Part 1
Giám khảo
What languages can you speak?
Thí sinh
I can speak Mandarin, English, and Japanese. Mandarin is my mother tongue and I have been studying English since elementary school. Because it's a international language, it helps me communicate with people all around the world. Additionally, I have been learning Japanese for about 5 years since I am interested in Japanese culture and anime.
Giám khảo
Do you think it is difficult to learn a new language?
Thí sinh
Yes, I think it's quite difficult to learn new languages. You need to memorize a large amount of vocabulary and understand the grammar rules and also you need to.
Giám khảo
Will you learn other languages in the future?
Thí sinh
Well, I'm not sure what I will do in the future, but for now I want to focus on improving my English and Japanese because they are more useful in my career and daily life. I don't have enough time to learn new languages at the moment.
Giám khảo
Why do you learn English?
Thí sinh
Initially, I learned English just because it was one of my school subjects, so I need to study it to get good grades. However, nowadays I realize that English is much more than just school subjects, it's a practical tool that helps me.
What languages can you speak?
Điểm: 85.0Gợi ý: 回答内容较丰富且结构清晰,但存在语法错误(如“it's a international language”应为“it's an international language”),且部分句子略显冗长。建议注意冠词使用和句子简洁性,避免重复表达。
Ví dụ: I can speak Mandarin, English, and Japanese. Mandarin is my mother tongue. I have studied English since elementary school because it is an international language that helps me communicate worldwide. Additionally, I have been learning Japanese for about five years due to my interest in Japanese culture and anime.
Do you think it is difficult to learn a new language?
Điểm: 50.0Gợi ý: 回答不完整,句子中断,缺少连贯性和具体细节。建议完整表达观点,使用连接词丰富内容,并提供具体原因或例子。
Ví dụ: Yes, I think learning a new language is quite difficult because you need to memorize a large amount of vocabulary and understand complex grammar rules. Moreover, practicing speaking and listening skills requires a lot of time and effort.
Will you learn other languages in the future?
Điểm: 80.0Gợi ý: 回答较自然且内容具体,但开头“I'm not sure what I will do in the future”略显模糊,建议直接回应问题并使用更多连接词使表达更流畅。
Ví dụ: I am not sure if I will learn other languages in the future. However, currently I want to focus on improving my English and Japanese because they are more useful for my career and daily life. Therefore, I don't have enough time to start learning new languages now.
Why do you learn English?
Điểm: 75.0Gợi ý: 回答内容较好,但最后一句不完整,缺少具体说明。建议补充说明英语如何帮助自己,并使用连接词使表达更连贯。
Ví dụ: Initially, I learned English because it was a school subject and I needed to get good grades. However, nowadays I realize that English is much more than just a subject; it is a practical tool that helps me communicate with people worldwide and access more information.
× Because it's a international language, it helps me communicate with people all around the world.
✓ Because it's an international language, it helps me communicate with people all around the world.
这里的“a”应该用“an”,因为“international”以元音音素开头,冠词使用错误属于冠词错误(22)。
× Yes, I think it's quite difficult to learn new languages. You need to memorize a large amount of vocabulary and understand the grammar rules and also you need to.
✓ Yes, I think it's quite difficult to learn new languages. You need to memorize a large amount of vocabulary, understand the grammar rules, and also practice regularly.
原句末尾不完整,缺少谓语部分,导致句子结构错误。需要补充完整句子,使表达完整。
× Initially, I learned English just because it was one of my school subjects, so I need to study it to get good grades.
✓ Initially, I learned English just because it was one of my school subjects, so I needed to study it to get good grades.
前半句使用过去时态,后半句“need”应与之保持时态一致,使用过去时“needed”,否则时态不一致。属于时态错误(5)。