Part 1
Giám khảo
What languages can you speak?
Thí sinh
Chinese is my native language and I currently practice English now. I find English very useful for traveling and work opportunities and I also interested in learning Japanese in the future.
Giám khảo
Do you think it is difficult to learn a new language?
Thí sinh
I fight learning a new language very difficult, especially as you get older. You need to spend more time and after to memorize vocabularies and understand grammar rules. However, consistent practice can lead to success.
Giám khảo
Will you learn other languages in the future?
Thí sinh
No, I don't have any plans to learn a new language in the near future because I find English very challenging for me, so I just want to improve my English. I just want to improving my English now, however maybe in the long term I want.
Giám khảo
Why do you learn English?
Thí sinh
Because English is a universal language in the world, if you can master of English, you can get a lot of opportunities and you can talk with the following fans. So I think I find it useful and interesting.
What languages can you speak?
Điểm: 70.0Gợi ý: 回答时应避免语法错误,如"I also interested"应为"I am also interested"。句子结构应更自然流畅,避免重复表达,如"currently practice English now"。建议使用连接词使表达更连贯。
Ví dụ: Chinese is my native language, and I am currently learning English because I find it very useful for traveling and work opportunities. Additionally, I am interested in learning Japanese in the future.
Do you think it is difficult to learn a new language?
Điểm: 65.0Gợi ý: 回答中存在语法错误,如"I fight"应为"I find","memorize vocabularies"应为"memorize vocabulary"。句子应更简洁,避免不必要的词汇。建议使用连接词如"because"或"since"来增强逻辑性。
Ví dụ: I find learning a new language very difficult, especially as you get older, because you need to spend more time memorizing vocabulary and understanding grammar rules. However, with consistent practice, success is achievable.
Will you learn other languages in the future?
Điểm: 60.0Gợi ý: 回答中有语法错误,如"I just want to improving"应为"I just want to improve"。表达应更简洁,避免重复。建议使用连接词如"but"或"however"来连接句子,使表达更自然。
Ví dụ: No, I don't have plans to learn another language soon because I find English challenging and want to focus on improving it. However, I might consider learning another language in the long term.
Why do you learn English?
Điểm: 55.0Gợi ý: 回答中存在语法错误,如"master of English"应为"master English","talk with the following fans"表达不清。建议回答时结构更清晰,避免模糊表达,使用具体例子支持观点。
Ví dụ: I learn English because it is a universal language that opens many opportunities for work and travel. Mastering English allows me to communicate with people from different countries, which I find both useful and interesting.
× I currently practice English now.
✓ I am currently practicing English.
这里需要使用现在进行时态来表达正在进行的动作,动词practice应使用动名词形式practicing。
× I also interested in learning Japanese in the future.
✓ I am also interested in learning Japanese in the future.
句子缺少系动词am,导致主语和谓语不匹配。应加上am使句子完整。
× I fight learning a new language very difficult, especially as you get older.
✓ I find learning a new language very difficult, especially as you get older.
动词fight用错,应为find,表示“觉得”。
× You need to spend more time and after to memorize vocabularies and understand grammar rules.
✓ You need to spend more time memorizing vocabulary and understanding grammar rules.
动词spend后应接动名词形式,且词汇vocabularies应为不可数名词vocabulary。
× I just want to improving my English now, however maybe in the long term I want.
✓ I just want to improve my English now; however, maybe in the long term I will want to.
动词want后接动词不定式improve,不能用动名词improving。句子后半部分缺少谓语动词,需补充。
× Because English is a universal language in the world, if you can master of English, you can get a lot of opportunities and you can talk with the following fans.
✓ Because English is a universal language in the world, if you can master English, you can get a lot of opportunities and you can talk with the following fans.
动词master后不需要介词of,直接接宾语。