Internet— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: Your answer should be more structured and clear. Start with a direct response, then add supporting details using linking words. Avoid repetition and grammatical errors to make your answer natural and effective.

Ví dụ: I started using the internet when I went to university for further studies. Since then, I have used it on my laptop and mobile phone to complete my assignments and research.

Gợi ý: Your answer lacks clarity and coherence. Use linking words to connect your ideas and provide specific examples. Also, avoid filler words and incomplete sentences to improve fluency.

Ví dụ: I don't spend much time online. Usually, I go online only to search for specific words or ideas related to my studies.

Gợi ý: Try to make your answer more concise and avoid repetition. Use past tense correctly and add linking words to make your response coherent and natural.

Ví dụ: Yes, I remember when I was about 16 years old, my parents did not allow me to use the internet at that time.

Gợi ý: Your answer is relevant but could be clearer and more structured. Use linking words to connect your ideas and avoid repetition. Also, correct grammatical errors for better fluency.

Ví dụ: No, I don't spend too much time online because I have a hectic schedule. I need to plan activities and prepare schedules for my students.

Gợi ý: Your answer should be more organized and clear. Use linking words to connect your ideas and provide specific examples. Avoid grammatical mistakes to make your answer natural and effective.

Ví dụ: Without the internet, I would still have many tasks to do, such as planning exercises, preparing nutritional plans, and creating question papers for my students, as I am a physical education teacher.

× When I was going to university for my further study then I have I had to do work on a laptops as well as on mobile phone through Internet.

✓ When I was going to university for my further study, I had to do work on a laptop as well as on a mobile phone through the Internet.

The sentence incorrectly mixes present perfect 'have' and past tense 'had'. The correct past tense 'had' should be used consistently to match the past time frame. Also, 'a laptops' should be singular 'a laptop' and 'mobile phone' needs an article 'a'. 'Internet' should be preceded by 'the' as it is a specific noun here.

× So from that I using I am using Internet.

✓ So from that, I am using the Internet.

The phrase 'I using' is incorrect; the correct present continuous form is 'I am using'. Also, 'Internet' should be preceded by 'the'.

× I uh, I don't spend much time on Internet, so that's why I use a little bit.

✓ I uh, I don't spend much time on the Internet, so that's why I use it a little bit.

The phrase 'on Internet' is incorrect; the correct preposition is 'on the Internet'. Also, 'use a little bit' is incomplete; it should be 'use it a little bit' to specify what is being used.

× Us on Internet is such As for a searching some word as well as some ideas.

✓ Use of the Internet is such as for searching some words as well as some ideas.

The original sentence is unclear and grammatically incorrect. 'Us on Internet' should be 'Use of the Internet'. 'As for a searching' is incorrect; it should be 'such as for searching'. 'Some word' should be plural 'some words'.

× That said, I use only for a R in.

✓ That said, I use it only for research.

The original sentence is incomplete and unclear. 'I use only for a R in' is not a proper sentence. It should be 'I use it only for research' to convey the intended meaning.

× Yes, definitely. I remember that time in childhood when I was a near 16 year old.

✓ Yes, definitely. I remember that time in childhood when I was nearly 16 years old.

'a near 16 year old' is incorrect. The correct phrase is 'nearly 16 years old' to indicate approximate age in the past.

× That time I am I got I could not use Internet because my parents don't allow me and my parents did not allow me to use Internet.

✓ At that time, I could not use the Internet because my parents did not allow me to use it.

The sentence mixes present tense 'am', 'got', and present 'don't allow' with past 'did not allow'. The correct past tense 'could not' and 'did not allow' should be used consistently. Also, 'Internet' should be preceded by 'the' and 'use Internet' should be 'use it'.

× No, I don't use much time on Internet and so that's why I know that it it is totally wrong.

✓ No, I don't spend much time on the Internet, so that's why I know that it is totally wrong.

'use much time' is incorrect; the correct phrase is 'spend much time'. 'on Internet' should be 'on the Internet'. The repeated 'it it' is a typo.

× I think I don't spend too much time on Internet be 'cause my hectic schedule, I have to do some activities, plan some activities and I have to make a schedule for student.

✓ I think I don't spend too much time on the Internet because of my hectic schedule; I have to do some activities, plan some activities, and make a schedule for students.

'be 'cause' should be 'because of'. 'on Internet' should be 'on the Internet'. 'for student' should be plural 'for students'. The sentence needs proper punctuation and conjunctions for clarity.

× I have many talks a task to do without using Internet such as the UH exercise planner, student nutritional plan and a question paper for students.

✓ I have many tasks to do without using the Internet such as the UH exercise planner, student nutritional plan, and question papers for students.

'talks a task' is incorrect; it should be 'tasks'. 'Internet' should be preceded by 'the'. 'a question paper' should be plural 'question papers' to match 'many tasks'.

× Being a physical education teacher, I have loads of task to do without Internet.

✓ Being a physical education teacher, I have loads of tasks to do without the Internet.

'loads of task' should be plural 'loads of tasks'. 'Internet' should be preceded by 'the'.