Language— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: 回答中存在语法错误和表达不自然的问题，例如“Since I was in the primary school, I have watched. Japanese anime for 10 years that really improve my Japanese.”句子不完整且时态使用不当。建议注意句子完整性和时态一致性，同时避免断句错误，使表达更流畅自然。

Ví dụ: I can speak Chinese, English, and Japanese because I have been passionate about Japanese culture since primary school. Watching Japanese anime for over ten years has really helped me improve my Japanese skills.

Gợi ý: 回答中句子结构不完整，表达不够连贯，且部分用词不准确。建议使用完整句子，合理使用连接词，使表达更连贯，同时注意词汇的准确性。

Ví dụ: I don't think learning a new language is difficult if you have passion and interest. However, many people learn languages just for tasks, which can make it harder for them.

Gợi ý: 回答中存在语法错误和表达不完整的问题，如“I really love.”缺少宾语。建议使用完整句子，注意主谓一致和句子连贯性，同时使用连接词使表达更自然。

Ví dụ: Maybe I will learn Korean in the future because I really love Korean culture. I often browse illustrations online, and most of the illustrators I like are from South Korea. I want to understand their work and communicate with them.

Gợi ý: 回答中断句不当，语法错误较多，表达不清晰。建议使用完整句子，避免断句错误，注意语法和词汇的正确使用，使表达更清楚自然。

Ví dụ: I learn English because it is a required subject in our education system. Also, when I am at university, most articles are written in English, so I have to learn it.

× I can speak not only Chinese and English, but also Japanese, because I am enthusiastic about Japanese culture.

✓ I can speak not only Chinese and English but also Japanese because I am enthusiastic about Japanese culture.

句中“not only... but also”结构中不需要逗号，去掉逗号使句子更流畅。

× Since I was in the primary school, I have watched. Japanese anime for 10 years that really improve my Japanese.

✓ Since I was in primary school, I have watched Japanese anime for 10 years, which has really improved my Japanese.

“Since”引导的时间状语从句中应使用过去时“was”，且“primary school”前不加冠词。“have watched”后不应有句号，且“that”应改为“which”引导非限制性定语从句，动词时态应与主句一致，改为“has improved”。

× It's not difficult at all. As long as people have passion and interest. For something, it will be easier to study them.

✓ It's not difficult at all as long as people have passion and interest. For something, it will be easier to study it.

“As long as people have passion and interest”不是完整句子，应与前句合并。代词“them”指代不明确，应改为“it”指代“something”。

× But almost time people just learn the language for task. So maybe it's difficult.

✓ But most of the time, people just learn the language for tasks, so maybe it's difficult.

“almost time”应改为“most of the time”，且“task”应为复数“tasks”。两个句子可合并为一句更通顺。

× Maybe I will learn Korean because I really love. Browsing some illustration online and most of illustrator I like come from South Korea.

✓ Maybe I will learn Korean because I really love browsing some illustrations online, and most of the illustrators I like come from South Korea.

“because I really love”后缺少宾语，应补充完整。名词“illustration”和“illustrator”应使用复数形式。句子结构需调整使其连贯。

× I want to understand what they draw and communicate with them.

✓ I want to understand what they draw and communicate with them.

此句无明显代词错误，保持原句。

× Well. Because it must be learned in our education.

✓ Well, it must be learned in our education.

“Because”引导的从句不能单独成句，应与前句合并。

× And when I? I'm in the university.

✓ And when I am in the university.

“I?”为错误表达，应改为完整的“I am”。

× Most of article are writing. English, so I have to learn them.

✓ Most of the articles are written in English, so I have to learn it.

“article”应为复数“articles”，且前应加定冠词“the”。“are writing”应改为被动语态“are written”。“English”作为语言名词不加逗号。代词“them”指代不明确，应改为“it”指代“English”。