Language— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: 답변이 자연스럽지 않고 문법적 오류가 있습니다. 문장을 간결하고 명확하게 만들고, 연결어를 사용하여 문장 간 논리적 흐름을 개선하세요. 예를 들어, 'such as watching English video and communicate with' 부분은 'such as watching English videos and communicating with others'로 수정할 수 있습니다.

Ví dụ: I can speak both Korean and English. However, English is a bit challenging for me because it is not my native language. To improve, I practice speaking every day by watching English videos and communicating with others.

Gợi ý: 답변이 문법적으로 부정확하고 의미 전달이 명확하지 않습니다. 문장을 간결하게 하고, 이유를 명확히 설명하며, 연결어를 사용해 보세요.

Ví dụ: Absolutely. Learning a new language is difficult because I am not familiar with its grammar and word order. Therefore, it requires a lot of practice.

Gợi ý: 답변이 문법적으로 부정확하고 어휘 선택이 부적절합니다. 문장을 명확하게 하고, 이유를 구체적으로 설명하며, 연결어를 사용하세요.

Ví dụ: Yes, I want to learn Spanish in the future because I heard it is similar to English. If I have the opportunity, I will choose to learn it.

Gợi ý: 답변이 문법적으로 부정확하고 문장이 길며 명확하지 않습니다. 문장을 간결하게 만들고, 이유를 명확히 설명하며, 연결어를 사용하세요.

Ví dụ: I am learning English because I will go to the UK in two months to attend a training and coaching course at a university. Therefore, I need to improve my English speaking skills by practicing a lot.

× However, I try to improve English by practicing speaking every day, such as watching English video and communicate with.

✓ However, I try to improve my English by practicing speaking every day, such as watching English videos and communicating with others.

The verbs 'watching' and 'communicate' should be parallel in form; both need to be in the '-ing' form to maintain consistency in the list. Also, 'English video' should be plural 'English videos' to indicate multiple instances, and 'communicate with' requires an object, so 'others' is added.

× However, I try to improve English by practicing speaking every day, such as watching English video and communicate with.

✓ However, I try to improve my English by practicing speaking every day, such as watching English videos and communicating with others.

The noun 'video' should be plural 'videos' because it refers to multiple instances or types of videos, which is more natural in this context.

× However, I try to improve English by practicing speaking every day, such as watching English video and communicate with.

✓ However, I try to improve my English by practicing speaking every day, such as watching English videos and communicating with others.

The phrase 'communicate with' requires an object to complete the meaning. Adding 'others' clarifies who the communication is with.

× Absolutely because I am not familiar with other languages so it especially grammar and older are are reversed.

✓ Absolutely, because I am not familiar with other languages, especially since grammar and word order are reversed.

The original sentence is fragmented and contains repetition ('are are'). The correction improves clarity and grammatical structure by properly connecting clauses and correcting word choice ('older' to 'word').

× So it is need it need to more practice.

✓ So, it needs more practice.

The original sentence is redundant and ungrammatical. 'It is need it need to more practice' is incorrect; the corrected sentence uses the correct verb form 'needs' and simplifies the expression.

× Yes, if I want to learn Spanish because I heard that Spanish is similar trend to English so if I have opportunity to learn other languages I choose it.

✓ Yes, I want to learn Spanish because I heard that Spanish has a similar structure to English, so if I have the opportunity to learn other languages, I will choose it.

The sentence incorrectly uses 'if I want' instead of a clear statement of intent and lacks proper future tense construction. 'Similar trend' is incorrect; 'similar structure' is more appropriate. Also, 'choose' should be in future tense 'will choose' to match the conditional context.

× Yes, if I want to learn Spanish because I heard that Spanish is similar trend to English so if I have opportunity to learn other languages I choose it.

✓ Yes, I want to learn Spanish because I heard that Spanish has a similar structure to English, so if I have the opportunity to learn other languages, I will choose it.

The phrase 'similar trend to English' is incorrect; the correct preposition is 'similar to English' or better 'has a similar structure to English.' Also, 'have opportunity' should be 'have the opportunity'.

× Uh, I have to go to the UK next two months because I am applying for the training and coaching course at the UK university, so I definitely improve my English speaking skills and practice more and more to.

✓ Uh, I have to go to the UK in the next two months because I am applying for a training and coaching course at a UK university, so I will definitely improve my English speaking skills and practice more and more.

The phrase 'next two months' needs the preposition 'in.' 'The training and coaching course' should be 'a training and coaching course' as it is not specified. 'At the UK university' should be 'at a UK university.' The phrase 'I definitely improve' should be 'I will definitely improve' to indicate future intention. The sentence ending 'practice more and more to' is incomplete; 'to' is removed.