Language— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: 回答中语法错误较多，表达不够连贯。建议注意句子结构，避免断句错误，并且用连词连接句子，使表达更自然流畅。

Ví dụ: I can speak Chinese, which is my mother tongue, as well as Japanese and English, which I enjoy learning as hobbies.

Gợi ý: 回答中句子不完整，表达不清晰。建议使用完整句子，并用连词连接观点，使表达更连贯。同时，具体说明学习语言的困难。

Ví dụ: Yes, learning a new language is difficult because it requires a lot of time to watch videos and memorize vocabulary, especially if you don't live in a country where the language is spoken.

Gợi ý: 回答中断句不当，表达不够清晰。建议用完整句子表达未来计划，并用连词连接句子，使表达更自然。

Ví dụ: Yes, of course. After I finish learning the second language, I plan to learn a new language, such as Korean.

Gợi ý: 回答中语法错误较多，表达不够自然。建议注意主谓一致和句子结构，使用连词连接句子，并具体说明学习英语的原因。

Ví dụ: Actually, I am not very interested in English, but it is necessary to learn it in my country because we have English classes from primary school to university.

× Chinese is my mother tongue and Japanese and English. Is my hobby.

✓ Chinese is my mother tongue, and Japanese and English are my hobbies.

原句缺少主语和谓语，导致句子结构不完整。应补充完整句子，使其表达清晰。

× Yeah, if you want to learn a new language, you have to spend a lot of time. To watch videos or remember words.

✓ Yeah, if you want to learn a new language, you have to spend a lot of time watching videos or remembering words.

原句中“To watch videos or remember words”是不完整的句子，应与前句合并，使用动名词形式，使句子连贯完整。

× Because you don't live in early. In this language environment.

✓ Because you don't live in this language environment early.

原句中“in early”用法错误，应改为“in this language environment early”或更自然的表达。这里调整为“in this language environment early”以符合语境。

× When I finish. CS2 language. I will choose a new language to learn, for example Korean.

✓ When I finish CS2 language, I will choose a new language to learn, for example, Korean.

原句中断句不当，导致句子不连贯。应将分句合并，使用逗号连接，使句子完整。

× Exactly, I don't very interested in English, but in my country is necessary to learn that and from primary school to university we have English class.

✓ Actually, I am not very interested in English, but in my country it is necessary to learn it, and from primary school to university we have English classes.

原句中“Exactly”用法不当，应改为“Actually”；“don't very interested”语法错误，应改为“am not very interested”；“is necessary to learn that”缺主语，应加“it”；“English class”应为复数“English classes”。