Internet— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: 回答中语法错误较多，句子结构不完整，建议使用正确的时态和句型表达时间点，并避免冗余。

Ví dụ: I started using the Internet when I was about five years old because my father bought a new computer.

Gợi ý: 回答较为自然，但重复使用“Internet”显得冗余，建议使用同义词替换，并用连接词使句子更流畅。

Ví dụ: I go online every day because I need to complete my homework and keep in touch with my parents through the internet.

Gợi ý: 句子缺少动词时态和介词，表达不够准确，建议使用正确的时态和介词，并丰富细节。

Ví dụ: Yes, when I was 12 years old, my father banned me from using the internet because I was addicted to playing online games.

Gợi ý: 时态混乱，句子结构不清晰，建议统一时态，使用更准确的表达，并避免重复。

Ví dụ: Yes, I spend about 10 hours a day online because I need to communicate with my parents and study.

Gợi ý: 语法错误较多，句子不连贯，建议使用条件句结构，注意时态一致，并使表达更自然。

Ví dụ: If I didn't have the internet, I would spend more time with my parents, which would improve our relationship. I would also go hiking with my friends to stay healthy.

× I started using the Internet about 5 years old because my father bought a new computer, so I used it at the first time.

✓ I started using the Internet when I was about 5 years old because my father bought a new computer, so I used it for the first time.

句中缺少动词was来描述年龄，且表达“第一次”应使用固定短语"for the first time"。建议在“5 years old”前加上“when I was”，并将“at the first time”改为“for the first time”。

× I go online every day because I have to do many things by the Internet.

✓ I go online every day because I have to do many things on the Internet.

介词“by”用法不当，描述使用互联网时应使用“on the Internet”。

× For example, I have to do my homework on the Internet and I have to connect with my parents using the Internet.

✓ For example, I have to do my homework on the Internet and I have to connect with my parents through the Internet.

连接人时用介词“through”更合适，表示通过互联网联系。

× Yes, when I 12 years old my father banned me using the Internet because I was crazy about playing games on the Internet.

✓ Yes, when I was 12 years old my father banned me from using the Internet because I was crazy about playing games on the Internet.

缺少动词“was”来描述年龄，且“banned me using”应改为“banned me from using”，表示禁止某人做某事。

× Yes, I spent about 10 hours a day online because I have to do many things, use the Internet such as contacted with my parents and deal with my study.

✓ Yes, I spend about 10 hours a day online because I have to do many things using the Internet such as contacting my parents and dealing with my studies.

时态不一致，前半句应使用现在时“spend”，且“contacted with”错误，应为“contacting”，动词形式需改为动名词，且“deal with my study”应为“dealing with my studies”。

× I think if I without the Internet I will stay with my parents for a long time.

✓ I think if I were without the Internet, I would stay with my parents for a long time.

条件句中缺少动词“were”，且虚拟语气应使用“would”而非“will”，句子结构不完整。

× I think it's beneficial for our relationship and I also connected with my friends to climb mountains.

✓ I think it's beneficial for our relationship and I also connect with my friends to climb mountains.

时态不一致，“connected”应改为现在时“connect”，且“to climb mountains”表达目的正确。

× I think it improve my physical health.

✓ I think it improves my physical health.

主语是第三人称单数“it”，动词应加-s，使用第三人称单数形式“improves”。