Science— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: Bạn cần sửa ngữ pháp cơ bản, dùng câu trả lời trực tiếp ngắn gọn, tránh lặp ý và sắp xếp logic. Cụ thể: (1) Bắt đầu bằng câu chủ đề rõ ràng (I don't enjoy studying science), (2) sửa lỗi động từ và cấu trúc (ví dụ: "I'm not really interested in science" hoặc "I don't enjoy studying science"), (3) tránh lặp từ (không nói "very hard" hai lần), (4) thêm một hoặc hai chi tiết cụ thể ngắn gọn giải thích lý do và kết thúc. Hãy giữ tối đa 3–4 câu. Ví dụ bạn có thể nói về một môn khoa học cụ thể hoặc một trải nghiệm học tập cụ thể để làm rõ.

Ví dụ: I don't enjoy studying science at school. I'm not really interested in it because I find the theoretical concepts difficult to understand and remember. For example, I struggled with remembering complex formulas in physics. Because of that, I usually focus more on subjects I find easier.

Gợi ý: Cần trả lời trực tiếp và hoàn chỉnh, tránh nói lắp và câu bị bỏ dở. Bắt đầu bằng câu chủ đề (No, I don't use it daily / Yes, I use some science every day). Nếu không dùng hàng ngày, nêu ví dụ rõ ràng một hoạt động hàng ngày mà bạn không áp dụng được. Sử dụng liên từ (because, so) để giải thích ngắn gọn và logic. Giữ 2–3 câu, tránh từ không cần thiết như "uh".

Ví dụ: No, I don't use my science knowledge every day. It is difficult for me to apply theoretical concepts in daily life, so I rarely use them outside class. Occasionally I use basic ideas, like measuring ingredients accurately when I cook.

Gợi ý: Cần nói rõ môn học bạn muốn học hơn và giải thích cụ thể lý do bằng câu rõ ràng, tránh dùng "however" nhiều lần. Sử dụng cấu trúc: Topic sentence + lý do cụ thể + ví dụ/chi tiết ngắn. Sửa ngữ pháp ("I'd love to learn more about chemistry" hoặc "I'm interested in chemistry"). Giữ 2–3 câu.

Ví dụ: I'd like to learn more about chemistry because I find how substances react with each other fascinating. For example, I want to understand everyday reactions like cooking or cleaning, and learn practical lab skills that help me perform experiments safely.

Gợi ý: Ý tưởng tốt nhưng cần diễn đạt rõ ràng và ngắn gọn hơn. Bắt đầu bằng câu khẳng định (Yes, it is important) rồi giải thích cụ thể với ví dụ thực tế (health, technology). Sửa lỗi ngữ pháp (ví dụ: "Everyone should learn basic scientific principles because..."), tránh từ thừa như "only" nếu không cần thiết.

Ví dụ: Yes, I think it is important for everyone to study basic science because it helps people understand health, the environment and technology. For instance, basic knowledge about nutrition and hygiene improves everyday decisions and safety.

Gợi ý: Cần câu trả lời rõ ràng về hiện tại và quá khứ, tránh nói lắp. Ví dụ: "I used to enjoy them as a child, but now I rarely watch them" và nêu lý do ngắn gọn (lack of time, different interests). Sắp xếp ý theo thứ tự thời gian và sửa ngữ pháp ("I don't really watch them now"). Giữ 2–3 câu.

Ví dụ: I used to enjoy watching science programs when I was a child because they were fascinating and easy to understand. However, I don't watch them much now because I have less free time and my interests have changed.

× No, I don't really interesting in interested in science subject at school because I find it very challenging to consume also theory which is very complicated and very hard to remember.

✓ No, I'm not really interested in science subjects at school because I find the theory very complicated and hard to remember.

Câu gốc sử dụng động từ/tính từ không chính xác ('don't really interesting' should be 'not really interested') and singular/plural mismatch ('science subject' -> 'science subjects'). Also 'consume also theory' is ungrammatical; replace with 'the theory'. Suggestion: use 'be + interested in' for interest and match noun number; keep sentence concise. Grammar problem type ID:13

× Also it's very hard difficult for me to remember it.

✓ Also it's very difficult for me to remember.

Redundant and conflicting modifiers 'hard difficult' should be one adjective. 'Remember it' can omit 'it' for conciseness. Suggestion: choose a single adjective ('difficult') and remove unnecessary pronouns. Grammar problem type ID:10

× As I mentioned earlier, I find it very challenging to, uh, apply it as a practical skill.

✓ As I mentioned earlier, I find it very challenging to apply my science knowledge as a practical skill.

Pronoun reference unclear ('it') — better specify 'my science knowledge'. Also filler 'uh' should be omitted in written response. Suggestion: clarify the object and maintain structure 'find it + adjective + to + verb'. Grammar problem type ID:26

× Or I can apply to the reality, which is very complicated, and also not have a.

✓ I cannot easily apply it to real-life situations because they are complicated.

Original sentence fragments and wrong structure: 'apply to the reality' is unnatural; 'and also not have a' is incomplete. Suggestion: use 'apply to real-life situations' and complete the clause with a verb ('cannot easily apply'). Grammar problem type ID:26

× However, I'd love a chemistry because I find very in quite interesting also.

✓ However, I'd love chemistry because I find it quite interesting.

Do not use the article 'a' with uncountable subject 'chemistry'. Word order and extra words are incorrect: 'find very in quite interesting also' should be 'find it quite interesting'. Suggestion: omit article and arrange words as 'find it quite interesting'. Grammar problem type ID:22

× However, it's also complicated and very hard to do the exercise.

✓ However, it's also complicated and very hard to do the exercises.

'Exercise' in this context is countable and plural if referring to practice problems; use 'exercises'. Suggestion: choose plural for general activities and keep infinitive 'to do'. Grammar problem type ID:8

× Definitely yes, because everyone can only learn and know the fundamental of science subject which is can improve their knowledge in the practical skill and real life situation.

✓ Definitely yes, because everyone can learn the fundamentals of science, which can improve their practical skills and real-life problem solving.

Multiple issues: 'fundamental' should be plural 'fundamentals'; 'science subject' unnecessary; 'can only learn' changes meaning—remove 'only'; 'their knowledge in the practical skill and real life situation' awkward—use plural 'practical skills' and 'real-life problem solving'. Suggestion: use plural nouns for general concepts and concise phrases. Grammar problem type ID:14

× Umm, just when I used to be a child, I was always watching Science Channel, which is free.

✓ When I was a child, I used to watch the Science Channel, which was free.

Use past habitual 'used to watch' not 'used to be a child, I was always watching'. Also 'which is free' should be past 'was free' if referring to past. Suggestion: use 'When I was a child' then 'used to watch' for repeated past actions. Grammar problem type ID:6

× I found it very interesting and very impressive.

✓ I found it very interesting and impressive.

Redundant 'very' repeated; combine adjectives with single 'very' or omit repetition for conciseness. Suggestion: 'very interesting and impressive' is acceptable, or 'very interesting and very impressive' can be simplified. Grammar problem type ID:13

× A bit, uh, cordially I've don't really interested in.

✓ A bit, uh, I’m not really interested in it anymore.

Original is ungrammatical: 'I've don't really interested in' mixes auxiliaries. Correct form: 'I'm not really interested in it anymore' or 'I don't really have an interest in it now'. Suggestion: use 'be + interested in' or 'not really interested in it' and include object 'it'. Grammar problem type ID:12