Internet— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: 回答中语法错误较多，表达不够流畅，且句子结构不完整。建议注意时态和主谓一致，避免断句错误，并且回答应更自然连贯。

Ví dụ: I started using the internet when I was in the fifth grade. My dad gave me a mobile phone as a birthday present, and I often used it to read novels and find answers for my homework.

Gợi ý: 回答内容不清晰，表达混乱，词汇拼写错误较多。建议简洁明了地回答问题，注意单词拼写和语法，使用连贯的句子。

Ví dụ: To be honest, I go online several times a day. I can't live without the internet because it provides many ways for us to communicate and interact with others.

Gợi ý: 回答中有语法错误和表达不清楚的问题。建议使用完整句子，注意时态和主谓一致，表达更准确。

Ví dụ: Yes, I remember once in junior high school when I didn't do well in an exam. My parents didn't allow me to use the internet because they thought it distracted me from studying.

Gợi ý: 回答表达基本清楚，但句子断裂影响流畅性。建议使用连贯句子，避免断句，丰富细节。

Ví dụ: Yes, definitely. I spend too much time online and don't have enough time for other hobbies like reading books or going outside, which I used to enjoy.

Gợi ý: 回答内容较好，但句子结构简单且有语法错误。建议使用更自然的表达和连贯的句子。

Ví dụ: Without the internet, I would spend more time doing outdoor activities, like walking in the park to enjoy the flowers and sitting on a bench to relax.

× My dad give me a. Mobile phone as my birthday present and that sometimes I use the Internet to read some novels even I find some answers of my home works.

✓ My dad gave me a mobile phone as my birthday present, and sometimes I use the Internet to read some novels and even find some answers for my homework.

这里“dad give”动词形式错误，应该用过去式“gave”，因为动作发生在过去。"home works"应为不可数名词“homework”。此外，句子中断句不当，需调整连接词和标点。

× My dad give me a. Mobile phone as my birthday present and that sometimes I use the Internet to read some novels even I find some answers of my home works.

✓ My dad gave me a mobile phone as my birthday present, and sometimes I use the Internet to read some novels and even find some answers for my homework.

“give”应使用过去式“gave”，因为动作发生在过去。

× My dad give me a. Mobile phone as my birthday present and that sometimes I use the Internet to read some novels even I find some answers of my home works.

✓ My dad gave me a mobile phone as my birthday present, and sometimes I use the Internet to read some novels and even find some answers for my homework.

“answers of my home works”中“of”用法错误，应使用“for”表示“为……的答案”。

× To be honest, in Cantonese times a day. I can't. I think I can't live without Internet becauses Internet provide a Verity of. Facilities for us to communication, interact with others.

✓ To be honest, I go online several times a day. I think I can't live without the Internet because the Internet provides a variety of facilities for us to communicate and interact with others.

“Cantonese times a day”不合适，应为“several times a day”。“Internet”前应加定冠词“the”。“provide”应为第三人称单数形式“provides”。“Verity”拼写错误，应为“variety”。“Facilities”前不应有句号。动词“communication”应改为动词形式“communicate”。

× Internet provide a Verity of. Facilities for us to communication, interact with others.

✓ The Internet provides a variety of facilities for us to communicate and interact with others.

主语“Internet”是第三人称单数，谓语动词应加-s，变为“provides”。

× Internet provide a Verity of. Facilities for us to communication, interact with others.

✓ The Internet provides a variety of facilities for us to communicate and interact with others.

“to communication”中“communication”应为动词“communicate”，表示“交流”。

× It happened in my junior high school one time. I didn't get a great. Great in my exam. So my parents aunt isn't allowed me to use the Internet because I think the Internet distracted my concentration.

✓ It happened once in my junior high school. I didn't get a good grade in my exam, so my parents didn't allow me to use the Internet because I think the Internet distracted my concentration.

“didn't get a great. Great”应为“didn't get a good grade”。“parents aunt isn't allowed me”语法错误，应为“parents didn't allow me”。“allow”后接宾语和动词原形。

× So my parents aunt isn't allowed me to use the Internet because I think the Internet distracted my concentration.

✓ So my parents didn't allow me to use the Internet because I think the Internet distracted my concentration.

“parents aunt”不合适，应为“parents”。

× So my parents aunt isn't allowed me to use the Internet because I think the Internet distracted my concentration.

✓ So my parents didn't allow me to use the Internet because I think the Internet distracted my concentration.

“isn't allowed”应使用过去式“didn't allow”，因为动作发生在过去。

× I think the Internet distracted my concentration.

✓ I think the Internet distracts my concentration.

主句是现在时态“I think”，从句应使用一般现在时“distracts”，表示普遍事实。

× Yes, definitely. I spend too much time online and I don't. Spend time on the other hobbies such as reading books and going outside. That I have used to do.

✓ Yes, definitely. I spend too much time online and I don't spend time on other hobbies such as reading books and going outside, which I used to do.

“don't. Spend”中间不应有句号，应连写。句子结构需调整，使用“which I used to do”表达过去习惯。

× Yes, definitely. I spend too much time online and I don't. Spend time on the other hobbies such as reading books and going outside. That I have used to do.

✓ Yes, definitely. I spend too much time online and I don't spend time on other hobbies such as reading books and going outside, which I used to do.

“That I have used to do”连接不当，应使用关系代词“which”引导定语从句。

× I will do more outside activities. Such as I will wonder in a park to see some flowers and just sit in the chair. To relax myself.

✓ I will do more outdoor activities, such as wandering in a park to see some flowers and just sitting on a chair to relax myself.

“wonder”拼写错误，应为“wander”。“outside activities”应为“outdoor activities”。“sit in the chair”应为“sit on a chair”。动词形式应保持一致，使用动名词形式“wandering”和“sitting”。