Language— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: 回答时应避免使用“we”来指代自己，保持主语一致；句子结构稍显重复，建议简化表达并增加连贯性。

Ví dụ: I am bilingual, with Chinese as my native language. I can speak both Chinese and English fluently in daily life and professional settings, although I sometimes make grammatical mistakes in English.

Gợi ý: 回答中存在语法错误和表达不清，建议使用连词连接句子，避免断裂；同时具体说明“folk terms”并用更准确的表达。

Ví dụ: I think learning a new language is somewhat difficult because it requires a native environment, which is often unavailable. Moreover, understanding idioms and cultural expressions, such as 'raining cats and dogs,' can be challenging.

Gợi ý: 回答中存在语法错误，如“France”应为“French”，句子结构不完整，建议使用连贯句子并具体说明学习原因。

Ví dụ: I plan to learn other languages like German and French in the future because I will work here. Studies have shown that being bilingual or trilingual improves literacy and memory.

Gợi ý: 回答中有重复词汇“English English”，表达不够流畅，建议简化句子并使用连接词使逻辑更清晰。

Ví dụ: Firstly, English is a compulsory subject in China, so learning it helps me pass exams. Secondly, it breaks language barriers since 95% of dissertations are written in English, and without proficiency, I cannot read them fluently.

× We can speak fluently in both daily life and professional settings.

✓ I can speak fluently in both daily life and professional settings.

句子主语是第一人称单数“I”，动词和代词应保持一致，使用“can speak”而非“we can speak”。原句中“we”与上下文不符，导致主谓不一致。

× But in this situation we can't have the access to them.

✓ But in this situation we can't have access to them.

“have access”是固定搭配，前面不需要加冠词“the”。加上“the”是不正确的用法。

× And it's also difficult to learn some folk terms like reading cats and dogs in certain cultural backgrounds.

✓ And it's also difficult to learn some folk terms like "raining cats and dogs" in certain cultural backgrounds.

短语“raining cats and dogs”是固定表达，原句写成“reading cats and dogs”是拼写错误，导致表达不准确。

× I think I will learn other languages like German and France in the future because I will work in this country and studies have shown that the numerous benefits for bilingual trilingual person in literacy and memories.

✓ I think I will learn other languages like German and French in the future because I will work in this country and studies have shown that there are numerous benefits for bilingual and trilingual people in literacy and memory.

“France”应改为形容词“French”表示语言；“person”应为复数“people”；“the numerous benefits”前应加“there are”构成存在句；“memories”应为不可数名词“memory”。这些都是单复数和词性错误。

× First of all, English is a compulsory course in Chinese.

✓ First of all, English is a compulsory course in China.

“Chinese”是形容词或名词，表示语言或人；此处应指国家“China”，用作名词。

× Learning English can help me to pass the examinations.

✓ Learning English can help me pass the examinations.

动词“help”后面接动词时，通常省略“to”，直接用动词原形。

× Secondly, it can break the language barriers because 95% of the dissertations are written in English and without English English proficiency I couldn't read it fluently.

✓ Secondly, it can break language barriers because 95% of dissertations are written in English and without English proficiency I couldn't read them fluently.

“language barriers”前不需要定冠词“the”；“dissertations”前不需要定冠词“the”；“English English proficiency”重复，应去掉一个“English”；“dissertations”是复数，代词应为“them”。