Internet— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: 回答中存在语法错误，如“watches”应为“watch”，且句子结构不够自然。建议使用更自然的表达方式，并避免重复信息。

Ví dụ: I started using the internet when I was in primary school. Since then, I have enjoyed watching videos and movies online because they are very engaging.

Gợi ý: 回答内容较为笼统，缺少具体细节。建议增加具体的频率描述，并用连接词使句子更连贯。

Ví dụ: I go online almost every day, usually several hours, because nowadays people use cellphones or portable computers to communicate and interact with others.

Gợi ý: 回答中存在语法错误，如“weren't”应为“wasn't”，且表达不够清晰。建议使用正确的时态和更自然的表达。

Ví dụ: Yes, I remember a time when I wasn't allowed to use the internet because my parents thought I was addicted, so they locked my phone in a locker.

Gợi ý: 回答中“contents”应为“content”，且“outdoors activities”应为“outdoor activities”。建议注意词汇的正确使用，并丰富细节。

Ví dụ: Yes, I sometimes spend too much time online because the content is very appealing. To avoid this, I try to participate in more outdoor activities like hiking or playing sports.

Gợi ý: 回答较好，但可以增加更多具体细节，使内容更丰富。

Ví dụ: Without the internet, I would read books to gain knowledge or go shopping with friends to spend my free time.

× I started using the Internet since I was in primary school.

✓ I have been using the Internet since I was in primary school.

句子中使用了过去时态“started”，但“since”引导的时间点表示从过去某时开始一直持续到现在，应该用现在完成时态。建议使用“have been using”表示从过去持续到现在的动作。

× I usually watches videos or movies online because I found that they are very engrossing.

✓ I usually watch videos or movies online because I find that they are very engrossing.

主语“I”是第一人称单数，谓语动词应使用原形“watch”，而不是“watches”。另外，句子时态应保持一致，前半句为一般现在时，后半句也应使用一般现在时“find”。

× Yes, I remember time I weren't allowed to use the Internet because my parents thought that I'm addicted to it, so they locked my cell into the locker.

✓ Yes, I remember a time when I wasn't allowed to use the Internet because my parents thought that I was addicted to it, so they locked my cell phone in the locker.

“weren't”应为“wasn't”，因为主语是第一人称单数“I”。“remember time”缺少冠词，应为“a time”。“I'm addicted”应改为过去时“I was addicted”，与句子时态保持一致。短语“locked my cell into the locker”应改为“locked my cell phone in the locker”，更符合习惯表达。

× I would participate more outdoors activities.

✓ I would participate in more outdoor activities.

“outdoors activities”应为“outdoor activities”，形容词形式“outdoor”修饰名词“activities”。动词“participate”后应接介词“in”，表示参与某活动。

× I would read books to acquire more knowledge or go shopping to replace the time that I used on the Internet.

✓ I would read books to acquire more knowledge or go shopping to replace the time that I spent on the Internet.

“used on the Internet”中的“used”用法不当，应使用“spent”表示花费时间。这样表达更准确，符合英语习惯。