Language— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: Câu trả lời của bạn khá rõ ràng nhưng có một số lỗi ngữ pháp và cách diễn đạt chưa tự nhiên. Bạn nên tránh dùng cụm từ "To be honest" không cần thiết và sửa lỗi ngữ pháp như "in my not only study" thành "not only in my studies". Ngoài ra, câu trả lời nên ngắn gọn hơn và sử dụng từ vựng phù hợp hơn.

Ví dụ: I can speak two languages: Vietnamese, which is my mother tongue, and English. English helps me a lot both in my studies and at work.

Gợi ý: Câu trả lời của bạn có ý tưởng rõ ràng nhưng cách diễn đạt còn lặp lại và thiếu sự liên kết mạch lạc. Bạn nên tránh lặp lại cụm từ "You have to know" và sử dụng các liên từ để câu trả lời trôi chảy hơn. Đồng thời, nên bổ sung thêm ví dụ hoặc lý do cụ thể để câu trả lời sinh động hơn.

Ví dụ: I think learning a new language is quite difficult because you need to memorize many words and understand their meanings. Moreover, regular practice is essential to become fluent.

Gợi ý: Câu trả lời có ý tưởng tốt nhưng có lỗi ngữ pháp và cách dùng từ chưa chính xác, ví dụ như "most second popular" nên là "the second most popular". Bạn cũng nên sử dụng liên từ để câu trả lời mạch lạc hơn và tránh lặp lại từ ngữ. Hãy cố gắng diễn đạt tự nhiên và chính xác hơn.

Ví dụ: I plan to learn Chinese in the future because it is the second most popular language worldwide. This will help me travel and improve my career opportunities.

Gợi ý: Câu trả lời có nhiều lỗi nghiêm trọng về ngữ pháp và từ vựng, ví dụ như "England is the most popular language" sai về mặt ngữ nghĩa, nên là "English is the most popular language". Từ "profanity" bị dùng sai, có thể bạn muốn nói "proficient". Bạn cần chú ý sử dụng từ đúng nghĩa và cấu trúc câu chính xác hơn để câu trả lời tự nhiên và hiệu quả.

Ví dụ: I learn English because it is the most widely spoken language in the world. Being proficient in English allows me to broaden my horizons and support my career.

× I can speak 2 languages which are Vietnamese as my mother tongue and English.

✓ I can speak 2 languages, which are Vietnamese as my mother tongue and English.

The sentence is missing a comma before 'which' to correctly separate the clause. Also, '2 languages' is acceptable but spelling out 'two' is preferred in formal writing. The main issue is punctuation, which affects clarity.

× English supports me a lot in my not only study but also in my work.

✓ English supports me a lot not only in my study but also in my work.

The phrase 'in my not only study but also in my work' is incorrectly structured. The correct form is 'not only in my study but also in my work' to properly parallel the prepositional phrases.

× I find it very hard to learn a new language because you have to know.

✓ I find it very hard to learn a new language because you have to know a lot of words.

The sentence ends abruptly with 'because you have to know.' It is incomplete and needs an object to complete the meaning. Adding 'a lot of words' completes the thought.

× Also you need to practice a lot in order to be fluent in this language.

✓ Also, you need to practice a lot in order to become fluent in this language.

The phrase 'be fluent' is grammatically correct but 'become fluent' is more natural when referring to acquiring fluency through practice.

× Chinese will become the most second popular language in the world, so I will learn it in order to travel around the world and also support my work in the future.

✓ Chinese will become the second most popular language in the world, so I will learn it in order to travel around the world and also support my work in the future.

The phrase 'most second popular' is incorrect. The correct superlative form is 'second most popular.' The order of 'second' and 'most' is important in English.

× As far as I know, England is the most popular language in the world, so when I when I am profanity with this language, I can expand my horizon about the world and also support my work in the future.

✓ As far as I know, English is the most popular language in the world, so when I am proficient in this language, I can expand my horizons about the world and also support my work in the future.

Several errors: 'England' is a country, the language is 'English.' 'Profanity' is incorrect; the correct word is 'proficient.' 'Horizon' should be plural 'horizons' when referring to expanding knowledge or experience. Also, the repeated phrase 'when I' should be corrected to a single instance.