Part 1
Giám khảo
What languages can you speak?
Thí sinh
I can speak English, Chinese and a little Cantonese.
Giám khảo
Do you think it is difficult to learn a new language?
Thí sinh
Yes, I believe it's hard for non-native speakers to learn a brand new language because they are not familiar with the grammar and wording principles of the language.
Giám khảo
Will you learn other languages in the future?
Thí sinh
Yes, I plan to learn Spanish and French in the future because I'm really interested in their culture and I want to learn it starting from learning the language.
Giám khảo
Why do you learn English?
Thí sinh
I learn English because I believe English is a wide accepted language and I can use English to communicate with people all over the world.
What languages can you speak?
Điểm: 85.0Gợi ý: 回答简洁明了,但可以稍微丰富细节,使表达更自然流畅。建议在回答中加入一些连接词,说明你掌握这些语言的程度或使用场合。
Ví dụ: I can speak English and Chinese fluently, and I also know a little Cantonese, which I use when visiting my relatives in Hong Kong.
Do you think it is difficult to learn a new language?
Điểm: 80.0Gợi ý: 回答内容较好,但句子结构稍显单一,且“wording principles”用词不够准确。建议使用更地道的表达,并用连接词丰富句子。
Ví dụ: Yes, I think learning a new language is challenging for non-native speakers because they are often unfamiliar with the grammar rules and vocabulary, which makes it harder to communicate effectively.
Will you learn other languages in the future?
Điểm: 75.0Gợi ý: 回答中存在语法错误,如“learn it starting from learning the language”表达不清晰。建议调整句子结构,使用连接词使表达更连贯。
Ví dụ: Yes, I plan to learn Spanish and French in the future because I am really interested in their cultures, and I believe learning the languages is the best way to understand them better.
Why do you learn English?
Điểm: 78.0Gợi ý: 回答中“wide accepted language”表达不准确,应为“widely accepted language”。建议使用更准确的词汇,并丰富细节使回答更自然。
Ví dụ: I learn English because it is a widely accepted language, and it allows me to communicate with people from different countries around the world.
× I plan to learn Spanish and French in the future because I'm really interested in their culture and I want to learn it starting from learning the language.
✓ I plan to learn Spanish and French in the future because I'm really interested in their culture and I want to start by learning the language.
句子中“learn it starting from learning the language”结构不自然,动词搭配错误。应使用“start by learning the language”表达“从学习语言开始”,更符合英语习惯。
× I learn English because I believe English is a wide accepted language and I can use English to communicate with people all over the world.
✓ I learn English because I believe English is a widely accepted language and I can use English to communicate with people all over the world.
“wide accepted”中“wide”用作形容词修饰“accepted”不正确,应使用副词“widely”修饰过去分词“accepted”,表示“被广泛接受的”。