Internet— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: حاول تحسين قواعد اللغة الإنجليزية، خاصة في استخدام الأزمنة والأفعال، وتجنب التكرار في الكلام. كما يجب أن تكون الجمل أكثر وضوحًا وترتيبًا لتكون طبيعية وفعالة.

Ví dụ: I started using the Internet when I was a child. My parents showed me educational games online, and now I also use it for work.

Gợi ý: تجنب التكرار في الكلمات واستخدم عبارات ربط لتوضيح الأفكار. كما يجب تحسين تركيب الجمل لتكون أكثر طبيعية وسلاسة.

Ví dụ: I go online several times every day to chat with my friends, watch movies, and do online shopping.

Gợi ý: ركز على استخدام القواعد الصحيحة للأزمنة والأفعال المساعدة، وتجنب التكرار. حاول أن تجعل الجمل أكثر وضوحًا وترابطًا.

Ví dụ: Yes, I remember when I was a child, my parents didn't allow me to use the Internet because I was too young.

Gợi ý: حاول استخدام تراكيب لغوية صحيحة وتجنب التكرار. كما يجب أن تكون الجمل أكثر وضوحًا مع استخدام كلمات مناسبة للسياق.

Ví dụ: Yes, I think I spend too much time on the Internet. My eyes often hurt because I use my mobile phone a lot.

Gợi ý: تجنب التكرار واستخدم جمل متماسكة مع ربط الأفكار بشكل منطقي. حاول أن تكون الإجابة أكثر تحديدًا ووضوحًا.

Ví dụ: I can't imagine living without the Internet because it is very useful in our daily lives. People use it for work, study, school, and even hospitals.

× I start using the Internet when I was a child or young.

✓ I started using the Internet when I was a child or young.

The sentence refers to a past event, so the verb 'start' should be in the past tense 'started' to match the time frame.

× My parents show me showed me educational games online and also I need it for work.

✓ My parents showed me educational games online and also I needed it for work.

The verb 'show' should be in past tense 'showed' to match the past time frame. Also, 'need' should be 'needed' to maintain past tense consistency.

× I go online a lot like multiple times every day, chat, chat with my friend watching movies and I really handy shopping.

✓ I go online a lot, like multiple times every day, chat with my friends, watch movies, and I really enjoy shopping online.

'Friend' should be plural 'friends' to match the context of chatting with more than one person. Also, the sentence structure and word choice were corrected for clarity and grammatical accuracy.

× Yeah, I remember a time I weren't allowed to use the Internet when I was a child.

✓ Yeah, I remember a time I wasn't allowed to use the Internet when I was a child.

The correct past tense negative form of 'to be' for singular first person is 'wasn't' not 'weren't'.

× My parents didn't allowed allowed me to use Internet because I was young.

✓ My parents didn't allow me to use the Internet because I was young.

After 'didn't', the base form of the verb 'allow' should be used, not the past tense 'allowed'.

× My parents didn't allowed allowed me to use Internet because I was young.

✓ My parents didn't allow me to use the Internet because I was young.

The noun 'Internet' should be preceded by the definite article 'the'.

× Yeah, of course I consider spend spend the Internet too much time.

✓ Yeah, of course I consider spending too much time on the Internet.

The verb 'consider' should be followed by a gerund ('spending'). Also, 'on the Internet' is the correct prepositional phrase.

× The my eyes is very, very hurt because I follow the mobile phone very much.

✓ My eyes hurt a lot because I use my mobile phone very much.

'Eyes' is plural, so the verb should be 'hurt' without 'is'. Also, 'follow' is incorrect here; 'use' is appropriate. 'The my eyes' is incorrect; 'my eyes' is correct.

× Wow. I don't live without the Internet because the Internet is very useful today in our life.

✓ Wow. I can't live without the Internet because the Internet is very useful in our lives today.

The modal verb 'can't' expresses inability, which fits the meaning better than 'don't live'. Also, 'in our lives' is the correct phrase.

× Many people need it for many reason like work, study, school, hospitals. So.

✓ Many people need it for many reasons like work, study, school, and hospitals.

'Reason' should be plural 'reasons' to match 'many'. Added 'and' before the last item for correct list structure.