Internet— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: Try to make your answer clearer and more natural by using correct grammar and sentence structure. Start with a direct answer, then add specific details. Avoid redundancy and unclear phrases.

Ví dụ: I started using the internet during my intermediate classes. Before that, I couldn't use it because we didn't have Wi-Fi at home, and my father didn't allow me to use phones except my tablet, which I mainly used for playing games.

Gợi ý: Make your answer more coherent and clear by using proper linking words and complete sentences. Avoid unclear phrases and explain your ideas logically.

Ví dụ: I am online almost all the time because my phone connects to Wi-Fi wherever I go. However, I usually check the internet mainly when someone sends me a message or I need to use it.

Gợi ý: Try to organize your answer with a clear topic sentence and supporting details. Use correct grammar and linking words to make your story easier to understand.

Ví dụ: Before my intermediate classes, I was not allowed to use the internet. But I secretly used it in class 7 or 8. I didn't know that using the internet would use up my father's phone balance, and I accidentally drained it, which was very embarrassing.

Gợi ý: Make your answer more natural and clear by using correct grammar and linking words. Provide specific examples to support your opinion.

Ví dụ: Yes, I think I spend too much time online because my phone is connected to Wi-Fi all day. I often check my phone even when I don't need to, mainly browsing social media or YouTube. Sometimes, even when I am studying, I get distracted by watching videos.

Gợi ý: Try to express your ideas clearly with correct grammar and sentence structure. Use specific examples and avoid unclear or exaggerated statements.

Ví dụ: Before I had internet access, I used to paint and read books. I was quite good at drawing and often made two or three portraits a day. I also read many books during that time.

× I haven't done it from my intermediate classes.

✓ I haven't used it since my intermediate classes.

The phrase 'haven't done it' is incorrect when referring to using the internet. The correct verb is 'used'. Also, 'from' should be 'since' to indicate the starting point in time.

× I in my childhood I wasn't able to get use of Internet because we didn't have a Wi-Fi connection and my father didn't let me use any phone expect my trap tablet.

✓ In my childhood, I wasn't able to use the Internet because we didn't have a Wi-Fi connection and my father didn't let me use any phone except my tablet.

The phrase 'get use of Internet' is incorrect; it should be 'use the Internet'. 'Expect' is a misspelling of 'except'. 'Trap tablet' seems to be a typo and corrected to 'tablet'. Also, the sentence structure is improved by removing the extra 'I' and adding commas.

× Actually I am online 24/7 because my phone is connected via Wi-Fi whenever I go outside.

✓ Actually, I am online 24/7 because my phone is connected via Wi-Fi even when I go outside.

The phrase 'whenever I go outside' is better expressed as 'even when I go outside' to indicate continuous connection. Also, a comma is added after 'Actually' for clarity.

× I corrected my phone. Via Internet module through my scene.

✓ I connected my phone via an internet module through my SIM card.

The original sentences are fragmented and unclear. 'Corrected' is incorrect; the intended word is 'connected'. 'Scene' is a typo for 'SIM'. The sentence is combined for clarity.

× Otherwise I don't go online often whenever someone send a message or I.

✓ Otherwise, I don't go online often unless someone sends me a message.

The sentence is incomplete and ungrammatical. 'Send' should be 'sends' to agree with 'someone'. The phrase 'or I' is incomplete and removed. 'Unless' fits better than 'whenever' here.

× Is before my intermediate classes I aren't allowed to use Internet, but I sneakly used Internet in my.

✓ Before my intermediate classes, I wasn't allowed to use the Internet, but I sneakily used it.

'Is' should be 'Before'. 'Aren't' is incorrect; it should be 'wasn't' for past tense singular. 'Sneakly' is incorrect; the correct adverb is 'sneakily'. The sentence is restructured for clarity.

× I guess class 7 hours 8.

✓ I guess in class 7 or 8.

The phrase 'class 7 hours 8' is unclear and ungrammatical. It is corrected to 'in class 7 or 8' to indicate the grade levels.

× I didn't know that the Internet cuts the balance of the phone.

✓ I didn't know that using the Internet would reduce the phone balance.

'Cuts the balance of the phone' is awkward and incorrect. The phrase is corrected to 'would reduce the phone balance' to express the intended meaning.

× I used it end I drained all my father's balance so it is pretty embarrassing.

✓ I used it and drained all my father's balance, so it was pretty embarrassing.

'End' is a typo for 'and'. 'Is' should be 'was' to maintain past tense consistency. Commas are added for clarity.

× I think I spend too much time on line because as I say to my friend is connected via Wi-Fi all day long.

✓ I think I spend too much time online because, as I say to my friend, I am connected via Wi-Fi all day long.

'On line' should be 'online'. The sentence is restructured for clarity and correct verb usage. 'Is connected' is changed to 'I am connected' to match the subject.

× I keep checking phone whenever I need or may not I need.

✓ I keep checking my phone whether I need to or not.

The phrase 'may not I need' is incorrect. It is corrected to 'whether I need to or not' for proper expression. 'Phone' should be 'my phone'.

× I just go through social media or you too.

✓ I just go through social media or YouTube.

'You too' is a mishearing or typo for 'YouTube'. Corrected accordingly.

× Even if I studying I tend to distract my mind watching raise.

✓ Even when I am studying, I tend to distract myself by watching videos.

'If I studying' is incorrect; it should be 'when I am studying'. 'Distract my mind watching raise' is unclear; corrected to 'distract myself by watching videos' for clarity.

× Without the Internet, I usually paint or reading books before I'm able to get access to Internet.

✓ Before I was able to access the Internet, I usually painted or read books.

The sentence mixes tenses incorrectly. 'Usually paint or reading' should be 'usually painted or read' to maintain past tense. 'I'm able to get access' is changed to 'I was able to access' for past tense consistency.

× I was a pretty good sreedharan.

✓ I was a pretty good painter.

'Sreedharan' is likely a mispronunciation or typo. Corrected to 'painter' to fit context.

× I often draw like I draw two and three portraits in a day and I did almost 233 books, many books in a day.

✓ I often drew two or three portraits in a day and read almost 233 books, many books in a day.

The verb tenses are inconsistent. 'Draw' should be 'drew' and 'did' should be 'read' to match the context. The sentence is restructured for clarity.