very much.

✓ but if it's biological science, I enjoy it very much.

The phrase 'like the biological science' is awkward. Remove 'the' and 'like' to form 'biological science'. Keep 'it' to refer to the subject. This fixes article and adjective-noun collocation.

× Yes, my career is involved about the science.

✓ Yes, my career is related to science.

'Involved about' is incorrect. Use 'related to' or 'involved in' to show connection. 'Related to science' is the most natural collocation.

× I work with the Health Science.

✓ I work in health science.

'the Health Science' is incorrect article use and capitalization. Use 'health science' as an uncountable field and preposition 'in' to indicate occupational field: 'I work in health science'.

× So if it's really late.

✓ So my work can be very demanding or I sometimes work late.

'So if it's really late.' is a sentence fragment without clear connection. Provide a complete clause that matches context about working late. Suggested corrections make a full sentence explaining the idea.

× I plan to learn about the new law science because I'm interested in the new law functions in our human bodies, umm, how they make decisions or thinking or solve the problem.

✓ I plan to learn about neurobiology because I'm interested in how neural systems in our bodies make decisions, think, and solve problems.

Several errors: 'new law science' is unclear—likely intended 'neuroscience' or 'neurobiology'. 'the new law functions' incorrect article and noun choice. Use precise term 'neural systems' or 'neuroscience'. Verbal forms need parallelism: 'make decisions, think, and solve problems' (base form verbs). Also use plural 'problems'.

× I think it's important because it's a bit of logistics knowledge.

✓ I think it's important because it's basic logistical knowledge.

'a bit of logistics knowledge' is awkward. Use 'basic logistical knowledge' or 'a bit of knowledge about logistics'. Adjusts article and adjective-noun collocation.

× If we could learn a basic science, we can't know about an everything in our world, our body.

✓ If we learn basic science, we can know more about everything in our world and our bodies.

Multiple modal and pronoun errors: 'could' and 'can't' conflicting—use present 'learn' and modal 'can'. 'an everything' is incorrect article; use 'everything' without an article. 'our body' should be plural 'our bodies' to match general meaning.

× So it is an important basic knowledge.

✓ So it is important basic knowledge.

'an important basic knowledge' is incorrect because 'knowledge' is uncountable and does not take 'an'. Remove the article 'an'.

× Yes, I used to watch the science kid shows when I was young and I think this resource is umm encourage me to learn and science because it can explain the science in an easy way.

✓ Yes, I used to watch science shows for kids when I was young, and I think these resources encouraged me to learn about science because they explain it in an easy way.

Errors with verb forms and agreement: 'is umm encourage' should be past 'encouraged' to match 'used to' and the timing. 'the science kid shows' is awkward; use 'science shows for kids'. 'this resource' should be plural 'these resources' and verbs agree 'they explain'. Also use 'learn about science' and maintain past tense consistency.